Date: 08/23/09 11:43 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Substitute OR How Bill Wants Some Answers
i like how tense the situation(s) is(are), its not just oh happy day lets go get married, its wonderful. great writing, love love love your work. three thumbs up :)
Author's Response: Three thumbs up! Amazing! Thanks lol
Date: 08/23/09 11:16 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Substitute OR How Bill Wants Some Answers
I dont want this story to be over!
=O
but i cant wait till it is!
lol
Author's Response: Dude, I know the feeling. =\ Crazy, mixed up feelings. lol
Date: 08/23/09 10:58 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Substitute OR How Bill Wants Some Answers
Yay! I heart this story!!!!
Author's Response: And I heart you!
Date: 08/23/09 09:43 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Substitute OR How Bill Wants Some Answers
I didn't expected this very early update! omg ILU
Oh man, that was so sweet! I like the Bill with full of questions hehe, he really had squished Tom out for the right answers. And did I mention I died on the inside when Tom answered “She was a substitute for you.” ? I bet Bill had too. lol
...and I haven't forgotten about the letters, woman! I am excited to see it. ;D keep it up girl
Author's Response: haha Well, I have too much time on my hands, obviously. Keeping it up, fo sho!
Date: 08/23/09 08:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Substitute OR How Bill Wants Some Answers
omg! i love, love, love YOU! you made me by posting this chapter. it was so full of different and opposite kinds of emotions, all of them so amazingly written. the mood switched frequently in this chapter and i loved it so much cause i could FEEL it. there were some lines which were so beautiful i kept reading them over and over again (and i will again after i’m done reviewing xD). what i liked most was the conversation about casi, it was cute and deep in more than one way.
god, i’m in loooove with this story *turns to the story and declares ”i love you” bending on one knee* (sorry about that, just my weirdness coming out sometimes) :)
i’m still waiting to see the letters tom wrote...when is he gonna show them to bill? *pouts*
much love, chiara
Author's Response: I'd say you could marry it, but it's already taken. ;) The letters, the letters...ohhhh, the letters. =)
Date: 08/23/09 07:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Substitute OR How Bill Wants Some Answers
Love, love, love you too XD xx
Author's Response: ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 08/23/09 07:11 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Substitute OR How Bill Wants Some Answers
Very nice.
Author's Response: Thanks
Date: 08/23/09 07:06 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Substitute OR How Bill Wants Some Answers
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i really liked this chapter.
like if this was facebook and i was allowed to 'like' it.
i'd click it. lmao.
Author's Response: hahaha This cracked me up. Thank you.
Date: 08/23/09 06:53 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Substitute OR How Bill Wants Some Answers
love it, love it, love it..... epic awesomeness.... Please update more soon!!!!!
Author's Response: epic awesomeness..lol ♥
Date: 08/23/09 06:04 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Substitute OR How Bill Wants Some Answers
Awww... ^_^
So Casi has leukemia or cancer? You mentioned both in this chapter...Or does she have both? XD
Author's Response: Lukemia is a type of cancer. It's a cancer in the blood. =)
Date: 08/23/09 05:43 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Substitute OR How Bill Wants Some Answers
AND THE BOY SPEAKS FINALLY!
I KNEW I had your number, Tom. Way to stun your twin into silence! BUT, it's good to get some things clear and out of the way, no?
LOVE IT and definitely can't wait for the next part now!
Author's Response: He had to sooner or later, you know. =) Thanks so much...more coming later this week.
Date: 08/23/09 05:16 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Substitute OR How Bill Wants Some Answers
so there is only one more chapter??? if so then pleaseeeeeeeeeeee add the letters and what happened back in berlin in there. i dont care if its REALLYYYYY long and takes an hour to read haha i want to knowwwwww. great chapter
Author's Response: Oh, goodness, no. There are actually about 10 left...I just already have them all written out and ready to go (after I get them edited). Plenty more stuffs to fit in somewhere.
Date: 08/23/09 04:43 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Substitute OR How Bill Wants Some Answers
*hug* this chapter made me wanna squeal made me wanna cry, just like everything. arggg. i need more xD
Author's Response: *doublehug*! You'll get more soon, I promsie! =)
Date: 08/23/09 04:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Substitute OR How Bill Wants Some Answers
my god that was intense ! i know i say it every time but this story is sooo good, cant wait to see how you're gonna end it even if i dont want it to come to an end ... ;)
Author's Response: Aww..well, we still have a ways to go before it's over.
Date: 08/23/09 04:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Substitute OR How Bill Wants Some Answers
W.O.W!
WOW I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: No? haha I think that's a good thing. =D
Date: 08/23/09 04:11 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Substitute OR How Bill Wants Some Answers
I really like how you make them say it, how Bill keeps at Tom until Tom says exactly what needs to be said and what Bill needs to hear, whether he knows it or not. Their level of communication is wonderful, not just for twins, but for anyone.
I wasn't expecting the ex to have cancer, and like Bill, I was waiting to see what could possibly be bad about her, what sort of flaws she might have. Bill's so insecure, he definitely needed to hear that there was a reason for them to be off and on. Revealing that Casi was a substitute was not unexpected, but that she knew it was.
Very interesting chapter; I enjoyed their communication and Tom finally letting more out about his life. Wonderful, and as always, I look forward to more. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. =D
Date: 08/23/09 03:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Substitute OR How Bill Wants Some Answers
AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Author's Response: =D
Date: 08/23/09 03:16 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Substitute OR How Bill Wants Some Answers
aww..billa and tomi so sad.there so cute..make them more lovey dovey=]=] update soon plz i luvz thiz=] thx=]
Author's Response: They're adorable. =)
Date: 08/23/09 02:26 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Substitute OR How Bill Wants Some Answers
omg, that was so sweet :D no, seriously, i was so confused, and lost, and trying to see where you were going with it, and then when I got there, it was like, OMG!!! perfect n_n
“Tell me something bad about her.”
I loved that line so much. Then like how you had the reasoning behind it, it was just, wow. :) I love how even though this isn't pure angst, and it isn't full blown smut, I still feel so much reading it, emotions just keep going up and down, and it's so much fun :D I like how she knows too. For some reason, because she knows, makes her idk, more likeable and that she seems to understand that she and Tom aren't going to be together forever. Lovely job on her. And here I was thinking she was some stuck up cheerleader bitch :) amazing job hun n_n
Author's Response: Awww...haha she's definitely not some stuck up cheerleader bitch, I can promise you that. =) Sorry you were confused! But I have all this backstory in my head, and I'm trying to let it out little by little so we can get the full picture, but not all at once, you know? I like Casi, I think...and I don't know that I want to. haha
Date: 08/23/09 02:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Substitute OR How Bill Wants Some Answers
Awwwwwwww. this was just too perfect. i literally did a little fangirl squeal when i saw you updated. i dropped everything to read it, and i was not disappointed! i love this story so much! the characters are just so tangible in a way that makes me wish i could really hug them. the emotions are real enough it's heartbreaking and heartwarming at the same time. xxAli
Author's Response: Gah, thank you so much. I love reading your comments. It makes me happy to hear things like the characters are tangible and the emotions are real, because that's really what I try to do. So it's good that you get that...and I'm so happy. =) Love you!