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Reviewer: cChompinAa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 07:24 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Team Bill And Tom OR How Bill Thinks It's Too Late For Superman

okay so...tom didn't just kill his mom, did he?

Author's Response: My lips are zipped. There'll be another chapter posted this week, though. =)

Reviewer: ichbin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 07:16 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Team Bill And Tom OR How Bill Thinks It's Too Late For Superman

:O things just got a lot more complicated huh? good stuff.

Author's Response: Oh yeah, they did. Thanks so much. =)

Reviewer: soul Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 05:09 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Team Bill And Tom OR How Bill Thinks It's Too Late For Superman

well i`d be lying if I said i`m not happy sheà out of the picture but hopefully she`s not that bad, so bill doesn`y feel guilty...well luv your story...and update soon.

Author's Response: Hopefully she's okay for Bill's sake. I'll take it. =) Thanks so much.

Reviewer: Beautifullyxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 04:47 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Team Bill And Tom OR How Bill Thinks It's Too Late For Superman

You like cliffhangers don't you?
I hate it!
No, I'm kidding, but it's annoying ;P

Anyway, nice story
I love how you built it up
how it wasn't a big happy reunion
but really uncomfortable and weird
It makes it more realistic

So update soon ;D

Author's Response: Cliffhangers are nice tools! Thank you so much for reading and commenting. So awesome. Another chapter coming soon.

Reviewer: AngelsLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 04:29 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Team Bill And Tom OR How Bill Thinks It's Too Late For Superman

I'm so pleased you got featured. This is an amazing story, and one of the best Bill/Tom fics I've ever read in my life.

Author's Response: My goodness. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: doorzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 03:41 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Team Bill And Tom OR How Bill Thinks It's Too Late For Superman

it is not nice to end like that nope not at all soo to make up for not being nice you must update really really soon..... like in 24 hours.... indeed

Author's Response: I promise...I'll make up for the being not nice in the coming chapters. You have my word.

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 02:58 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Team Bill And Tom OR How Bill Thinks It's Too Late For Superman

O.O

You...wouldn't. Would you? Did Tom...? Would Tom...? No, he wouldn't. Would he?

Ohhh woman. You are officially the Queen of Cliffhangers. Holy shit.

Author's Response: hahaha I totally want a crown! I...can't say. Would He??? But another chapter is coming sooooon.

Reviewer: Kariiin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 02:51 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Team Bill And Tom OR How Bill Thinks It's Too Late For Superman

Ouch! :O

Is she okay? XD I wanna know too, even though I don't like her too much...

Anyways. LOVED IT! :)

Author's Response: Awww...everyone is hating on Simone. That makes me sad. lol THANK YOU...more soon.

Reviewer: lovemusicart Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 02:37 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Team Bill And Tom OR How Bill Thinks It's Too Late For Superman

Did Tom kill his mom?

Author's Response: X-O Wait and see, darlin, wait and see.

Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 02:33 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Team Bill And Tom OR How Bill Thinks It's Too Late For Superman

nooooo
u can't end it here
post more now please

ohhhh i love Tom
he's so nice to Bill
i really understand Simone but i love twin moments so i want more of those and i hope for smth nasty *dirty thoughts*

Author's Response: I'm sorry I ended it there. lol There will be more soon. Here's to hoping for something nasty. haha XD

Reviewer: TokioHotelLover4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 02:18 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Team Bill And Tom OR How Bill Thinks It's Too Late For Superman

I feel bad when people and families are fighting and then something bad happens, like life threatening... :(

But the plot thickens..can't wait till I see this as an update in my inbox XD

This is getting really good!

Author's Response: Tragedy always seems to strike at the worst time (like there's a good time lol). So...yeah. There will be an update either tomorrow or the day after.

