Date: 08/02/09 01:40 am Title: Chapter Twelve: Getting Back To Good OR How Bill Is Trying To Offer An Olive Branch
AWWW the twins are definitely back on track now, it makes my heart melt. I love it so much. :D
Author's Response: I keep saying they're getting there. Slowly but surely. Thank you so much!
Date: 08/02/09 12:11 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fucked OR How Bill Lets The Cat Out Of The Bag
Wow. Am speechless. Caught on the edge of my seat waiting for more...
Author's Response: Well, speechless is good...I think. There's a new update now. =)
Date: 08/01/09 09:27 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fucked OR How Bill Lets The Cat Out Of The Bag
Seriously, amazing!! I think you need to post more often though!! Haha. I hate waiting for the next chapter.
Author's Response: More often? I update two or three times a week as it is. lmao And speaking of, another chapter is up now. =)
Date: 08/01/09 07:11 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Secrets OR How Tom Can Get His Way By Just Saying Please
Damn, Tom! Why did you agreed???
lol sorry, I really got carried away there. XD First of, It was completely adorable how Bill fell for Tom when just seeing his eyes and his 'Please', and Tom pretty much knows everything and he's certainly sure about things huh, when he blurted out that he knows what Bill did, I was like *facepalm* then *SQUUUUUUEEEEEE*. The last part made me melt, cause it made me think Tom really wants to win Bill back but I guess Bill's still confused.
...OMG gonna read next chapieee.
Author's Response: haha That was definitely a facepalm moment. I agree. But it's still progress, which is always a good thing when it comes to them. I think they're both just scared...and totally in that awkward what-do-we-do-now phase. =)
Date: 08/01/09 06:47 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Bittersweet Revenge OR How Bill Does Things He Really Shouldn't Do
Bill's revenge and how Tom reacts to it REALLY cracked me. XD The twin thing they're doing here makes me smile. I so LOVE this.
and ooooh bad bad Bill. XD
Author's Response: Very naughty Bill. I'm glad you enjoyed. lol
Date: 08/01/09 06:06 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fucked OR How Bill Lets The Cat Out Of The Bag
OMFG!
O_O
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She should'veminded her own f*cking business lol!she asked for it.What will she do now?Send Tom away quickly during the night?
Bill was so defeated.*pets him*
It's still frustrating me a bit not to know anything about Tom lol.He does nothing all day?Or only look for a job?I'm not too comfortable with the idea of him not going to school.But that's just me I guess.I'm sure you'll explain in your chapters later everything about him,why he left his dad,why he's not in school and stuff.
I found it strange,after reading this all that not ONCE did Bill wonder wether Tom went to school or not.Why didn't Tom go to school.He wanted to know about Tom,sure but he only had little information and then after that he didn't even thought about what was Tom doing while he's at school or something.I think of Tom as a poor homeless guy sometimes lol.Life's misery at his young shoulders.
I feel sorry for him because,sometimes,even Bill seems to not worry about him.I mean,he's probably sleeping on that couch feeling really alone and helpless.I am being dramatic again -.- Is their mother thinking so much that he's only staying temporarily,that's why she didn't even bother to arrange something more comfortable for him?He's going to sleep on the couch for the rest of the year?O_O Nice.
Anyway,sorry for the little rant.Thank you for this fic.The nonsense only means that I realy think about this story and that I try to understand ;)
Author's Response: LoL What WILL she do now? That's a good question. Hmmmm. Trust me, it's frustrating Bill to not know anything about Tom, either. But we will learn more in the coming chapters. In reality, Tom hasn't really been there that long. A few weeks, really. And technically, Bill gave Tom his room/bed until Tom stole money for him, so it's Tom's fault he's sleeping on the couch. Things will get situated more when they've all had more time to adjust. Keep reading, and you'll find out more about Tom, I promise.
Date: 08/01/09 05:29 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Love And Hate OR How Tom Is Tired Of The Hot And Cold
Ha!Tom sure said it straight without any form of diplomacy lol.I love that.
And Isn't Tom going to school?He's jobless and a teenager who doesn't go to school.What does he do o_O.He should play his guitar in a public place then haha!!Just kidding.
I really like the way you write those characters.I rolled my eyes at Andreas.He left Bill behind
Author's Response: lol Nope, Tom isn't going to school. He is a jobless teenager (but he's trying!) who doesn't go to school. Fo sho. Thank you so much. Andi seems to be not so much of a favorite in this one. But that's okay. lol
Date: 08/01/09 05:21 pm Title: Chapter Six: Rocky Ground OR How Bill Can't Handle The Truth
I like this chapter, the twins are having progress! well, almost. XD
Author's Response: They're getting there, they're getting there. =)
Date: 08/01/09 04:36 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fucked OR How Bill Lets The Cat Out Of The Bag
is this the last chapter? PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!!!! such a good story =]
Author's Response: Certainly not the last chapter of the story. There are going to be just under 30, I believe. =)
Date: 08/01/09 04:17 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fucked OR How Bill Lets The Cat Out Of The Bag
I just read the all story and i have to tell u...I LOVED IT!
