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Reviewer: Jordison Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 11:51 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces

Yay! They kissed finally, and this chapter was so cute! I can't wait 'til the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: Next one comin' up soon. =D

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 10:31 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces

Yaaaaaay!! ♥ A kiss! =] I'm so happy now, haha.

Author's Response: I'm glad! Thank you.

Reviewer: Katanasai Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 10:06 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces

:O Finally! These silly boys needed to get their heads on straight! I can't wait to see what the next episode holds. :D

Author's Response: They certainly do need to get their heads on straight. They're driving all of us crazy. lol

Reviewer: Anony Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 09:49 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces

-deep sigh- I just read this entire story in one sitting. It is just AMAZING. I absolutely love it. It's heartwrenching and sweet at the same time. It's definitely one of my favorite stories on this site. :D I can't wait for more. *tracks/favorites*

Author's Response: That's a lot of reading in one sitting. O.o Thank you so much, though. I'm glad you like it. =)

Reviewer: lovesbeaux9189 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 09:12 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces

oh. my. effin. god.
this chapter was, without a doubt, mind blowing. jeeze... i loved it. i cant even think of words right now, ill come write a coherent review later... *melts*

Author's Response: Awwwww. Thank you. lol

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 08:42 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces

WOOOT!!!

THEY KISSED!



Author's Response: Eeeeeee!

Reviewer: gustavlover41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 08:06 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces

love it.

Author's Response: love you.

Reviewer: doorzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 07:36 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces

omg ur going to kill me, you are killing me. please please please update asap i cant handle the wait

Author's Response: Don't die. I'm thinking Thursday for another update. =)

Reviewer: Annalas Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 06:32 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces

YESSSSS!!!!

>.> ...Er, I meant really good chapter, of course >.> Yes. That's what I meant. I love how they're FINALLY getting back together again. Thank you :)

Author's Response: They're seriously trying. haha Thank you!

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 05:23 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces

Ohhh my god, thank goodness. And I'm so scared to be happy about it! Still... *sigh*

The last line is just gorgeous. :)

Author's Response: Don't be scared. lol It'll be okay, I swear. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Riven Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 05:16 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces

oh... b29; ! wow b29;

Author's Response: Hee!

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 05:03 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces

Oh my GOD...I don't even know what to say! I waited for this moment since the beginning and now it's here and I'm just...speechless! How does that even happen?! But I'm so happy to see them be brothers again, all before the kiss and it's so beautiful to see it again and I bet that inside them, they totally missed it,

Beautiful chapter and I'm so happy to read this. I know it's halfway in, but I don't care! I just worry about the throwing more angst in part, but I know you will do what the story calls for and say what you want to say. And I will love it! <3333



Author's Response: Thank you so, so, so much! There's more angst, yes, but it's nothing terrible, I promise. And it will all work out in the end. Thanks for the faith. =)

Reviewer: SimplyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 04:53 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces

O.O ....

................O.O.........

....um .. FINALLY!!!!! ..... YAY .... -happydance-

Author's Response: Yesh, FINALLY! =)))))

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 04:51 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces

...........Wauw, that was great!!!!! I loved it!!! I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^

Author's Response: Awww, how could I not continue soon, with so many awesome reviews??

Reviewer: Kaulitzth1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 04:42 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces

*melts*

I think spaghetti is the official food fight food. So messy and fun. :)



Author's Response: Yes! My brother and I were involved in an epic foodfight when we were younger against the neighbors....kind of cool, and involved a bunch of things, including spaghetti. Ended up getting the cops called on us, but it was still pretty awesomely fun! lol

Reviewer: Kariiin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 04:39 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces

My God. *_*

The end was ... I can't breathe.... Oh God.


That was amazing. I can't wait for more now!

Author's Response: Please breathe. I'll post more later this week. =)

Reviewer: tokiMey8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 04:07 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces

♥♥♥ THEY FINALLY KISSED!!!! WHOOPEEEE!!!!!

Author's Response: They did!!! haha

Reviewer: eiri Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 04:00 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces

Oh thanks a lot for the update!
I liked the chapter,but your friend is right,the shift from the angst we had from the start to this fluffy stuff is real quick lol.The transition is a bit rapid.But now,if you go back suddenly to very angsty again,it wouldn't make sense,since things are obviously evoluting otherwise in the fiction.Whatever,I still enjoy this and they are really cute(but act a bit girly XD).Thanks again =)

Author's Response: Ohhhh.....there's always room for more angst. ;) Right now it's pretty balanced out, but it does pick up later. But it's not in a "oh my God, I hate you!" "Okay, let's have sex now" kind of way. But yes, they can both act a bit girly.

Reviewer: Remy Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 03:46 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces

They kissed!!! I feel like dancing around now. :DDDD

Author's Response: *dances with you* =D!!!

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/09 03:34 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces

aww thatz so cute..but im almost crying at how cute it is=]=]plz update sooon..FINALLY they kiss=]=]

Author's Response: No crying allowed! =( I didn't mean to make you cry, but I'm glad you liked it. lol Updating later this week.

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