Date: 09/29/09 12:02 pm Title: Epilogue: Full Circle OR How They’re Learning To Breathe, Again, Together
oh so perfect
thanks!
Author's Response: Thank YOU. =)
Date: 09/29/09 11:11 am Title: Epilogue: Full Circle OR How They’re Learning To Breathe, Again, Together
Aaaahhh, that was so perfect and hot and amazing! Perfect ending. :DDD
Author's Response: Ahhh, thank you! <3333
Date: 09/29/09 11:05 am Title: Epilogue: Full Circle OR How They’re Learning To Breathe, Again, Together
*grins stupidly*
THAT was sex and sweet and the PERFECT ending to this HUGE ASS ANGST FEST.
xD
i'm sad so see this ending, but i still LOVED this story and this chapter equally. it's always amazing to see the twins relationship in a new environment, but they're STILL twins, trying to get through life, not lose each other, or who they are in the process.
this fic definitely did that to me, and i HOPE to read more from you ^_^
Author's Response: *grins stupidly back* Seriously, my apologies for the HUGE ASS ANGST FEST, but I made it better, right? I fixed them. =) I'm sad to see it end, too, and really sort of lost without it already. lol Empty nest syndrome, or something. I love, love, love that you LOVED this. For real. You'll definitely see more from me, as soon as I figure out what my next project is going to be. ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 09/29/09 11:02 am Title: Epilogue: Full Circle OR How They’re Learning To Breathe, Again, Together
-sniffle- I had to come to an end. But I LOVE the ending!!! Absolutely love the ending. They are finally together, like they should have been. And it couldn't have been any better. Poor Tomi tho, lol, letting go just a little to fast. But Bill didn't take any offense. He understood. I loved this story from beginning to end =D
Author's Response: It really did have to come to an end, eventually. I'm really glad you liked the story. That makes me happy. <3
Date: 09/29/09 10:50 am Title: Epilogue: Full Circle OR How They’re Learning To Breathe, Again, Together
-skvishes you and cuddles you- -sighs- Perfect ending for an amazing story. I can't even begin to express how much I loved this story. It's definitely going on my favorites list. xxAli
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you got into it. *huggles*
Date: 09/29/09 10:49 am Title: Epilogue: Full Circle OR How They’re Learning To Breathe, Again, Together
perfect ending)))
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 09/29/09 10:38 am Title: Epilogue: Full Circle OR How They’re Learning To Breathe, Again, Together
I didn't realize this was the last chapter when I read the Chapter notes again...O_________O
OMAGAD...O___O It's over...
Hahahahaha thank you for sharing us this wonderful fic...XD
Author's Response: Yep, this was it. El fin. I don't know how I feel about that, myself. But you are very welcome. I'm glad you guys could enjoy it as much as I did. =)
Date: 09/28/09 06:24 pm Title: Prologue: Kiss It Better OR How Bill Can Get Anything From Tom
Yeah, I can imagine such pain, despair, anger confusion, but most of all, one soul crying out for another in them.
-__-
Yeah...maybe not. *wibbles*
Author's Response: Gah. Everyone is still crying and wibbling at me. I'M SORRY, OKAY?! lol But no, really, I love you all very, very much.
Date: 09/28/09 03:36 pm Title: Chapter Thirty: Plastic Stars OR How Tom Is Finally Home
Oh, be still my heart. I wish I could read those letters. *wibbles* Can't believe it's almost over now, but I am so happy they are finally connected again. It just feels WRONG when they're not and are clearly so unhappy without each other. It's hearbreaking, painful and they had to really reach the bottom before they could rise from the ashes strong and definitely not alone anymore.
Whether Bill reads those letters or not, what matters most is that Tom is finally home where he belongs, with his Bill.
Author's Response: Yes, he is certainly home. My beta made me add this chapter (I honestly don't know how I hadn't already written it lol) so that I would add Tom's letters, but when I got into the chapter, I just couldnt' do it because they aren't happy, and I wanted it to be all (or mostly) happy at the end. And they certainly have had a rough ride, haven't they? I love them, and you. ♥
Date: 09/28/09 01:55 pm Title: Chapter Thirty: Plastic Stars OR How Tom Is Finally Home
Awwww! So sweet! I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 09/27/09 11:47 pm Title: Chapter Thirty: Plastic Stars OR How Tom Is Finally Home
This story is so beautiful! I love the depths you went to with the characters and the sub-plots. You're writing style is amazing as well.
*applauds you enthusiastically*
Thank you for such a great story :)
Can't wait for the epilogue!
