Date: 12/13/18 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was a good story!!
Date: 12/17/10 11:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Not a waste of time at all. This was kind of erotic but sweet at the same time. Danke.
Author's Response:
-huggles- wow.. I really didn't expect to get a review today. IMMD. Thanks to you too! and I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 12/08/09 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
no u didn't. it was good...wish it had been longer... but its to find botTom stories... :/ but thanx great story!!
Author's Response: -hugs you- thanks!!!! for reading and reviewing! and yeah I'm making another BotTom... so wait for that? -giggles-
Date: 11/01/09 10:53 am Title: Chapter 1
lol. it's fine. If my beta ever reads mine and sends it back, maybe You'll read it and review for me. ^_^
Author's Response: Of course of course!! -flutterclap- I don't have a beta though... well maybe you should try submitting it first. meybe it won't get rejected by the mods? everything I did are not proofread by official betas.. I just get my friends to read over them to see if it's alright. oh and another thing... if yours is het could you just mail me the linky or those things.. coz I don't read het so I wouldn't know if it's posted... oh and another thing.. I'm mika!! can we talk in the schrei box? please?
Date: 11/01/09 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Text was a little small and difficult to read, but I managed to read it. I liked it. It was sweet.
Author's Response: -hugs- I fixed it!! sorry for hurting your eyes though.. thank you for reading and telling me! -hugs you until you choke- LOL.. sorry.. I just love it when people review.
Date: 06/14/09 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
ohhh I think this was lovely. I really liked it. Good job hunni !! xxx
Author's Response: thanks for readingand reviewing!! I try.. *huggles*
Date: 06/10/09 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
As a Bottom!Tom lover I want to thank you for this since it is so rare to find the kind of stories I love, and this one was hot as well as loving and sweet.
Thank you for posting it.
Author's Response: awwweee.. thank you.. I feel so glad that I had such good feedback, I was really scared that it won't work. I'll try to come up with good ideas but one thing is sure this won't be my last botTom. Thanks for reading!
Date: 06/10/09 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Overall it was good but the story was moving to fast. It was weel-written and I love Tom!Bottom!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and taking time to review! Also I'll try taking my time next time. Thanks. ^.^
Date: 06/10/09 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
It wasn't bad hon, but I think it wasmoving too fast liek one minute Tom was taking bill in his mouth second later Bill was in him. Damn the plot was amazing, but next time take it slow... They should enjoy each other more. Sorry I hate saying this to you but all in all a good plot!
Author's Response: s'ok mum.. remember.. I never take bad reviews.. they are just constructive criticisms.. maybe I was just too nervous that it won't work.. but thanks for reading..*hugs* don't feel bad.. *grins*
Date: 06/10/09 11:35 am Title: Chapter 1
It was a little disjointed and unrealistic. The plotline was good, just needs a little bit of refinement. Sorry! I hate giving bad reviews. :(
Author's Response: it's okay... thanks anyways.. I'll just try to do better next time.. it's better than nothing.. *hugs* don't feel bad okay? at least you're helping me be better.