Date: 07/15/09 11:55 am Title: Chapter 5
Poor Tom... And Bill, awww he was cutie! :D Hah, i knew she was Tom's! And i kind of guessed that her mom dies ;(
Author's Response: Yeah, poor Tomi! Awww I'm glad you thought so sweetie! Yay! *claps hands* You knew *dances around* Awww, that sad... well, you're a pretty darn good guesser;D
Date: 07/15/09 09:27 am Title: Chapter 5
awwwwwwwwww that is sooo sweet plsssssssss moreeeeeeeee
Author's Response: Aww! Thank you! I'm glad you thought so;D Soon;D lol
Date: 07/15/09 06:54 am Title: Chapter 5
omg im so glad i saw this i hadnt been seeing it come up as updatedd. damn im a fool. i love this story i knew she was his!
Author's Response: Awww, I'm glad you saw it too! No, not a fool, just... need glases;D lol, no. Awww thank you! Yay you! *claps hands* ;D
Date: 07/14/09 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
Lucy is Tom's daughter... isn't she. lol. I figured that out in the first chapter. I love the story and please update soon. Danke Schon!!!!
Author's Response: Hmm... I'm not so sure yet.... Lol, i will;D
Date: 07/10/09 05:13 am Title: Chapter 4
let me guess lucy is toms daughter. come on i need to know guess i'll have to wait. *waits intensely*
Author's Response: Hmmm... I'm not sure if she is... Yip, you have to yippidyyuppidy wait;D lol. *waits with you* lol
Date: 07/09/09 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 4
Lucy is his daughter! hehehe wont he be shocked!? Ohhhhh I can't waite for more!
Author's Response: hmmm. I'm not really sure if she is... If she is... he will die! I'm sure of it. lol. THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Date: 07/09/09 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow.... I don't know what to say. I'm not sure if this IS Tom's kid, or something's happened the mom and someone will to take care of her for good.. Idk! This is really getting good and it sucks that I'm stuck on the 4th chapter. ]: Definitely tracking this! [[:
Author's Response: Lol;D Well, we get to know in the next chapter what happened;D Aww sorry that you're stuck hon! awww thank you so much!
Date: 07/09/09 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ahw! This chapter was so cute! I show my emotion alot, so I practically screamed and held my hand over my mouth reading the part where she fell on the bus. Oh jeez, and she was okay and still talking about food. lol. David...THAT BASTARD! Kids say the darnest things. You're awesome for writing this!! [:
Author's Response: Awww thank you so much! Haha, yeah, i would do that too if i felt alright;D Haha, yeah david;D lol. Yup, they do;D Aww thank you so much!
Date: 07/09/09 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
"Lucy dragged him off in every girl store there was in sight and if it wasn’t her, it was Bill."
That was my breaking point I couldn't keep the laughter in lol! Oh wow. This is a great story and I like the concept. [[;
Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad you liked that;D That was one of my fav parts too;D Awww thank you so much!
Date: 07/09/09 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol. chapter end notes: "night daddy": ?huh? I was like did she just say that!??! lol. but why do i get the feeling something's up. especially the part where he says he reminds her of someone he cant really remember? ooo getting intense!
Author's Response: Lol, yes she did say that;D I don't know if it's already been written or else there will be a chapter, telling you something important with Lucy that she wished her dad was like Tom and that she doesn't know her own father, Lucy miss her father, and she was already half asleep there so she didn't really know what she was saying;D Lol, yep;D Getting very intense;D Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 07/08/09 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
I need to know! SOON! or else I'll have a fit!
Author's Response: Lol, don't worry. I think we will know in next chapter;D Don't have a fit please;D lol
Date: 07/08/09 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
Tom is SO the dad xD I knew it!
Great!!
Author's Response: Hmmm... I'm not sure... Thanks! Thank you for your review and sharing your thoughts;D
Date: 07/08/09 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
dude wat is david so scared of telling tom... and and im losing my head over here because i want to know
Author's Response: Hmmm... i don't really know what e is so afraid of... Lol, i think we will get to know what next chapter;D
Date: 07/08/09 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 4
Alright, so, I'm thinking that Lucy really IS Tom's daughter, and he obviously doesn't know.
Author's Response: You think so? Well, we will know in next chapter! Thanks for reviewing and your thoughts;D
Date: 07/08/09 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
AWWWWWW I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! I AM HOOKED TO YET ANOTHER ONE OF YOUR STORIES....AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! XD LOL
Author's Response: Awww! I'M SO GLAD YOU DO!!!!! YAY YOU! LOL;D
Date: 07/08/09 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
Come on, you have to admit, Bill DOES look a bit like a girl. He's beautiful.
Author's Response: Yeah, i do admit it, he does. But when i saw him for the first time, i wasn't in doubt if he was a boy or a girl. There was just some features that made him look many... And he doesn't have tits... lol. He is very beautiful;D
Date: 07/08/09 11:30 am Title: Prologue
I love this story, boys are cute! And I think she's his... :D Update soon! ^^
Author's Response: Aww thank you! I'm glad you think so;D Lol, yeah, they are, aren't they;D You do? Lol, maybe;D I will;D
Date: 07/08/09 10:55 am Title: Chapter 4
Awwwwwwwww. This is so sweet, I just want to make babies with Tom now (well I want to do that all the time but, hey) It's coming along great, update soon, soon meaning like, uh now. You are an awesome author and make our four fave German Guys seem so Cutsie :D
Love Jezzabella (my real name)
Author's Response: God, you don't know how happy this made me! Lol, i just want to make babies with Bill;D lol The same goes for me;D lol. Lol, i'm sorry, but next update will be next week;D I have a plan when to update and i have to follow that;D;D;D;D;D Awww thank you so much! Aw thank you so much!
Date: 07/08/09 08:43 am Title: Chapter 4
love it totes
Author's Response: Awww thank you!
Date: 07/08/09 08:42 am Title: Chapter 4
love it totes
Author's Response: Awww thank you!