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Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 08:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind

omfg i hate u///lolz make it better plz=[=[=[=[=[

Author's Response: *hides from the tomatoes*

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 07:52 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind

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i....*growls* i can't kill you cuz then i won't get another chapter....

so just fix it!!!

Author's Response: I...that's true. lol Don't kill me or you'll never get to read the end! I'll fix it as best as I can, I swear it. =)

Reviewer: tokiMey8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 07:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind

I'm kinda sad that in the two chapters, there was no more twincesty goodness, but the angst was nice and I really did not expect Tom, of all people, to say that Bill should be with Andi. Update more soon please!

Author's Response: Sorry, they're still working on getting back to normal. They always take a couple steps forward and then another one back. =(

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 07:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind

awe.
I'm going to cry!
they had CUM so FAR!

Author's Response: Don't cry!

Reviewer: JumbieLuv Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 06:44 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind

YES I DO HATE YOU!!! ERG!!! Stupid Tomi your supposed to say no Bill I love you and were going to have kinky buttsex so dump Andi and let's go!!!! That's what was supposed to happen but of course I know it can't erg

Bleh on your shoes

Author's Response: No! Not my shoes! haha I love you

Reviewer: tokioemma19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 06:31 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind

No!

Author's Response: I know. =\ lol

Reviewer: PurpleSkittlez Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 06:06 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind

I don't hate you, but then again, I don't like the way you ended the chapter. -_- ^^ :D :(

Author's Response: I'm sorry. =( I'll make it better.

Reviewer: silentstrider Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 05:44 pm Title: Chapter Two: Family OR How Bill Let Tom Go

nice

Author's Response: thanks lol

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 05:23 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind

I think Tom is still watching out for Bill, no matter if it's his own heart he's hurting and breaking.

Brb, gonna cry in my little corner now... *sniffles, cries*

 

I can't say it surprises me, him telling Bill this. In all honesty, the least amount of distress for Bill would be if he chose to stay with Andreas.

Choosing Tom means hiding, pretending, lying, and many other things that would just not let them be in peace.

Being with Andreas is safe, normal, expected. Nothing to hide there.

 

It utterly wrenches my heart though. :(

 



Author's Response: Tom is always watching out for Bill. It's what he does. You got the idea, perfectly, though. It would be so much easier to just stay with Andi. For sure, for sure. Love you!

Reviewer: lovesbeaux9189 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 05:21 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind

*gasp* no! *tear* thats like, heartbreaking. i just felt my heart break a little bit for bill... why??? *is sad*

Author's Response: Awwwww. =( I'm sorry.

Reviewer: schlampe Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 04:51 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind

-SLAPS.-
STUPID TOM. >:o
no I'm joking.
I love it. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! *protects Tom*

Reviewer: han Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 04:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind

WHAT????
Nooooooo

Author's Response: =(

Reviewer: winkybelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 03:58 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind

I don't hate.... okay maybe I do, just a little.....


STUPID FUCKER!!! Tom cant tell Bill to do that. It's not fair. Andi's only second rate- there's no way in hell that Bill stay with him!!! FUCK!!! >.<

So didn't see that ending part coming.

Good job, you evil author of doom....

Author's Response: OMG This review is love. Evil author of doom. I love that so much, you don't even know. lol

Reviewer: zombiejelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 02:27 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind

Can't hate you, of course not, you are a brilliant writer. I'm just sad.. *pouts* poor Bill.

Author's Response: Thank you for not hating me. Don't be sad. I'll try to fix it. =)

Reviewer: LittleMrsTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 02:03 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind

Oh my word... Just as I thought this was going somewhere. It's a good job this is fantasticly amazing and extreeemely capturing, ain't it? :D

Author's Response: It's good that it's capturing, otherwise you would all be like "eh, screw this!" Glad you haven't. =)

Reviewer: Stardust27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 01:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind

OHMYGOD! Are you kidding me?!?! Hunny, that was the meanest thing I think I have ever read! Urgh! I missed you posting the last chapter, which almost made me cry it's superawesome sweetness and now THIS? You follow it up with me wanting to STAB Tom? Okay. I'm trying to calm down. I know you will do the right thing. I do. I have complete faith... but srsly, thanks for posting again, made my day :)

Author's Response: My sincerest apologies. Seriously, don't stab Tom just yet. lol Just bear with me. ♥ ♥

Reviewer: Beautifullyxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 01:00 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind

Nooo
Whyyy?
Come onnn

I don't like Andreas
I like Tom
Tom likes Bill
I bet he's just afraid to admit it
KISS HIM!

Author's Response: haha A song just popped into my head. "Yes, you want her. Look at her you know you do. Possible she wants you too. There is only one way to ask her. It don't take a word, not a single word. Go on and kiss de girl." Awww, okay, enough of that. lol Tom likes Bill and Bill likes Tom -- so why is this so hard? lol

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 12:56 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind

oh sad!! Poor bill, and poor tom! I think tom just said that because he wants whats best for bill, he wants him to be able to have normal. but thats not what either of them really want! thanks for the speedy updates! =)

Author's Response: You're welcome for the speey updates! lol Sometimes I'm afraid I update too much.

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 12:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four: Too Much OR How Bill Doesn’t Like The Explanation He’s Offered

I really like Georg's character in this. very patient and wise. =)

Author's Response: Thank you! I love me some Georg.

Reviewer: Annalas Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/09 12:31 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind

...Yes. A lot. Right now. But somehow...I KNEW IT. Like, it's just the most obvious twist at this point.

Maybe Tom wants Bill to stay with Andi, but have Tom on the side? Or maybe it's a cover so they can secretly be together ^_^ Anyway...post more soon?

Author's Response: ....No. Please? lol Yeah, I mean, you can kind of see it coming, but it's an important step, too. Even if it doesn't seem like it right now. lol We'll see Tom's reasoning later, maybe.

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