Reviewer: eiri Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 02:18 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Team Bill And Tom OR How Bill Thinks It's Too Late For Superman

*stabs the author*
jk :) just kidding.
I hope Simone is okay.Like Bill said,she's just being a mom after all.She can't say :"Go ahead my sons,fuck each other!" lol
Oh my,I'm still holding the knife on one hand but for now,I give you a teddy bear and pet you(How reassuring is that?)Don't worry you are safe! *g*
I hope you won't kill her.But this incident will sure make those thick headed twins,especially the dark haired one, THINK.It's so sad.They didn't mean to hurt her,but their actions were hurting her and turned her cold.And years later,they hurt her with their words,and this time,it was more intentional but nothing drastic.
Thanks for the chappie! :D

Author's Response: Nein! No stabbing allowed! Yeah, her giving them the go ahead like that would just be weird...and totally unrealistic. Please put the knife down, and I'll update very soon. And then we can see how they react to what's happening. Eee, excited.

Reviewer: Cashicute12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 02:14 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Team Bill And Tom OR How Bill Thinks It's Too Late For Superman

Damn, the end is really thrilling! Somehow I pity to what happened to Simone.

Aaaaah all the Bill- keeps-pushing-Tom-away is making me crazy! XD but I uderstand it's hard for Billy. Tom please win Bill back nau plz.

When I see that Tom is like totally okay with what Bill revealed but he keeps telling he's disgusting, I was like 'see Bill? Tom said your not dsgusting!' and how Tom tried to embrace him, I'm in AWE.

Go team Bill and Tom!!!
This chapter is more than I expected, we want mooooore! Tysm hon. :)

Author's Response: Yes! A Simone supporter! Hooray! lol Sorry. *ahem* It's pretty hard for both of them, I think. But, still, they're making a little bit of progress....even if they kept going backwards, too. More coming soon.

Reviewer: Yuri Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 01:52 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Team Bill And Tom OR How Bill Thinks It's Too Late For Superman

O.o
What happened to their mom??
MOre!

Author's Response: Oi vey! We'll find out soon. lol

Author's Response: Oi vey! We'll find out soon. lol

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 01:12 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Team Bill And Tom OR How Bill Thinks It's Too Late For Superman

krap=[ plzplzplzplz update soooon thx soso much=] plz hurry and update=]=]

Author's Response: Eeee, okay. In the next day or so, I'll update.

Reviewer: Annalas Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 01:11 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Team Bill And Tom OR How Bill Thinks It's Too Late For Superman

*jawdrop* Unexpected cliffie! Love this chapter!

Tom's going to have to find a way to get through to Bill...somehow.

Author's Response: Yeah, I think Tom stepping up is the only way Bill is going to budge. =\

Reviewer: Turner Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 12:55 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Team Bill And Tom OR How Bill Thinks It's Too Late For Superman

I knw it's evil, but I kinda hope she's not okay. :/ Simply because she's so damn mean. But then part of me wants her to be okay. hm I duno.
Anyway, thanks for updating.
xx

Author's Response: =((((( You're welcome...I'll update again, soon.

Reviewer: Becca_Bubblegum_TH Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 12:34 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Team Bill And Tom OR How Bill Thinks It's Too Late For Superman

noooooo omg! not a cliffhanger!!! please update as fast as possible & ill love you forever! :P i hope shes ohkay!

Author's Response: lol I know, I know. The dreaded cliffhanger. I'll post again in the next day or so, I swear.

Reviewer: bbb Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 12:32 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Team Bill And Tom OR How Bill Thinks It's Too Late For Superman

ahhhh!! the suspense!! I wonder what happened!!

oh and congrats for the story being featured. =D

Author's Response: Ahhhh You'll find out soon enough. =) Thank you so much...I seriously don't know how stuff like that happens to me. lol

Reviewer: Felicia08 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/03/09 11:51 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Team Bill And Tom OR How Bill Thinks It's Too Late For Superman

Why did you stop there?!?!?!
I want more now! NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW!

Author's Response: Eeeeek! I had to stop there so I could kill everyone with anticipation. haha Not, really, but that seems to be what's happening. More soon, I promise.

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