Date: 06/10/09 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow...this was soo hot (no pun intended)! I love how sensually everything was written, especially when describing how hot it was. This was such a great fic!
Author's Response: Thanks. My fiance is a very straight and masculine man... but he writes pretty decent slash! Thanks for the positive comments.
Date: 06/10/09 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a really good oneshot I think it's really cool that your boyfriend wrote this lol
Author's Response: Thanks so much. He was so embarrassed when he found out I'd read it! It just makes me want to marry him that much more that I know we share an interest.
Date: 06/10/09 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, this is pretty good considering that you are not native english speakers. The whole german thing is not needed, since we all take for granted that the twins speak german between them. But this was good, pretty good, and the open ending calls for at least another chapter. I'd be happy if you turned this into a two-shot.
Author's Response: It depends on if my boyfriend wants to write more. It'll be up to him. Thanks for the comments :)