Date: 09/08/09 12:17 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four: Too Much OR How Bill Doesn’t Like The Explanation He’s Offered
I'm GUESSING that that person he can't hurt is Tom. Just a guess, though XD
And I keep imagining Tom as a dog now. Stay, Tom, STAY! XD Can't help it lol.
Author's Response: awww Haha, I've had that visual of one of them (Bill/Tom/Andi) at least once a piece throughout the story.
Date: 09/08/09 12:05 pm Title: Prologue: Kiss It Better OR How Bill Can Get Anything From Tom
ahahaha, you're the best! o/ now I'm gonna read... again... ;D
Author's Response: =D!
Date: 09/08/09 11:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four: Too Much OR How Bill Doesn’t Like The Explanation He’s Offered
Awwwwwwwwwww -hugglesBill- Geo's really awesome in this. I like him! -hugglesGeoaswell- He's not going to do something stupid and turn around and hurt them is he? 0.0 I hope not. Somehow I always seem to find the worst scenarios of what could happen next, lol. Well, TTYL! Can't wait for an update! -huggles- xxAli
Author's Response: Awwww -BillGeosandwichedhuggle- I lurve them all. And you!
Date: 09/07/09 03:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Falling OR Going Back To Their Roots
omg..=]=] plz update sooon..there so cute=]=]
Author's Response: Updated. =)
Date: 09/06/09 11:13 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Falling OR Going Back To Their Roots
More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More! oh, please and thank you. Almost forgot my manners >.
Author's Response: More up now. lol You're welcome. =)
Date: 09/06/09 05:25 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Falling OR Going Back To Their Roots
>.>
i loved it.
like every inch of it, the way Tom loves every inch of Bill's body.
this chaopter was unf and i totes bwahahaha'd at the part with Casi and Jorg....why? because my friend rach and iw ere discussing the possibility of Casi being Tom's stepmom, OR of Jorg wanting to marry her and I was like NO, I can't see Casi wanting Jorg and then it comes to light that Jorg DID try something, yet Casi was like NONONO xD
Author's Response: The way Tom loves every inch of Bill's body. That just...ugh, grinning like an idiot over here. I love you so much. And I love that you were discussing it. I don't know...this whole comment made me grin. lol ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 09/05/09 05:20 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Falling OR Going Back To Their Roots
FINALLY! Tom said all of the answers to Bill's questions. and FINALLY they're back togethaaar, omg eeeeeeep ilu. *-*
I totes love this chapter, im so melting.
Author's Response: Awwww...don't melt too much. Glad you're enjoying it though.
Date: 09/05/09 04:43 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Falling OR Going Back To Their Roots
lmfao nice chapter end notes XD its like *totally in a different world BAM REALITY!* haha. yea so YAY WE FINALLY FOUND OUT WHAT HAPPENED WITH THEIR DAD! i KNEW it was going to be something like that haha i had a feeling. WHAT A CREEPER!!!! haha
Author's Response: hahaha Sometimes I don't know what to say, but I feel like I need to say something. What a creeper is right! I don't like him much.
Date: 09/05/09 12:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Falling OR Going Back To Their Roots
ah!!!! I didn't realize that I had missed a chapter, so I didn't know what they were talking with Andi, and fucking, and I was just thinking to start was "OMG!!! That is such an amazing random, sick, twisted, lovely chapter starter!!!" Then I found there was another chapter, and I just took out random, and I love the chapter starter, if I didn’t say that. Just that first sentence, I absolutely love it. Well the rest was good too, but first sentence, mwahahaha!!! Bill and Tom and Tom and Bill and Casi and Dad and Andi, and it's all looped together and threaded and confusing, and amazing XD
I don't know what I think about Casi and that whole situation. Like, I like the idea I think, but to be honest, I think I was expecting a bigger boom (not sure really what...) It makes sense, but it's confusing, and seems to be missing something to me...or maybe, I'm just puzzling over things to much... But I like how you had Bill's reaction to Casi, trying to puzzle her out (I'm trying that to). I want to hate her, for cheating on Tom, and he seems broken about it, and for having Tom get in a fight with their dad, but I can't. Bah...
