Date: 12/06/09 09:32 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: The Twin Thing OR How No One Can Ever Understand
“I miss the Bill I knew and fell in love with.” - *frowns* I'm not sure that that Bill was such a good guy?
I don't think that kissing Andreas will make things better, in fact I think it's going to make things a hell of a lot worse.
Andreas wants Bill to fuck him? I thought that Bill was the bottom not ever the top (in your fic, I like it when he's either way)?
Author's Response: I like it either way with them, and in their case, it goes either way. =)
Date: 12/06/09 08:58 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Space OR How Tom Is Being A Hypocrite
*sigh* their dad too?! OMG it's just getting messier and messier!!!
They could get emancipated, they'd have to get jobs and prove that they were able to take care of themselves but it means that they wouldn't have to deal with their parents. Also they are going to be 18 pretty soon, real grown ups.
Author's Response: They COULD get emancipated. Or they could just runaway together and live happily ever after. =)
Date: 12/06/09 08:23 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Substitute OR How Bill Wants Some Answers
Bill is such a girl -_-
Author's Response: He most certainly is. =D
Date: 12/06/09 05:35 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heaven and Hell OR How Tom Has His Own Bag O’ Secrets
“I tried to kill myself a few months after I went to Berlin.” -NICE!
I can't wait until we get to read the important letters Tom didn't send Bill.
Author's Response: LOL Everyone fixates on the letters.
Date: 12/06/09 01:54 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Princess Bill OR How Fighting Helps Mend The Pieces
The food fight was very funny. I love that Bill attacted for a second time because Tom didn't apologize.
They finally kissed! It's about time!
Author's Response: =D! Kisses are awesome. <3
Date: 12/06/09 12:27 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen: Breakdown OR How Simone Plans For The What-Ifs
I really don't like their mother, she's so anoying she needs to just die so I don't have to deal with her anymore. Bill needs to stop feeling gulty for stuff he can't control too!
so freaking angsty!
Author's Response: Awwwwww Poor Simone. lol And yeah, yeah. Lots of angst. I'm sorry! lol
Date: 12/06/09 12:14 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Bad Dream OR How Bill Needs Tom And Tom Needs Bill
Awe you didn't kill their mum, LAME! Good to see that Bill and Tom are progressing, it's uneven, sometimes moving backward but lately more often moving forward.
Author's Response: It's like two steps forward, oen step back. As long long as they get there, that's all that matters. =)
Date: 12/06/09 01:18 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Team Bill And Tom OR How Bill Thinks It's Too Late For Superman
Awe sweet Tomi taking care of pathetic Bill in the night.
I can only hope that you killed off their mom! God is she anoying!
Author's Response: LOL You are not the only one with that feeling towards her.
Date: 12/06/09 12:56 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fucked OR How Bill Lets The Cat Out Of The Bag
“Ah, fuck, Tooom.” – *gasp* eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
OMG these characters are so angsty! In that in the warnings? I don’t remember.
“That’s why I’m saying my brother’s name while my boyfriend sucks me off.” - *gasp* OMG BILL!!!!! Is this really something that we need to share?
Author's Response: Ummmm....I can't remember if I put angst in the warnings. I think I put it as the genre though. haha And yes, Bill apparently felt the need to share that with his family. *embarrased for him*
Date: 12/06/09 12:14 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Love And Hate OR How Tom Is Tired Of The Hot And Cold
OMG that is one of the first times I’ve been fooled into believing a dream. Awesome!
Love me or hate me, I love it!
Author's Response: LOL I'm glad it tricked you? Actually, no question about it. I'm glad it tricked you. =p
Date: 12/05/09 11:32 pm Title: Chapter Twelve: Getting Back To Good OR How Bill Is Trying To Offer An Olive Branch
I’m glad that Bill and Tom talked and connected, really connected.
Tom seems nonchalant about the incest bit but I think it’s cause he wants more of it.
The tree house? Uh-oh it’s going to get naughty isn’t it?
Author's Response: hahaha I think he wants more o it, too. ;)
Date: 12/05/09 10:16 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: Fight OR How Bill Remembers What It's Like
Woops cut myself off...The fight sounded pretty good, rather realistic. I like that Tom came back to save him. But what a mess. At least no one got arrested.
Author's Response: I'm glad it sounded realistic! It was one of the things I had in my head when I first started writing, so I really wanted to get it right. =)
Date: 12/05/09 10:15 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: Fight OR How Bill Remembers What It's Like
Wow Georg turned out to be a pretty good guy, that's nice. Nice set up for the fight. Sounds pretty good!
Author's Response: Georg is pretty awesome in this story, I think. I'd like a friend like him, anyway. =)
Date: 12/05/09 09:11 pm Title: Chapter Ten: Flirting OR How Bill Finds A Way To Escape
Andreas and Tom are going to be sorry they let Bill go because Bill is going to make both of them sorry.
Author's Response: Awww...I never thought of it that way, but you're right.
Date: 12/05/09 08:56 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Stress OR How Andreas Has A Fool Proof Plan
Good a party might be a good thing or might be a horrible mess!
Author's Response: >:)
Date: 12/05/09 08:26 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Secrets OR How Tom Can Get His Way By Just Saying Please
I like that Tom acknowledges the past but with every thing that he's saying he gives the impression that he IS over it.
“Because if you were, you never would have listened in on me having phone sex with my ex-girlfriend.” - Fucking A!!!!!!
Author's Response: hahaha Tom is so right, and I love that about him. <3
Date: 12/05/09 07:34 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Bittersweet Revenge OR How Bill Does Things He Really Shouldn't Do
Using Andreas is not a nice thing to do to him…even if he is a tool!
How embarrassing to use someone and to have everyone involved call you out on it.
I guessed it was Tom talking to Casi, makes more since then Tom trying to sweet talk his brother. But it’s nice to know that that is what Bill really wants, for Tom to love him like he used to.
Naughty boy listening to your brother and his phone sex. Naughty Bill.
Author's Response: lol Shame on Bill, for real!
Date: 12/05/09 06:48 pm Title: Chapter Six: Rocky Ground OR How Bill Can't Handle The Truth
Wow a real conversation. It’s about time boys! Too bad it didn’t end so well. *shrugs* I guess it’s a start at least better then nothing.
Author's Response: It was very much need, yes? =)
Date: 12/05/09 06:26 pm Title: Chapter Five: Sex OR All The Ways Tom Drives Bill Crazy
*Giggles* I love that everything that Tom says Bill takes to heart. It’s the power that someone has over you. Small but powerful! - you did this bit very well.
LOL the sexual tension must be getting to Bill very much that he needs to attack Andi. lol
I feel bad for Bill and Tom so much has changed and they are both trapped in the past and in the images and their inablitiy to connect with one another.
Author's Response: lol I kind of sort of felt bad for Andi in a way in this chapter. But only a little bit. ;)
Date: 12/05/09 04:48 pm Title: Chapter Four: Insecurities OR How Bill Not-So-Secretly Cares What Tom Thinks
This chapter is just elaborating on what has happened. I can't wait for the new twist which I can smell up a head!
Author's Response: The twists are coming!