Date: 11/26/09 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 16
good..it has a happy ending..for right now?
Gaaaahhh for a second there..i thought id have to reach through the computer and strangle tom for making such a decision..but in the end i am very glad i didn't!
can't wait for the epilogue...
Author's Response: Yup;D For now;D You will never guess what's gonna happen in the Epilogue;DrnLol, I think we all would've like to do;D lol;D Yeah;D Aww, thank you!
Date: 11/26/09 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 16
Tom was so stupid! i understand that he isn't fully mature yet but he has grown up a lot since Lucy has been there and he's done a great job with her. I'm glad he decided to keep her
Author's Response: I know! Yeah, I totally agree! He really is great with Lucy! Yeah, me too;D
Date: 11/26/09 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 16
I just thought that he wouldn't take her, for a moment D: But good think he really did ^_^
Author's Response: Lol, gotcha;D lol;D Yeah;D ^_^Thank you!
Date: 11/26/09 03:48 pm Title: Prologue
For some reason, my reviews are getting cut short but by my gosh dolly I'm gonna say what I wanted to say gosh dag it! x'D
The epilogueeeeeeeeee! The story is over; waah. D; But it was so good and such a stirring journey as I'm recapping it all. The hot scene at the beginning, the decision for Lucy to arrive, Lucy falling on the bus, Tom hitting Bill, the car accident and now THIS. Aahhhh, I am so satisfied!
Author's Response: ^_^ Aww thank you;D Yup;D Yeah, sadly... but everything has an end, right? Awww thank you so much hon! Aww, I'm so glad that you are! That means a lot to me! Thank you hon!
Date: 11/26/09 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 16
I think that both of you would've gotten jumped if she was sent away. lol My heart was just bursting at the fact she was ALMOST sent away. Bill is just too cute, even when he's serious. "I'll come back and get you, I promise."
Author's Response: Lol, really? lol;D Aww, I'm glad it didn't then;D rnYeah! OMG!! I totally love him like that too!
Date: 11/26/09 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 16
Awwww what matters is that Tom took her at the end. =D
Author's Response: Yeah;D You're so right;D Awe!
Date: 11/22/09 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 15
whats with the G's
Author's Response: I don't know! It's a mysteria, huh?
Date: 11/20/09 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 15
I am sure Tom will make a good decision or at least I hope he does =)
Author's Response: Yeah, all we can do is wait, cross fingers and hope for the best;D
Date: 11/19/09 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 15
“No buts Bill, you want to shop with Lucy, go ask Tom if you can, if he says yes, then okay,” Bill looked at Tom, who was too busy with his guitar.
“Tom-“
“No.” Tom said without even looking at him. Bill pouted.
LOL. I laughed so hard during this part! I don't quite know why, but it struck some kind of nerve within me! xD
Seems like Georg and Gustav are cookin' up something! I, too, would like to be including on everything. You go boys! ;D
Awesome chapter, as always.
Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad you liked it! Lol;D I loved that part too;D lol;D rnYup, something is cooking, and it ain't food;D *squeals* Thank you so much!
Date: 11/19/09 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 15
awww, cute chapter :D
- and lol, I always write brown too, even though they're born with blue eyes XD
Author's Response: Awe! Thank you! rnLol, that's good to know;D I love brown and blue eyes;D Mostly brown;D
Date: 11/19/09 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh my god!! This story is.. i don't what to say.. it's incredible! good work! *adds to favorites right away* can't wait for the next chapter ^_^ and Tom as a father? Wow.. And Lucy sounds adorable :D gosh ^^
Author's Response: Awww! Thank you so much! *blush* THANK YOU!!! Yup;D Tom is a father;D Awww, thank you!
Date: 11/19/09 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 15
awwww Tom's being a great father to Lucy! the part when Bill had sugar high was soo funny, i love how Tom knew Bill was going for the coke.
Georg and Gustav at the end kind of surprised me, what are they planning?
