Date: 09/25/09 02:35 pm Title: Chapter Thirty: Plastic Stars OR How Tom Is Finally Home
Ughh.. I Absolutely LOVE that they are getting along now!!! I dont think I want this fic to end : ( Cant Wait for the Epilogue..
Author's Response: I sort of don't want it to end, either.
Date: 09/25/09 02:33 pm Title: Chapter Thirty: Plastic Stars OR How Tom Is Finally Home
Really good chapter- but now I'm dying to know what Tom wrote in his other letters!!! I really hope you include a bit of an excerpt later.
Author's Response: Ergghhhh, uh. =)
Date: 09/25/09 02:27 pm Title: Chapter Thirty: Plastic Stars OR How Tom Is Finally Home
-skvishes- Awwwwwwwww so kawaii. It's so sad that it's ending though. It's been a great ride, though! Amazing story through and through. xxAli
Author's Response: I know it's sad. I'm not sure I'll know what to do with myself by this time next week. lol Thank you so much!
Date: 09/25/09 04:23 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Dear Bill OR How Tom Tells (Almost) All
yay!!! some happiness for the boys. they needed a break from all the angst. =)
Author's Response: They totally deserve some happiness, don't they? =)
Date: 09/23/09 11:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Dear Bill OR How Tom Tells (Almost) All
make up roof sex now??? haha no, but this chapter was good, lovely closure. i hate when authors tell me a story is ending, because i want to tell them how much i cant wait for the next chapter, but i really don't want this story to be over :( its ok though... i can just re read it from time to time or something equally as creepy. lol :P
Author's Response: I know that feeling very well. But don't worry, I'll still be around...and these character's may be, too. ;) Besides, you can always reread it, if you'd like. And I'll never think it's creepy.
Date: 09/23/09 09:38 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Dear Bill OR How Tom Tells (Almost) All
hehehe, I didn't realize I haven't read the chapter before, I've already read it in n_n lovely darlin', I love how you did the letters too. I was thinking you would have them long and drawn out, like the whole letters written out, and I didn't think I wanted that. It was in my mind, franky, boring. I like how you did it, with Tom reading it, and Bill kind of cutting him off for another one. n_n you're amazing, hahaha I'm so glad this got featured :D Hehehe, I don't know what to say, except I can tell it's coming to a close, and it's just as amazing as when it started (except it's not angsty fun anymore, just fun XD)
Bill frowned, hugging his box of letters close to his chest as he raised his knees, pulling his feet closer to him.
This line was probably one of my favorite. Just because, it shows how he feels about the letters, plus, Bill sitting has always been a horrible weakness for me. Just the way he sits, it's always, idk, very interesting to me. And I like how you mention it in here :) lol, if that makes any sense. Just imagining him there with his knees to his chin and clutching the box, it's just great. I've noticed other times you've done it, but probably I noticed this one more, because it's the second to last line, and I'm staring at it as I type this, and loving it n_n
But this time, it felt normal. It felt like it did before when it was their room and the only thing they were hiding was from their mom -- the fact that they were smoking.
That line is almost making me cry rereading it (haha, I get so emotional XD) because everything finally seemed to come together for me. The lines before it just didn't seem to do it for me, but this one, I just realize how they've kind of come in this complete, squiggly, annoying, and hard circle. lol...hard... But yeah, that line, just rereading it, I love it even more. I’m going to have to find my favorite sentence in this whole fic and paste it on my wall or something…but you have so many great ones, damn… lol, anyway, question, do you have a favorite line in here, from anywhere in this chapter, favorite to write, to read, to see…? Lol, yeah, just wondering n_n lovely hun n_n
Author's Response: I don't think I have enough imagination to write out a bunch of letters from Tom completely. I just wanted to pick out a few important details. And you're right, it probably would have been boring to dedicate an entire chapter to the letters, or write them all out. I like the visual of Bill hugging the box of letters to him while he pulls his knees up to his chin -- almost as much as you do, probably. I don't know. All of the scenes out on the roof are kind of awesome in my mind. lol As far as my favorite line from this chapter (and I'm SO glad you narrowed it down to this chapter lol), I think it would either be Tom telling Bill that there's left over Chicken Alfredo, because it shows how intune to Bill he is, even when Bill isn't aware he's there. Or when Tom is (through the letters) describing Casi. Because I sort of have a soft spot for the girl. *sigh* But anyway, if you do go through the whole story and pick out your favorite line, I'd love to know what it is. =) I think my absolute favorite part of the story is coming in the next chapter. ;)
Date: 09/23/09 02:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Dear Bill OR How Tom Tells (Almost) All
Morrrrrrrrrrrrrre pliz!!!!!!!!!!! :)
Author's Response: I will, I will. =)
Date: 09/22/09 10:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Dear Bill OR How Tom Tells (Almost) All
awww! *squishes*
Author's Response: *squishes*
Date: 09/22/09 09:15 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Dear Bill OR How Tom Tells (Almost) All
I can't say much besides how much I love this. It's balm on the burn and I can feel it healing. Thank you for this.
Author's Response: No, thank YOU.
Date: 09/22/09 08:32 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Dear Bill OR How Tom Tells (Almost) All
woooot! more!
Author's Response: Okay, okay. =)
Date: 09/22/09 08:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Dear Bill OR How Tom Tells (Almost) All
...and that last review was meant to be longer, but the mouse on this laptop sucks. Anyway, I love how you've structured the fic and their relationship, and their outside relationships, too. I'll be looking forward to the last two chapters, though I'll also be sad once this is done!
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you've enjoyed it so far. I'll be sad once it's done, too, but there's always something else to work on, and I'm sure I'll figure out another big project. lol ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 09/22/09 08:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Dear Bill OR How Tom Tells (Almost) All
I get so excited every time I see an update to this fic.
Author's Response: I get excited to see your name in my inbox! lol
Date: 09/22/09 08:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Dear Bill OR How Tom Tells (Almost) All
Yay! They're back to normal! :D
Aw, and Tom reading the leeters to Bill was sweet.
Great chapter. :]
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was playing with the idea of Bill having Tom read them to him from the beginning, so I was glad I could finally get it out. =)
Date: 09/22/09 07:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Dear Bill OR How Tom Tells (Almost) All
*in a sing-song voice* I love it!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 09/22/09 05:46 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Dear Bill OR How Tom Tells (Almost) All
yay!!!
things are finally getting into place!!
love it!
Author's Response: I told ya we'd get there eventually. =)
Date: 09/22/09 05:39 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Dear Bill OR How Tom Tells (Almost) All
wiiihi
I can finally see the light in the end of the tunnel
love this
gonna misss it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm going to miss it, too.
Date: 09/22/09 03:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Dear Bill OR How Tom Tells (Almost) All
JOYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!
*dances happily all over the room*
THEY TALK. <333333333333333333333333333333333333
And DAMN, flustered!Tom never gets old on me. <3333333
Author's Response: hahaha I love flustered!Tom, too. It makes me smile. As do you. =D
Date: 09/22/09 03:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Dear Bill OR How Tom Tells (Almost) All
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaww :3 Tomi is cuuuuuute ^^ I loved the chap!! I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Innie adorable? ;)
Date: 09/22/09 02:51 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Dear Bill OR How Tom Tells (Almost) All
AWEEEEEE.
*sniffles*
Love.
Author's Response: Love, love, triple love.
Date: 09/22/09 01:56 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Dear Bill OR How Tom Tells (Almost) All
YAYYYY!
omg this is my favorite fanfic i've read ever.
Author's Response: That's incredible. Thank you!