Date: 08/11/09 05:02 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen: Breakdown OR How Simone Plans For The What-Ifs
OooOoOO!!
The excitement!
I have a feeling that their father is a bad man...
I cAnT wAiT fOr ThE NeXt ChApTeR!
lol i feel like a little teenager being all excited like this. haha
Author's Response: hahaha It cracks me up when you guys get excited like that! Makes me get excited, too. Love it.
Date: 08/11/09 03:57 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen: Breakdown OR How Simone Plans For The What-Ifs
O_O poor simone. shes a bitch a lot of the time but i feel bad for her =[ im glad bill is finally calming down around Tom.
Author's Response:
Date: 08/11/09 03:09 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen: Breakdown OR How Simone Plans For The What-Ifs
D: Another twist? Damn.
But it makes me curious as to why Tom doesn't want to go back so much...
Author's Response: Yeahhhh...what kind of story would it be without yet another damn twist? lol It makes Bill curious, too. ;)
Date: 08/11/09 02:09 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen: Breakdown OR How Simone Plans For The What-Ifs
aww..plz update sooon...tomi needs 2 tell billa wats wrong and y he dont like there daddy's house...plz update sooon thx soso much=]
Author's Response: I know he does. Or he's just going to continue driving Bill crazy, and Crazy!Bill is neer a good idea. =)
Date: 08/11/09 02:03 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen: Breakdown OR How Simone Plans For The What-Ifs
Aw no. that sounds kinda bad. But im glad theyre close again :)
Thanks for updating.
xx
Author's Response: They're getting there, slowly but surely. =) Thanks for reading.
Date: 08/11/09 01:42 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen: Breakdown OR How Simone Plans For The What-Ifs
Oh, I hope she's going to be fine ö I really feel with the twins, let them be happy! Please? *falls on knees and begs*
They seriously need to be happy *nods*
But, anyway, this story is still amazing :D Keep it up!
Author's Response: I want them to be happy, too. Trust me. Thank you so much!
Date: 08/11/09 01:28 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen: Breakdown OR How Simone Plans For The What-Ifs
just in case... just in case.... oh no... I don't want them to go back either. I mean, I'm not 100% sure what all happened when Tom was there, but if Tom doesn't want to go beck, even with Bill, I really don't want them to go back. I liked the talk with the nurse though, on a happier and more light hearted topic, it was cute, and nice, and well, just a lovely thing to put in there n_n rereading the chapter, I don't think it would be right if it wasn't there, or if it was replaced with something else.
This is kind of a random thing, but I was thinking about the first few chapters, and how Tom was very cold, and stole things and all that, but now he isn't... it seems like he might've gotten over everything a little quickly, or something... lol, but then that could just be because of Bill. Which I think it might've been. I think he wants to fix the relationship so badly... know that I think about it. Of course, who wouldn't? Reaction to the kiss on the forehead I thought was so realistic! hehehe, I just found that part adorable n_n
Author's Response: I threw in Nurse Janie to bring in some smiles because I knew things were getting just really angsty and always kind of dark. So, she's like my ray of sunshine. And I like her. ;) I'm glad you approve. That's really not random. And it's hard because in my head I know why Tom went from being kind of a hardass to not being a hardass, I just haven't approached it yet. lol But I'll get there. Anyway, thank you, thank you, thank you so much.
Date: 08/11/09 12:28 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen: Breakdown OR How Simone Plans For The What-Ifs
oh my gosh i love this!!!! UPDATE!
Author's Response: oh my gosh I WILL! lol
Date: 08/11/09 11:36 am Title: Chapter Seventeen: Breakdown OR How Simone Plans For The What-Ifs
Aww good chapter
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 08/11/09 11:11 am Title: Chapter Seventeen: Breakdown OR How Simone Plans For The What-Ifs
See? Magic kiss of comfort ^_^
I wonder what REALLY happened between Tom & his dad...
Author's Response: I know, it's crazy. Sometimes you guys are so good at predicting things that it scares me. lol We will find out what happened, eventually. =)
Date: 08/11/09 11:04 am Title: Chapter Seventeen: Breakdown OR How Simone Plans For The What-Ifs
wah, the drama, the drama. i still love the story though, and i'm glad to say that i was fangirling and pimping this from BEFORE it was featured although congrats about that, AND....just drama. i do hope they don't end up back with their father because Tom'll kill him if he so much as LOOKS at Bill wrong xD
Author's Response: Ahhhh, I know, so much drama. But we're only halfway there, so there's sure to be more. *sigh* But I just got he BEST visual of their dad looking at Bill crosseyed and Tom going apeshit. So great. So, so great. And I appreciate SO MUCH you fangirling and pimpingthis before it was featured. Seriously! I love it.
Date: 08/11/09 10:48 am Title: Chapter Seventeen: Breakdown OR How Simone Plans For The What-Ifs
I loved it Ö And damn(positive), the twins are on the good track :) I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: It seems like they're on the right track, for sure. I'm excited, and I'll definitely be continuing soon. =)
Date: 08/11/09 10:40 am Title: Chapter Seventeen: Breakdown OR How Simone Plans For The What-Ifs
OH god... I have a feeling that Tom's father is abusing him or something... Can't really remember if you wrote that or not... Awww, Bill is so sweeeet! I lvoed it!
Author's Response: We'll find out what happened between Tom and his Dad eventually. Bill = <3 Thanks, doll. =)
Date: 08/11/09 10:40 am Title: Chapter Seventeen: Breakdown OR How Simone Plans For The What-Ifs
GIVE ME MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: *hides* I'll give you more soon, I promise. =)
Date: 08/08/09 01:21 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
i love it ...cnt wait for more...please dont make us wait! plz plz plz
Author's Response: Just another couple days, I promise. =)
Date: 08/08/09 12:43 pm Title: Chapter Two: Family OR How Bill Let Tom Go
great story development. it really makes me corious how this is going to develop.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. We start getting deeper into this stuff in a chapter or two. =)
Date: 08/08/09 09:25 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
so cute! update more soon!
Author's Response: Okay, I will. =)
Date: 08/07/09 09:13 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
omg it took me a while to finish the whole thing, but it was very well written! I love it! In fact I kept talking back to the moniter as I read the chapters and my mom kept asking me, "Who are you talking to?!" lol
Author's Response: awww Haha I've read stories before where I talk back to the characters as though they can hear me. So awesome, we are. lol I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 08/07/09 03:29 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
Awww! That was so sweeeeet!
Author's Response: Awwwww thank you!
Date: 08/06/09 08:12 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
poor simone. ending was cute
Author's Response: Thank you so much!