Date: 08/20/09 02:31 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heaven and Hell OR How Tom Has His Own Bag O’ Secrets
i must know what is in the letters please tell me you wrote the next chap aready and it will be up sooon like now
Author's Response: hahaha Yes, it's written. But I can't update for a few days. I got stuck on the last four chapters, and it's driving me nuts! lol
Date: 08/20/09 12:36 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heaven and Hell OR How Tom Has His Own Bag O’ Secrets
Finally finding some details on Tom .. its sad that he tried to kill himself :( Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: I know it is. *sigh* But at least it didn't work, right? haha More coming next week.
Date: 08/20/09 12:18 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heaven and Hell OR How Tom Has His Own Bag O’ Secrets
*GIGGLES* only Bill could read something he wasn't supposed to with a bambi smile.:).
Author's Response: hahaha We'll see how it goooooes. ;)
Date: 08/20/09 11:45 am Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heaven and Hell OR How Tom Has His Own Bag O’ Secrets
wrote a long review, and then the window closed....*pouts* anyway...it went something along the lines of...
I loved this chapter!!!! Hehehe, it had like everything and it was wonderfully angsty (YEA!!!!) and then it got happier (YEA!!!) and there was brother bonding (YEA!!!) and we learned Tom's secret (YEA!!!!) which was wonderfully angsty/depressing (YEA!!!!!!!!) so I was very happy with this chapter n_n. Hehe, last sentence, so true I think, I mean, it's what younger siblings do... :)
Tom declined, inadvertently admitting that he did, in fact, keep them.
Hehehe, Tom....So yeah...when you said that Bill was good at getting Tom to talk about what he didn't want to talk about, well I think it goes the same way too :) I mean, Tom was getting Bill to talk and look at his feelings, and get all twisted around and confused and it was great :D
I also thought that the reason Tom was in a hospital because he had a baby on the way. I mean, adding his ex-girlfriend calling, just seemed to feed up to it. So I was thinking, "oh my god, the BABY!!! Tom isn't there for the baby..." but then it turned out not to be a baby, so I'm happy n_n but you know, a baby would've probably made it so much more angsty... ;) lol, no, I like the suicidal thing better. Tom, what was he thinking? Bill smacking him...priceless, I loved it XD
But wow, I liked this chapter... I really want to read the letters now...like before I was like, oh, letters, right...but now I'm like, OMG!!! but you know... lovely chapter, brought smiles, and you know, lovely angsty feelings :)
Author's Response: My goodness, I love long reviews so, so, so much. We learned ONE of Tom's secrets. ;) He has many, many, many. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, though. There's so much about Tom that I want to write, but I'm having a hard time squeezing it all in. But you're right...a baby probably would make it more angsty. Damn it, why didn't I think of that? haha Love that you love Bill smacking him (I could totally see it as I wrote it). And....I'm glad you like it. Can't say I know exactly what to do with the letters at the moment. haha Keep reading though! There's lots of stuff coming up.
Date: 08/20/09 11:25 am Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heaven and Hell OR How Tom Has His Own Bag O’ Secrets
Wouldn't it be funny if the reason Tom fought with his dad was because Casi was actually his stepmom or something? XD
And we ALL know that SOMEHOW Bill will read those letters.
Author's Response: Wow...yeah, that'd be...that'd be really awkward. lol
Date: 08/20/09 11:17 am Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heaven and Hell OR How Tom Has His Own Bag O’ Secrets
Awwwww.
I went from being sad to smiling ;) Bill is so devious, ha. He'll get his hands on those letters, I'm sure =]
Loved it! :D
Author's Response: hehehe Tom can't deny him for too long....can he? Thank you!
Date: 08/20/09 10:34 am Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heaven and Hell OR How Tom Has His Own Bag O’ Secrets
:D This story is so awesome. I love it. -huggles- Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 08/20/09 10:33 am Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heaven and Hell OR How Tom Has His Own Bag O’ Secrets
I like it!!!! update more please!
