Date: 08/06/09 07:06 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
Poooor pooor Simone. ;( I didn't hate her cause I know she's just being a mother. Glad she's ok. :)
Jealous Tom is jealous XD and eeeeeek at the end :3,I hope when Bill wakes up he'll feel a lot better of course because of Tom. :D
Very good chapter hon, yay moaar!
Author's Response: Gah, I'm so glad you don't hate her. Seriously, because I don't want anyone to necessarily hate her. And yeah, there was a little bit of jealousy there, I think. Which is kind of adorable, I think. Thank you so much, more coming soon.
Date: 08/06/09 06:11 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
oh. my. thats soo sad but i love the end! awww :3
Author's Response: awwww =) It's sad, but things will start to look up.
Date: 08/06/09 06:02 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
Thank you so much for the hope! I love angst but I must have some little bit of hope, you know? Something to hold on to. So thank you for that.
This was a really great chapter. People deal with fear in different ways and how you wrote Bill's emotions in the hospital were wonderful. I can just feel Bill's layers being unfolded as we get to see further and further into him. I'm loving your characterization so much. As always, I look forward to more. :D
Author's Response: There is always a need for hope! So...you're welcome. =) I hope you don't hate me before the story is over, though. lol Thank you, thank you, thank you for all of your comments and everything. I mean, seriously. All of the comments are nice, but yours never fail to make me smile.
Date: 08/06/09 05:18 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
Aw man, poor boys. They just can't catch a break!
Author's Response: I know. =( *pets them*
Date: 08/06/09 05:04 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
I don't know what to say other than this is completely and utterly a beautiful piece of art. Outstanding.
Author's Response: My goodness. I'm speechless. Thank you.
Date: 08/06/09 04:49 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
yayyyy good chapter! haha at the end of the last chapter i thought that Tom had hit their mom or something and that was 'the accident' but im happy thats NOT what happened. :D
Author's Response: You weren't the only one that thought that. =( I could never make Tom do that, I don't think. Thanks a lot!
Date: 08/06/09 03:39 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
Awwwwww, boys :)
I'm glad that Simone will be okay, but even happier that Bill and Tom seem to be taking steps into the right direction =] ♥ this!
Author's Response: ♥ you!
Date: 08/06/09 03:18 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
aww thatz cute=] when do they make sweet sweet love lolz...pl update soon thx=]
Author's Response: *zips lips* Another update soon.
Date: 08/06/09 02:35 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
Aww, good chapter! (:
Finally they're not fighting (that much xD)but acting more like brothers. That's the right thing to do! Yup :D
Udpate soon ^^
Author's Response: And brothers fight, so it's okay, right? =) Will do!
Date: 08/06/09 02:27 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
awe.more.now.
Author's Response: more.soon.promise.
Date: 08/06/09 02:13 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
Awww! *smiles softly*
I hope that everything is going to be okay now. :)
Author's Response: Here's to hoping. =) *crosses fingers*
Date: 08/06/09 01:50 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
awww they are just too cute together ! and danke a lot for the regular updates !!
Author's Response: You are welcome! Thanks for commenting each time. I love it.
Date: 08/06/09 01:11 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
No magic kiss of comfort? lol ;) This whole chapter is love ^_^
Poor Simone, but...she'll be okay, so I'm not too worried lol
Author's Response: Not quite yet. =) Thank you so much.
Date: 08/06/09 01:10 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
Aww. *Cuddles the twins.* :)
Author's Response: *joins the cuddling*
Date: 08/06/09 01:10 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
So cute that last scene! I love how slow you're taking this relationship. It makes reading it very easy because it's so realitic. You're a talented writer.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I knew I couldn't just have them jump right back into it, so they're taking baby steps. =)
Date: 08/06/09 12:49 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
awww *grins* that was angsty and cute and worrisome but i still enjoyed it ^^
Author's Response: Awwww...thank you so much!
Date: 08/06/09 11:40 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
awwwwwwwww ^.^
thats all i have to say lol
Author's Response: Thanks. <3
Date: 08/06/09 11:31 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
Aaaaaaaaaw... That's cute ^^ I loved it!! And Tomi's getting jealous xD I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: He is looking a little green, isn't he? haha <3 Thank you so much...another chapter, another day.
Date: 08/06/09 11:25 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
I feel so sorry for the twins, but at least they've realised that they have each other. Providing Simone is alright, it seems like the accident could be a nudge in the right direction for them :3 And congrats on the feature, by the way! This fic is totally deserving of it :)
Author's Response: They're getting there, atleast. =) And thank you soooo much!
Date: 08/06/09 11:24 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
Aww, this was just beautiful, I'm all teary eyed. And I'm glad Simone'll be okay!
Author's Response: Awwww *hands you a tissue* I'm glad you're glad, because I'm glad. =)