Author's Response: *takes a bow* Thank you so, so, so much. I'm glad you've enjoyed it thus far. =)
Date: 09/27/09 08:44 pm Title: Chapter Thirty: Plastic Stars OR How Tom Is Finally Home
hahaha!! Found time to review after I read it. n_n lol, yeah... I loved this as a last chapter before an epilogue, just saying it wrapped everything up so nicely, and how you have everything coming together, and the letters. hehehe, I actually am not too upset that I didn't get to see the letters in here. I mean, I don't know why, it just didn't seem like the right place. Even without putting them in, the story wraps itself up. A story that wraps it's self up when it's supposed to, is just amazing n_n just saying XD
Bill stared up at the ceiling, speckled with paint and a couple of the plastic glow-in-the-dark stars that Tom had put up there years ago.
Adding the list to awesome lines I've found in here, is that one. Just the description of the ceiling, idk why, it just made me smile and giggle some n_n Anyway, the way you had it all written, with the diary and letters, and *giggle* idk, I love it. Actually, adding to the favorite line, is the whole second to last paragraph, how you kept the idea running. Hehe, I love how you did that.
They barely glowed anymore, but sometimes Bill would catch the reflection of one in the moonlight and wish on it.
*smile* *giggle* *squeeze*
Author's Response: I love, love, love, love, love, love, love, love, love your reviews. Definitely one thing I'll miss when this one is over. But hopefully I'll come up with a new project that you'll like enough to leave amazing comments. =) I really, really, really love that you think it wrapped everything up. Sometimes I think that's the hardest thing to do aside from getting started, so that makes me happy. This is actually the chapter that my beta made me add (and rightfully so). But she wanted me to write it so that I would add in Tom's letters, but as I was writing it, I just couldn't add them. Because like Tom said, they aren't happy letters. And I didn't want to end the story like that. I wanted it to be happy. So I'm glad you're okay with them not being in here. And I liked that whole paragraph about the stars on the ceiling, too. One of my favorites, I think. =) *tight squeeze* ILU SFM. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 09/27/09 07:02 pm Title: Chapter Thirty: Plastic Stars OR How Tom Is Finally Home
Love this love this love this love this love this!Omg this story is so amazing, and I have literally not been able to stop reading it unless I actually can't function cause I was so tired! I am so upset that there's only one more chapter, but so excited about reading more!! Please update soon! *favourited*
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll be posting the epilogue soon! ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 09/27/09 06:11 am Title: Chapter Thirty: Plastic Stars OR How Tom Is Finally Home
so so so cute
really
love it
am sad that its almost over
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sad it's almost over, too.
Date: 09/26/09 09:54 pm Title: Chapter Thirty: Plastic Stars OR How Tom Is Finally Home
Hello,
I take the 'sadistic writer's vein' back, it's the least I can do considering that at the end, they're together.
I'll be waiting for the epilogue.
See you
Velia
Author's Response: So it was a momentary laps of sadisticness. Not sure if that's even a word. lol Anyway....I'm glad you enjoyed it (and holy crap, did you read all of it in one day??). Epilogue is coming soon. ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 09/26/09 09:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven: Clarity OR How Plans Sometimes Change Without Warning
OMG this never happened, right? that I read Bill saying Tom he hated him is only a product of my tired imagination, isn't it??
I really start beleving you have a really big sadistic writer's vein in you, God! you are making me suffer with all the things that you schemed for the twins...
See u around
Author's Response: *giggles* I have been called evil author of doom, and such. It must be true.
Date: 09/26/09 08:41 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Fucked OR How Bill Lets The Cat Out Of The Bag
I usually don't comment until the end, but da-yum, that was painful. I had to stop reading at those last three paragraphs because it was so awkward and embarrassing. Which means that you did an awesome job of writing it; I emotionally connected.
I like that I wasn't saying, "Why the hell would he say that?" when Bill commented about saying Tom's name as Andi sucked him off. It seemed to fit with the situation and the character.
So yeah, now to finish this lovely story. Yay!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I love hearing stuff like that.
Date: 09/26/09 08:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five: Brothers OR How Tom Makes Up Bill’s Mind
No no, no, how can he say that? I know that maybe Tom is thining about his brother's happiness, but seriously, after seeing what happen to Bill when he is not around,doesn't he get that his little brother is hopelessly in love with him?
Anyway, i'm moving onto the next chapter
Author's Response: He has his reasons.
Date: 09/26/09 08:05 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Four: Too Much OR How Bill Doesn’t Like The Explanation He’s Offered
I love Georg, better expressed I love the way he simplifies things for Bill. 'Do what you have to do or else he who you love will end up badly hurt'
That leaves little room to hesitate.
I've been reading all the morning and I'm not even close to be tired of it. Going to read next chapter
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far. And I love Georg in this one, too. =)
Date: 09/26/09 05:02 pm Title: Chapter Thirty: Plastic Stars OR How Tom Is Finally Home
aww i love thiz..i cant wait for a new chapter=]
Author's Response: Thank you! ♥