Author's Response: lol I will, I will.
Date: 08/20/09 10:29 am Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heaven and Hell OR How Tom Has His Own Bag O’ Secrets
Ooooh, I want to read the letters! Are you going to let us? Please, please, please?!
Author's Response: Ahhhh....the letters, the letters. I don't know what to do with the letters. lol ;)
Date: 08/20/09 12:28 am Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces
Lovely kiss. I just caught up with about 10 chapters of this story, and I'm loving it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying it. =)
Date: 08/19/09 05:52 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces
i like the way the story has progressed, and i'm really glad that you update pretty frequently.
i can't wait for the next chap :3
Author's Response: Thank you! Updating frequently isn't always my thing, but it helps that I have most of it already written. And I get lots of good feedback that keeps me going. =)
Date: 08/18/09 02:02 pm Title: Prologue: Kiss It Better OR How Bill Can Get Anything From Tom
I just realized that I Haven't told you how much I love this.. So it wouldn't be repeating myself by telling you this:
This story is... One of the best storeis over! I'm going to hit the favorite button right now and it'll never leave that place again! You write so very well, I feel everything the twins feel and I just want them to be happy! (Happy together of course x3)
And as I just said; I want to now what's going to happen. Update soon! ;)
Author's Response: Thank you soooo very much. I'll be updating in a few minutes.
Date: 08/18/09 01:54 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces
If I told you how amazingly good this story is, I'd just be repeating myself since I've said it many times before. But I can't help it, there's nothing else to say. Amazing!
I love it even more now than I did before; this chapter was insanly cute! :3 The ending left me speachless! Omg they should be together, pleeease? I wanna now what's gonna happen. Now! xD
Author's Response: They should be together, I know. I'm working on it. hahaha And I don't mind you repeating yourself. Ever. Not at all. =)
Date: 08/17/09 09:06 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces
It's gettin hot in here, somebody open a window! Loved it.
Author's Response: hahahaha Love you. ♥
Date: 08/17/09 01:39 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces
Awwwwww I so love this chapter!
It's like, after four years of separation it started with a kiss, again. That is freaking sweet. You don't know how much I'm happy right now, I'm so glad with the flow of this story *flails* I am looking forward with the next chapter! More power to you bb! :D
Author's Response: Eeeee! I'm so excited that you caught that. *cough* I'm sooooo glad you're enjoying it so much. I definitely plan on updating later this week.
Date: 08/17/09 09:52 am Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces
oh my, this chapter is Love...with the capital letter and all the fluffy hearts in between :)did that even make sense? xD anyways i just loved it. more soon, please
chiara
Author's Response: Of course it made sense. Thank you so much.
Date: 08/17/09 07:45 am Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces
~squeals with joy~ the last bit of this chapter was incredible! i got butterflies xD your an amazing writer, everything is written perfectly, keep it up!! :D update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so, so, so very much. I'm definitely going to update soon.
Date: 08/17/09 07:43 am Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces
*Dies inside.*
I love you.
Author's Response: I love you. =)
Date: 08/17/09 01:46 am Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces
Whew. I just started reading this today bby, and I haven't left the computer once (my eyes could possibly start to bleed if I don't leave the screen soon..) & When I noticed that this is only the halfway point I was soooo happy because that means there is sooo much more to come :) Thanks for sticking with this story hun, I'm really excited to see how this all pans out :)
Author's Response: Wow. You guys that are reading it all in one day...kudos to you. I don't think I could do it. haha There is definitely a lot more to come. I'm glad everyone is enjoying it...it makes it easier for me to press on. =)
Date: 08/16/09 11:58 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces
happyhappyhappy chapter ending ^_^ yayyyy hahaha XD but i know somehow its going to get fucked up -_- as long as its ok in the end then i'm good!!!! haha. good chapter =]
Author's Response: hahaha I think you're starting to catch on to my style. Fuck things up, and then put it all back together again. Thank you so much.