Author's Response: Yeah! I totally agree;D Lol;D I know;D I loved it too! rnrnHmmm... i don't really know... Could be anything;D lol;D
Date: 11/02/09 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 13
OMG! You didn't!!!!!!!!!! What's with all the drama?! JK I love it... drama makes for a good story. lol
Author's Response: *Le gasp* Phew... lol;D I love drama;D Lol, two sould, one thought;D lol;D Thank you!
Date: 11/01/09 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 14
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you;D
Date: 10/29/09 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 14
Super pessimistic now! From crappy, to hate! OUCH. Poor "You'll Never Learn" story. ='( (LOL)
Even though you don't seem to fancy it anymore--which is such a shame because of how awesome it is--I still enjoy reading it and love seeing it updated with a new chapter. =D Actually, I think you rubbed off on Bill a little bit. He's being negative, too!! Talkin' 'bout how he's worried that everything will crash down on them…PSHHH!
What's happening with the person that Tom crashed into? Are they alive/dead? I just want to know if they are OK! =)
For a four-year-old, she's very articulate and bright! Three languages?! The reason I'm bringing this up is because it's quite unrealistic for someone so young to be at Lucy's mental level. Unless of course, you weren't going for realistic in the beginning. If you were wondering why I brought this up, it's because when she was explaining to Bill and Tom how and why she knew the languages, she made her self clear and eloquent enough to be someone older. A teenager at the least, perhaps? I'm juggling English (native), German and Spanish. =o So yeaa, it's nice to see a child beat me at my own game. LOL Are you fluent in French, or did you use a translator? =9
I’m interested to find out if something bad actually DOES happen. The true question is, what happens after that?! ;))
PS: I’m glad you’ve decided to keep this story going. Yay!
Author's Response: I'm SORRRYYYYYYYYY! It's just that I've improven my writing skills and it pisses me off that I can't change the story, both because I don't like too big changes and because it will be stupid to change it now... I know... Poor 'You'll Never Learn'... Awww I'm so glad you still think so! It makes me happy! Lol, yeah;D ... I know... lol;D rnUnknown person survived and are okay;D Don't worry;D rnYup;D Three languages;D I know it's not normal, but I was inspired by my cousin when she was four, she spoke philipin, english and danish, so it can happen, trust me... (My cousins ((Two girls and one boy and their mom)) are from the Philipins) Lol;D I speak a lot of languages, Danish, English, German and Swedish is fluent, then I have some other languages, like Spanish that I don't speak fluent, but know how to speak, just a bit, and and some other languages too;D Lol;D rnNope, at that time when I wrote the story, I used a translaor, but by now, I know a bit more french than that, it's not much, just a few sentences;D rnrnHmmm... Maybe... Lol;D I dunno;D rnLol, I'm glad to hear that sweetheart! Lol;D Take care!
Date: 10/29/09 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 14
Why are you pessimistic? It was really great, once again D:!
Author's Response: I'm sorry! It's just that I've improven my writing skills since i wrote this and it pisses me off cause I don't wanna change it... I don't like too big changes... Aww I'm glad you thought though;D
Date: 10/29/09 11:18 am Title: Chapter 14
I don't think i've ever seen so much hun buns un a reply to a review before... XD I went and read your reply only today O.o
Oh no, recess is over. I will continue the review later. XD
Author's Response: ;D Lol;D ^_^ Oh no! better get to class hon;D Okay;D I'll be waiting;D ....
Date: 10/29/09 10:25 am Title: Chapter 12
Awwww I'm glad Lucy is his for real =D
Author's Response: Lol;D I'm glad you thought so;D Thank you!
Date: 10/29/09 09:42 am Title: Chapter 14
aww you don't have to hate it! s this is a great story and this chapter was amazing as always.
Lucy is one impressive kid, it took me 3 months of French to learn what she said
more soon please
Author's Response: I'm sorry, but I just write better than this.. I wrote this a long time ago and.. I've improved my writing skills... Awww, I'm glad to hear that hon! rnLol;D I added what she said at the bottom, forgot it at first;D lol;D More soon, promise;D
Date: 10/29/09 07:00 am Title: Chapter 5
Oooh he probably DOES have kids lol
Author's Response: ;D Maybe;D