Date: 01/31/10 06:16 am Title: Chapter 4
:O Update please!!! D: Bill! I must know what happens :O Youre a really good writer btw :D
Date: 01/06/10 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
thanks for the update
sad
i hope bill will be ok
cant wait for another update
Date: 10/12/09 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
this is so sad!!! AGH i love how tom's dream totally follows the mood of the story. This really connects with me. I totally understand Tom. Please continue.
Author's Response: thanks so much :) rni am planning to continue, but have just been de-motivated for a while, and very busy. I didnt realize it was still being read, but I think you've given me the kick up the bum i needed to carry on :P im gonna try and write some more this weekend.
Date: 06/26/09 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
AW poor Tom, this story makes me wanna reach and hug him and comfort him, I hope Bill recovers, can't wait to read more.
Date: 06/12/09 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh wow, thats good, really good, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: thanks :). Glad you like it.rnim writing some more at the moment, i might have another chapter up tomorrow xD
Date: 06/12/09 12:48 am Title: Chapter 2
Idea...make your chapters longer. You just get into it and then its over.
Author's Response: good point there... it is quite short isn't it. i hadnt noticed because it took me a while to write xD rnthanks for the advice :)rn
Date: 06/09/09 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
That just cried sadness. You got me hooked! More please!
Author's Response: oh yay! my first review. thanks :)rnI have a couple more chapters written, will post soon :Prn