its good you should finish it

FUCK. soo ja..i LOVE IT .!

HATE SIMONE! (like I always do in these types of stories. xD)

Bill slowly turned his head, his gaze resting upon Tom's who locked his gaze. (Where did Tom lock his gaze? An item or Bill? Or Simone?) He felt that same sudden emotion build back into the pit of his stomach. It was the feeling of absolute love.

"Mum..." Bill started sweetly, with as much innocence as his voice allowed. Simone silenced him by raising the palm of her hand.

"Mum, we were just messing around!" Tom smirked to himself as he spoke, although inside he was irritated. He had feelings for Bill, yet he wasn't even aloud to have those feelings for him around his own home.

"MESSING AROUND!?!?" Simone screamed as her black eyes shot open. They were blood shot and puffy from the amount of force she was using to stop her tears.

Tom straightened himself up when his mother raised her voice at them. It was abnormal of her to do so. Bill jumped and pulling his arms around himself. Scrunching his eyes shut, he just wanted to disappear. He wished he could erase his true feelings but that was asking too much...

"Is that it Tom, huh? You were just messing around with your own flesh and blood? Your own twin! Where did I go wrong? Oh God, please tell me what I did to deserve this!"
-I think "you are / you're " could work there too.

Tom snarled as his mother started up a guilt trip. As she swore to the Gods, he just kept his anger caged. He knew that if he let it show, it would cause a massive outburst. Instead, he surrendered to what happened. He was about to step toward his mother but felt it was better to remain in place.

Bill opened his eyes instantly as Tom's voice swirled out an apology. He'd never heard Tom apologise in his life. Simone locked her eyes with Tom and nodded quickly. Her lips pursed together from how uncomfortable they made her feel.

Dr. Alson (a space in between)

"What? Mum, no!" Bill cried as this news hit him. He knew exactly who Dr. Alson was. Did his mum really think that they were insane enough to see a psychologist?

"Bill, yes! It's about time I got to the bottom of what is going on inside your minds!"
-I don't think the ellipsis is needed. The "..." between your and minds.

"Mum, what? You can't! Do you really think I'm crazy? Do I look crazy to you???" Bill raised his voice, grabbing at his sleek black hair.

Bill knew that if he was brought before Dr. Alson, he'd surely declare his love for Tom and then that'd just result in him going on a one-way ticket to an institution.

"Bill, enough!" Simone snapped, turned on her heel, and stormed out of the the living room.
-Living rooms have doors? If so, then nevermind this correction. I'm just used to walk-in living roms. ;}

Bill turned his focus to Tom, who stood with an empty stare, his mind scanning through so many thoughts at once. Bill could feel the tears forcing themselves to his eyes but he sniffed them away. This gained Tom's attention, he raised his arms infront of him, for Bill to automatically run into his embrace.

"Tomi, she's going to send us away!"

"No she's not Bill, she's just saying that!" Tom tried to reassure the latter. He had to be strong for his brother and for himself.

"No Tomi, she's going to take us to Dr. Alson and he's going to think I'm a freak and lock me in a mental hospital!" Bill cried and his fingers clutched to Tom's oversized tshirt. He was usaully dramactic about things like this, and his voice was begining to function like a nine-year-old.

"Bill, don't be so stupid!" Tom replied, pulling Bill tighter in his embrace. He hated to lie to himself and Bill, but something inside of him knew exactly what was going to happen.

"You promise?" Bill sniffled, wiping his eyes on Toms white and already grass stained top.

"I promise..." Tom whispered into Bills sleek black hair.


"Bill, come down here this instant!" Simone shouted upstairs. It had been atleast four hours since their last encounter in the living room.

Dinner had been extremely akward with Bill shifting every two seconds and Tom refusing to eat anything.

Now back upstairs, Bill groaned into the crook of Tom's neck before heaving himself off his chest. Tom stretched his arm out and gently grazed his fingertips along Bill's arm.