But oh oh oh, Tom and Bill they were so awesome at the end, lovely and hot darlin' you do a lovely job :) The whole laughing thing got me smiling and giggling, it's like contagious, and I didn't even have to be there to hear them laugh, just think about it, and the way you wrote it all n_n hehehe, I like you beta, she makes you write more, and that means more to read XD give her a hug from me? Lol, again lovely job :D
Author's Response: haha That would be a cool way to just randomly start up a chapter...or a story, even. Hmmmm. =D It is all very twisted and looped together and pretty screwed up, if you ask me. I think a lot of people were expecting a bigger boom. I don't know....I didn't want to make it something terrible because terrible things aren't as easy to get past, and I wanted them, eventually, to be able to be together, you know? I will certainly give my beta a hug. lol She tells me things I really don't want to hear, but I think she's usually right. But anyway....thank you so much for reading, and for your thoughts. =)
Date: 09/05/09 10:50 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Falling OR Going Back To Their Roots
I loved it!! I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Thanks! Updated today. =)
Date: 09/05/09 08:47 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Falling OR Going Back To Their Roots
oh gosh.
thanks for that
this chapter needed an happy ending ^^
this fic is amazing...really
thanks
Author's Response: You are welcome. lol =D I'm glad you like it!
Date: 09/05/09 07:29 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Falling OR Going Back To Their Roots
OH THANK GOD!
Jesus, that tension builder was making ME want them to do something about it. It was always THERE, this coiled, tight need and want but never doing anything about it.
I want to hate Casi too, but she's obviously helped Tom in more ways that we still haven't heard of and I'm still holding my judgement on that.
I was about to tell you in my review why I thought Tom and Jorg fell out, since I was starting to get a nagging feeling that Jorg was saying shit about BILL, not Tom himself. We already know he doesn't give two shits what his dad thinks about him, but he would fucking give two shits when it's things about Bill.
It's this, ingrained instinct to protect Bill at any possible cost, including his own.
But fuck if this chapter didn't make me want more.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Have I mentioned, lately, how much I love you? lol Seriously. About Casi...yeah, she has helped Tom, but it's okay to hate her. I kind of hate her, but I really like her, too. So I'm sort of torn. lol But you're right about Tom wanting to protect Bill at whatever cost, from anyone. And especially being so far away, I think that was kind of his way of continuing to protect him...in a different way, maybe. But gah, more is certainly coming. I can't believe I have less than ten chapters left. O.o =((( AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. Love you.
Date: 09/05/09 02:20 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Falling OR Going Back To Their Roots
CALLED IT! >.> Okay, so I guess she wasn't his stepmom, but she and Jorg DID have something going on XD
And Ima gonna worship your smut now XD Because it's awesome and...yeah. Awesomeness XD
Author's Response: You guys are really good detectives. ;) Worship my smut? I don't know if it's worthy of worship, but I appreciate it, anyway. =D
Date: 09/04/09 11:13 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Falling OR Going Back To Their Roots
This was just beautiful! XD
Hah and thanks for updating today, Its my Best Friend's Birthday, and this is the only present she got. lol along with the automatisch video.
*bad friend* =o
Author's Response: My best friend and I always give each other gifts (birthday/Christmas), like four or five months late. haha So don't feel bad.
Date: 09/04/09 10:45 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Falling OR Going Back To Their Roots
O.o
they're doing it!! O.o
Awesome... great chapi... update soon.
Author's Response: Yayness!!! lol
Date: 09/04/09 10:38 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Falling OR Going Back To Their Roots
today is my bday and this is an awsome bday gift indeed
Author's Response: Happy (now belated) birthday!
Date: 09/04/09 09:56 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Falling OR Going Back To Their Roots
Woah. That was woah.
I can't even.
Wow.
It's about damn time though.
Author's Response: Woah. =D It is about damn time.
Date: 09/04/09 09:47 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Falling OR Going Back To Their Roots
Damnnn, woman! Now that's a hell of an ending to a chapter.
I'm so glad they talked. Man, they needed to, so badly. I loved their hysterical laughter and what came of it. This was really a great chapter. :D
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. =D
Date: 09/04/09 08:39 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Falling OR Going Back To Their Roots
Wow that was so not how I expected this chapter to end, but I gotta say, I like it WAAAAAY better than what I pictured. :D
I can't wait to read more! :]
Author's Response: Yeah? Glad you liked it. =)
Date: 09/04/09 08:14 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Falling OR Going Back To Their Roots
*air punches* POINTS TO ME FOR BEING RIGHT ABOUT JORG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YUS.
Author's Response: Dude, seriously. Sometimes you guys are so close that it's a little scary. lol