Date: 05/01/23 12:11 am Title: Hearing
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 09/12/12 06:49 pm Title: Hearing
very nice indeed :3
Date: 12/31/09 11:53 pm Title: Hearing
eh. I like it but the transition from Tom singing to them grinding felt a bit rushed. Like, shouldn't there be a little more questioning on Tom's part?
But, I guess that's why it's PWP.
Don't get me wrong though, because I did like this a lot! :)
xoxox ~Lyn-Z
Author's Response: I know what you mean, it did feel a bit rushed I probably did need a little more more transition. Meh it's already written, I probably won't go back and fix it. But thanks for the review.
Date: 09/28/09 11:23 pm Title: Hearing
damn wow i need a cold cold bath now lol XD
Author's Response: Why thank you! Glad you though it was hot.
Date: 06/12/09 11:24 pm Title: Hearing
The summary didn't interest me too much, but I know that if it's written by you, I'll like it. And I did. Origional smutty little oneshot. Great job.
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you! What an amazing complement! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks!
Date: 06/12/09 10:28 pm Title: Hearing
sexi
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 06/12/09 07:08 am Title: Hearing
Oh, that was nice :). I loved the idea about voice fetishism. There's rarely any unusual fetishisms, so you made this one kind of unique. You used flashbacks well and that part about boys' first words was way too cute! It kind of summaries and explains everything between them in general, that unique relationship. Yep, it was so nice. Good job!
And BTW... I would like Tom to sing me too, I wouldn't mind :D
Author's Response: *grins* Thank you! I really liked how this one turned out! I really liked the boys' first word flash back as well! Thank you so very much for your lovely review! ;) I'd like Tom to sing to me too!
Date: 06/11/09 09:19 pm Title: Hearing
omg, love it, there's something magical about the concept of it being his voice.
Author's Response: *grins* Thanks Hekki! Well I do have one for each sense. I'm trying to make them all magical! Thanks sweets!
Date: 06/11/09 09:09 pm Title: Hearing
That was interesting and sweet; I liked it.
^_^
Author's Response: *smiles* Thank you! Very sweet of you to say!
Date: 06/11/09 08:56 pm Title: Hearing
Wow... I "Awwwwww'd" at the flashback as babies. That is just soooo cute!!!
Their mother told the story of their first words to anyone who would sit still for more than two minutes. Bill said his first word first: ‘Mama,’ and said it non stop for three straight days.
Tom learned his first word on the third day after Bill began to speak: ‘Bill.” The moment the word dribbled from his little lips, Bill stopped and stared wide-eyed at Tom.
After they learned to speak more than just the one word, Bill wouldn’t shut up for anyone but Tom. The only time to get Bill to stop talking was to get Tom to start. It had been that way ever since.
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Author's Response: awh! Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed that part! It was fun to write.
Date: 06/11/09 07:58 pm Title: Hearing
Gah, sexy, it was, really. Now I am gonna need either a cold shower or a nice trip to my even nicer neighbour's house to see my even nicer than nicer neighbour....kidding, but yeah, it was sexy, and cute, and generally perfect.
Author's Response: Wow thanks for the ego boost! What an amazing complement! Sexy, cute, and generally perfect?! *blushes* Thank you!
Date: 06/11/09 06:52 pm Title: Hearing
Awesome! Glad you worked through the part that was being difficult. Hope to read more soon. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for all of your help!
Date: 06/11/09 06:48 pm Title: Hearing
ohhhoho. Wooowww lol. That was awesome lol
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you for the "wow" Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 06/11/09 06:46 pm Title: Hearing
aah i loved it (:
hah i wonder if that's why Tom doesnt sing in real life? :p
xx
Author's Response: *cracks up* That's an awesome hypothesis! Thanks for the review! I'm glad you love it!