So...please keep updating as fast as possible!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I definitely plan to keep updating. There's a new update now, as a matter of fact. =)
Date: 08/01/09 03:34 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Bittersweet Revenge OR How Bill Does Things He Really Shouldn't Do
BWAHAHAHAHA!! that was both hilarious and kind of hot!lol
I guess I was wrong about the gf and the father fucking lol.I have wild imagination sometimes :p
Author's Response: hahaha You and I both. ;)
Date: 08/01/09 03:28 pm Title: Chapter Two: Family OR How Bill Let Tom Go
AWWW, Tom leaving the second time is heartbreaking! D:
I love this story!
Author's Response: Awww, it's very heartbreaking. Thank you!
Date: 08/01/09 03:27 pm Title: Prologue: Kiss It Better OR How Bill Can Get Anything From Tom
Don't slow yourself down!! keep going!! xD ^^
Author's Response: hahaha I'm trying to finish writing the whole story before I go crazy posting! (I only have five more chapters to go!)
Date: 08/01/09 02:52 pm Title: Chapter Five: Sex OR All The Ways Tom Drives Bill Crazy
This chapter was awesome O_O
I understand why this fic is featured.Bill's feelings are so realistic lol.I found myself in that situation often lol.And you write Tom's character so well too.Very realistic and I really felt for him since the moment his stepped in the house.Their mother was indeed infuriating.I understand Bill's frustration so much lol.He's not in the right and Tom's words are so right and he can't say anything about it because objectively,there's nothing to be infuriated about with all the things he's angry about lol,but it's driving him nuts.This is so real life like.I wonder if the girlfriend fucked the father?Tom's gf i mean.LOL
I just stopped on this chapter to let you know that you have a new reader who enjoys immensely this fiction and that she's impressed with how realistic this is.O_O
Author's Response: Whoa. Not going to say what part of this made me say "whoa" but...you definitely hit a button there. lol I am SO glad that I have a new reader who enjoys immensely this fiction. And glad you're impressed without realistic it is. Honestly, that's one of the highest compliments ever. So thank you so very, very much.
Date: 08/01/09 02:17 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fucked OR How Bill Lets The Cat Out Of The Bag
You write so well, that I actually felt like Bill... My hands are shaking and I feel tears coming... That was awesome!
Simone, take that! Ha!
Author's Response: Holy crap what a compliment. lol Thank you sooooo very, very much. We'll see how Simone reacts later.
Date: 08/01/09 01:43 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fucked OR How Bill Lets The Cat Out Of The Bag
There wasn't a single chapter that didn't make my heart drop or my chest grow cold. I've seen this one in the recently updated section, but I've never been able to hold enough interest to get past the first paragraph (don't ask me why, maybe I just tried reading it on off days) the summery seemed to say something different to what I was going to find inside. If that makes any sense. but it doesn't really matter, I got past the first paragraph, and after the first chapter, I just love this. I'm not sure how I couldn't read it.
So yea, happy being featured week/day/something. Glad you were so I could read the story, and well, love it. There are ups and downs and I love that, and well, now I just want to keep reading to know what happens, because I think I'm officially hooked n_n So right now, my heart is cold, thinking of what will happen. For some reason I don't think it will be all happy happy from here, but then I could be wrong, and everything could be drawing to a close. :) Idk, just happy that I'm going to try and be along for whatever ride you take the boys on n_n
Author's Response: There have been stories for me that I just could not get past the first page, no matter how good everyone was telling me it was, and how much they were insisting I read it. And then when I finally buckled down and read it, I realized they were right. So I totally understand that. I'm glad you made it through the first paragraph. (And personally, the prologue isn't exactly my favorite part of the story. lol) Things aren't wrapping up quite yet. I'm almost finished writing the story, and there are going to be just about 30 chapters so, we've still got a ways to go. I'm so excited that you're on board now. =)
Date: 08/01/09 11:38 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fucked OR How Bill Lets The Cat Out Of The Bag
Zomg I luv this fic!
Please keep updating as fast as possible!
Author's Response: Zomg! I love you!rnrnI will certainly keep updating. I'm trying to slow myself down a bit, actually, but it's really hard. lol
Date: 08/01/09 06:16 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fucked OR How Bill Lets The Cat Out Of The Bag
Damn...O_O
Author's Response: Heee! Yeah. That was the intended effect.
Date: 08/01/09 01:22 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fucked OR How Bill Lets The Cat Out Of The Bag
Oh, Bill =/
This chapter made ME upset :(
Author's Response: D'awwww. Hugs and cookies?
Date: 08/01/09 12:12 am Title: Prologue: Kiss It Better OR How Bill Can Get Anything From Tom
O_O omg haha. i had seen this on the featured section so i decided to read it and i was NOT expecting this haha. its really good and well written, cant wait to find out what happens haha.
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad it was not what you were expecting in a good way. =) More definitely coming shortly.