Date: 09/15/09 11:47 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven: Clarity OR How Plans Sometimes Change Without Warning
I know you're not an evil, evil woman; just a very effective writer (and so good to your readers, updating regularly and posting two chapters!). So effective, in fact, that my little fan-heart has mended and is now rejoicing in all the angst in this chapter. I love how the introductory sentence at the beginning suddenly made sense at the very end of the chapter. And I absolutely love that Bill now hates Tom. Um. I might be the evil one, then, and not you at all. XD Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: I'm really actually a very nice person. It just...may not seem that way. I guess I get out all of my pent up evilness when I write. ;) haha I'm glad that you notice the introductory sentences making sense at the end! That's something I try to use to wrap things up and tie it all together. Even though sometimes I think it doesn't work too well. Ah, oh well. I'm laughing, though, that you love Bill hating Tom. Seriously, how evil is that? Ahhh, love this comment. Thank you so much. ♥
Date: 09/15/09 11:38 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven: Clarity OR How Plans Sometimes Change Without Warning
I was all NOOOO and panicky and scared by the end of this chapter, but the "XD" in the end notes made me laugh so hard my sister was wondering what the hell I'm on. LOL!
AWESOME. My heart's beating like crazy. I can't wait for the next chapter, this is the best fic on this site atm. Though I'm sure I keep saying that... xD
Author's Response: haha I really never know what to put in the end notes. *shrugs* Next chapter soon!
Date: 09/15/09 11:33 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven: Clarity OR How Plans Sometimes Change Without Warning
O.O How can you do this to me? Leaving it there x.x -points to smiley- See? See what you did? I'm dead now. I'm dead and I won't be alive until you make things better with an update. -crosses arms and pouts-
Author's Response: I am SO sorry. lol I will revive you if you promise not to be mad. lol Another update in a couple days, probably. =)
Date: 09/15/09 11:28 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven: Clarity OR How Plans Sometimes Change Without Warning
O.O Wow, things didn't go as planned huh? xD I loved it!! I hope you continue soon!! I soooo pity Tomi now O.O *huggels*
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Things never go as planned. =( I will be continuing soon, for sure. =)
Date: 09/15/09 10:54 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven: Clarity OR How Plans Sometimes Change Without Warning
Oooohhh dear. Oooohhh brother..@__@
This chapter sure is full of angst. Goodness!! Wish they can resolve their issues soon!! Sheez..@___@
Author's Response: They'll get it resolved. =)
Date: 09/12/09 10:23 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind
wait, so they are just dropping everything like that? tom HAD to of been lying when he said he didn't care. right? RIGHT?! honestly, i have read a lot of stores where it is like BIG LOVE OMG LOVEEE wait...NO IM GOING WITH SOMEONE ELSE HAAAA!!! and i even had an author finish their story completely like BAM EVERYONE IS WITH SOMEONE ELSE NOW just to piss people off. please don't do that =[
Author's Response: lol It's certainly not my intention to piss everyone off. =(
Date: 09/12/09 02:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind
omg... *sniffle* no :'( I could never hate you, but...*sniffle* that was so sad :( I love it though!!! XD I mean, I think I can see most of the reasons Tom is saying stay with Andi, and I don't think they're because he doesn't love his brother. At least, I hope they're not, but I haven't been in Tom's head recently!! So I don't know!!! *wails*
hehe...again I missed an update, and even though the beginning of the chapter wasn't as kickass as the last as just a starter thing, but the whole, apologizing thing told me I had missed something, again... lol XD I kind of like reading two chapters at once... :D
I love how when you write Bill, you get so into his head, and all his thoughts work. Like, they're not random, they are there for some reason, and each one seems to have a meaning. I love love love it. Plus, even though we're not in Tom's head, I keep getting to see glimpses of him, and you just to a great job, writing someone, and not being in their head, and yeah n_n You're just awesome like that I think XD so...what happens next?