"Hey, don't look so worried. It'll be fine!" Tom smiled reasuringly only to receive a sigh in response.

[]"Yeh sure, don't expect me back up unless I can manage to live headless!" Bill joked and dragged his finger across his throat, implying the sound effects off slitting his throat.

"How come it's always me anyways?" Bill asked curiously as he thought.

Tom smirked. "Because you're mummy's little angel!" Bill scowled.[]
-I don't get what's going on here to correct how I want to.

"Shut up Tom, you're just jealous!" Bill stuck his tongue out, running out the door just managing to escape from the pillow that Tom had flung at him. Bill laughed as the pillow slammed against the door. Without another word he proceeded in walking downstairs.

Simone was sitting in the kitchen, her back against Bill. Her short blonde hair was pulled into a bun and as he proceeded in walking around her, he saw that her face was stripped from all her make-up. Bill smiled at her but then gulped when his mother didn't return his friendly gesture.

"Bill, I need to know what's going on!" Simone said sternly as Bill took a seat infront of her. Running his hands through his straight hair - he hadn't done the extreme with his hair today, he'd managed to save some hairspray for once! - he thought about what to say.

"About what?" Bill replied innocently.

"Don't play dumb with me. Bill, I'm your mother. Now tell me what's going on between you and Tom."

"Did you want to talk to me because I kissed Tomi?"

"Exactly that! Bill, you aren't supposed to kiss your brother...it's wrong!"

"But it's not wrong. I love Tomi!"

"I know you do, Sweetie, but you can't love him in that kind of way!" Simone pressed, trying to reason with her seventeen-year-old son. It was more like dealing with a huffy nine-year-old.

"Yes I can! I'm old enough to make my own decisions!" Bill hissed, pushing the palms of his hands onto the wooden table and pushing himself up.

"No Bill, you're only seventeen and at any age this is wrong! You and your brother aren't a couple!"

Bill growled and glared at his mother. He hated that his mother wouldn't understand.

"You don't understand!" He cried as he turned around and repeating his steps out of the kitchen. Simone reached her hand out and grasped him, but he pulled away.

"Don't touch me! Until you learn to love me and Tomi for who we are then I don't see any point in you even trying to embrace us or even refer to us as your sons. It's obvious you're ashamed of us..."

"No Bill, I'm not ashamed, I'm just....disappointed!"

"Disappointed because we found love in each other?" Bill pushed and scowled when he didn't recieve a reply. "I pity you mum, I really do..." Bill sneered before walking out the kitchen. He hadn't intended on being so cruel to his mother but with the way she was acting it was inevitable.

Simone sighed. What else could she say? She loved her sons but what they where doing couldn't continue on. It would only cause them great difficulty in the future. It was causing her difficulty right now.

"I'll see you in the morning, Bill." Simone replied her, voice like stone; no emotion or feeling put into it, flat and boring. Bill was already storming up the stairs.

In the morning, hopefully things would look up or maybe even turn worse. She didn't want to lose either of her boys to an institution, but if that was the only choice she had, she'd take it!

Yup, again, up top are the corrections I found. I'm really sad in seeing how Simone is taking this but I can't see any parent take this any other way but disappointed and really hurt. I am surprised that she didn't want a one-on-one talk with Tom. =O

When they see Dr. Alson, I wonder what happens next! =O

*goes off to read the next chapter*
I'm enjoying what's happening so I hope you finish it. =D

Oh soo heart breaking! Poor Bill! Grrrrrrr Lying Doctors!!! This is a great fic I can't wait for more!
Kitten.

love it!!

THAT FUCKING LIAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hate him!!!!!!!...Even though this is just a story... I hate

omg, thats so sweet.
I like it (:

Cant wait for next chapter!
This is gonna be good!

Wooow, seriously, you're good!
I totally love this chapter.
Keep up the amazing job (:
I can't wait for another update! :D

Author's Response: Awh thank yhuu so much. rnI absolutely loved yhurr review. rnI'm defo updating xoX