Date: 11/26/09 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 4: Talking
Vampire idea good plot line bad I'm so lost your over explaining things that don't seem to matter and leaving a lot of things unsaid I really hate to say it but I can't read this it's too confusing
Author's Response: Any ideas??? PLEASE!!! That would help a lot.
Date: 06/22/09 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 2: Getting To Know Each Other Better
Ummm... Yeahhh... Hmmm... I hate to say this but. This story is a bit rush dude.
Author's Response: What exactly about it was 'rush'? and what exactly do you mean by that?
Date: 06/22/09 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 1: First Day At a New School Meeting a Tutor?
Ohhhhh!!!! Its good so far dude.
Author's Response: Thanks
Date: 06/10/09 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 1: First Day At a New School Meeting a Tutor?
-snickers- nice...smooth first chapter
Author's Response: XDrnThank you!
Date: 06/10/09 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 1: First Day At a New School Meeting a Tutor?
ahhh! gasp! it vaguely sounds like twilght but sexier cuz of the twins!!!!
Author's Response: I didn't try to make it like twilight..... but if you have any suggestions.... that would be cool!