Author's Response: Gaaaah. Thank you so much. lol I love, love, love this comment. I don't even know what else to say. I'll let you see what happens next in a couple of days. =)
Date: 09/12/09 10:38 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind
filled with hate :(
nooooooot how that was supposed to gooo :(
Author's Response: I know, I know. I'm sorry. =(
Date: 09/11/09 10:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind
NEIn.... god you better update soon ! this is killing me !
Author's Response: =) On Tuesday-ish.
Date: 09/10/09 05:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind
neinnnnnnnnnn! don't stay with andi! more more!
Author's Response: Bill, Bill, Bill. Tom, Tom, Tom. More around Tuesday-ish. =)
Date: 09/10/09 02:15 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind
Noooo *cries*
No no no. Tom actually wants Bill to be with him, but he thinks Bill doesn't want to and, and... That's why! 'Cause they need to be together ö
Omg I love this story so, so, so much. I think it's my absolute favorite of all time! :D Yes, it really is. Your writing is excelent, fantastic and I really feel with Bill and Tom. I want them to be together! (But I think that's obvious at this part xD) So much love to you for writing this and updating all the time :D I just want more all the time, I makes my day when I see it updated ^_^ :D
Author's Response: Thank you! lol
Date: 09/09/09 03:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind
¬¬ IdiotBill ¬¬ He should have told Tom that he still cared more than brotherly about him!! And Tom should either love him more or stop hiding his true feelings ¬¬ I loved it!! I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Idiot Bill? lol I think Tom knows...they're just both being stupid. =( Continuing soon, next week!
Date: 09/09/09 10:25 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind
AHH! You ask for us not to hate you?!?!
This is just cruel man....
=o
Omgosh Tom is insane! I bet he only said that cuz he thinks that's what Bill wants.
Geez man..
Author's Response: I know, it's really, really mean. But we'll figure out eventually wtf Tom is thinking. lol
Date: 09/09/09 03:48 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind
no way
I do hate you
at least right now
YOU CANT DO THAT
for gods sake...
Im upset
>.
Author's Response: Okay, just don't hate me later. I'm sorry you're upset though. =(
Author's Response: Okay, just don't hate me later. I'm sorry you're upset though. =(
Date: 09/09/09 03:08 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind
WHAT?!?!!??!?!?!?!?!? NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
Bill belongs with TOM! TOM!!
What is stupid Tom thinking?!!? Update soon!!!!!!! I need the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Tom is thinkign stupidly, I guess? lol We'll find otu sooner or later.
Date: 09/08/09 11:53 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
o_0 just sayin...
can't hate you.
BUT REALLY??!
O_o
Surely...surely...Tom's going to take that back, right?!!
HE HAS TO!
(and I still heart your story. And you, too, for invoking such emotions outta meh.)
Author's Response: awww I heart you, too. But yeah, really, he said it. =S
Date: 09/08/09 11:41 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind
i wanna cry! never mind i am crying. hurry up and post again. stop making me cry. im made with tom and sad for billa
Author's Response: I'm not trying to make you cry. =( I'm sad for them both, too.
Date: 09/08/09 11:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind
You just broke my little fan-heart. The pieces of it will just go cry in a corner and come out when there's an update to this story. (So please update.)
Author's Response: I'm just an evil, evil woman, I suppose. Breaking everyone's hearts and making them cry. lol Update on its way next week.
Date: 09/08/09 10:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind
Oh no way! No, no. I have a feeling Tom's just thinking things will be less complicated for Bill, less painful for him if Tom just removes himself from the equation. I hope he comes to his senses soon. Bill already told him that he doesn't love Andreas and of course, he just wants some reassurance from Tom. He wants to hear Tom say it and...woman, you're breaking my heart. *sniffles*
Author's Response: Things would be less complicated, but we all know that isn't what either of them want. I'm sorry about the heart breaking thing. I'll make it better. =)
Date: 09/08/09 09:14 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind
that is soooo wrong of u to just leave it like that u must updateeeee the second u can darn it
Author's Response: Sorry. =( Another udpate on Tuesday-ish. =)