Date: 09/10/18 08:48 pm Title: Part II
this was a good story!
Date: 07/01/11 07:20 pm Title: Part II
it was delightful!
Date: 04/21/11 09:40 pm Title: Part II
Mmmm now I need to go on YouTube and find Bill and Tom making orgasm faces on stage lol.
Date: 12/20/09 10:57 am Title: Part II
wow amazing sex. I enjoyed the false starts where they were trying to hard to make it happen. They wanted it but kept scaring themselves becasue it was just too much pressure.
Date: 12/20/09 10:08 am Title: Part I
oh my this is so organic! It's perfect! I'm so very impressed! Wow that's a lot of exclamation points! Shall I rephrase? I really like this a lot.
Date: 11/28/09 12:03 pm Title: Part II
I really like the way you characterised the twins in this two-shot! :) This has so many cute moments, I kept aww-ing all over the place. & LOL at Tom's sex face. XD
AMAZING READ, short & sweet. :)
Date: 06/14/09 03:51 am Title: Part II
oh my it ended too quickly!
i swear. this was the best twoshot i've read in MONTHS. And, hey, I've read so many kaulitzcest fics that I can't even count how many. Thousands. Oh God. This was totally perfect.
Date: 06/13/09 09:40 pm Title: Part II
I love this. It's great, it really is.
Date: 06/13/09 06:13 pm Title: Part I
an excellent blend of hot, funny and lovely characterization yet again :) heartsheartsheartssss
Date: 06/13/09 03:15 pm Title: Part I
Aww that was cute! a bit sticky with sugar though lol
Date: 06/13/09 03:08 pm Title: Part II
Is this it? That was - delicious! I hope there is more.
Date: 06/13/09 12:24 pm Title: Part II
Aww. I love the way they interacted with each other; its got a sense of realism. And also- very, very hot.
Hehe - Tom's sex face. xD
Date: 06/13/09 12:11 pm Title: Part II
Whoa, so much hotness. I loved that! Their dialogue was so funny, and I loved that Bill wanted to see Tom's sex face. :D
Date: 06/13/09 11:27 am Title: Part II
I adored this, so much. The whole balance between the twins being lovers and the twins still being themselves is always fun to grapple with. I loved this for the way things didn't go smoothly and the way it fits so well with my views of them. Lucky Jess!
Date: 06/13/09 11:26 am Title: Part II
amazing, thats all I gotta say XOXOXOXOXO
Date: 06/13/09 10:00 am Title: Part II
Shit, they talk too much, lol. But this was an amazing chapter, as far as first times go with them.
