Date: 02/14/08 09:42 am Title: Chapter 1
*dies a long and painful death*
Author's Response: Ha ha... wait, I hope that was a good thing. Never mind, I'm sure it was. Thank you so much for reading this fic and happy Valentines Day!
Date: 02/14/08 07:15 am Title: Chapter 15
I think this story is brilliant, you made it so good and It's like you're in Bill's mind, thinking everything he thinks, feeling his feelings and everything.
I could write another long review, but it'd probably just be like the other one for this story, cause i still feel the same. I still can't go back to reality after I readit, I can't just push the story away like i do with other stories, I read them and there's nothing more about it. But with this one, I need to think over it, take in every little letter in it.
I think that's why it's so bloody good, so brilliant and it is making me speechless.
I really think you should write another story, cause you are so good, and I'd die if i couldn't read anymore stories of you.
Ooops, said i wouldn't write a long review, but i kinda did :)
Author's Response: Don't worry, I love that you wrote a long review! Thank you so much, I'm so glad that this story makes you think. Lately, stories have just been something I read to get to sleep so I was really trying to break away from that with this one and I'm overjoyed that you responded so well to it. I'm definitely going to write another story but I haven't thought of any good plots yet so hang in there. Happy Valentines Day and thank you for reading!
Date: 02/12/08 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 14
I love it^^D
Please continue hunny^^)
Love Liebetub
Author's Response: Thank you and I shall be continuing. Maybe expect something either tonight or tomorrow. I've been sick lately so I haven't been writing. I need to come up with one damn good ending though, that's for sure. Thank you for reading!
Date: 02/08/08 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 14
I don't know what to say, I'm speechless.
It's something in this story that i love, i can't explain it with words, but it's there. I think it is something with the way you write, not it's what yuo write about.
This is not a story you read for fun, no, I read it because i love it and it makes me think. You write about stuff, so different from all the others.
Can't explain it better..
My favorite part is the one when Bill tries to send napkins-airplains to Andreas, but the problem with paper planes is they never go the way you want them to.
And the last chapter was the best, i love (can you say that about a text when someone is commiting suicide?) it when Bill writes "I was murdered" on his forehead. Somehow deep.
Actually, I can't just put out different parts of the story, and say that these was the best part. Cause without the other ones, it's not a complete story, you need the bad stuff, without it, it wouldn't be any good stuff.
Okay, i'm just writing down random stuff that comes to my head, but i blame it on the clock (2 in the morning). But just so you know, take all this as a compliment, because, that's what it is.
I really think this is my longest review so far, and you should be proud.
"You live life in third person" Don't know wht, but i like that line...
Author's Response: I don't know what to say, I'm speechless. Amazing review, thank you! It's reviews like that that really make me smile. "You live life in third person" is kind of like saying that you're completely concentrated about other people's lives when you should be paying attention to your own. Sometimes I feel like that and I'm glad that you like the line. Trust me, I know the two in the morning feeling and it is not pleasant! Thank you for reading!
Date: 02/08/08 06:19 am Title: Chapter 14
OMG OMG OMG OMG! =0 =0 =0
oh no!
i can't believe my fuckin eyes! =0
this chap was SO fuckin gd, but i just don't know what to say...
i'm like... WOW =0
and about ur response to my last review... i never ment to make u feel like an ass!!!
i just love to review and tell ppl what their fics made me feel or what i thought of them =)
if u don't like to do that, that's ur choice =P
Author's Response: Ha ha, it's fine. You didn't make me feel like an ass, I was just in a bad mood. I appreciate the great reviews! I'm glad that you liked the chapter! Thank you for reading!
Date: 02/02/08 06:27 am Title: Chapter 13
hihi =D
i loved it! XP
but then again, when do i not? =P
ur an awsome writer and i would love it if u update soon =D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm flattered! Wow, you've given me so many good reviews that I'm beginning to feel like an asshole for not reviewing other peoples' work. I think maybe I'll do that now... or I'll just read another Chuck Palahniuk book... they both make me feel like less of an asshole so whatever comes first.
Date: 02/02/08 03:18 am Title: Chapter 13
*sniff* awww poor billa T_T mean tomi!!
Author's Response: Yes, it makes me sad to write about Bill being sad. Though I think Tom's reaction was the most realistic I could make it. When I was writing Tom's dialogue, I was trying to imagine that feeling you get when someone asks you "Do you like so-and-so?" You automatically deny it and scoff at the asker no matter what you really think because you're so drilled to only say what's acceptable in our culture. And to make it worse, Bill asked Tom a question that's not only unnacceptable but illegal. That's why reacted so harshly without a real thought process to back it up. Bill, on the other hand, lacks a perseption of what's acceptable and unnacceptable (or at least ignores it) so he acts completely on his own principles. When the two polar opposite schools of thought clash, they create an unhappy Tom. Can you blame him?
Date: 01/30/08 11:40 am Title: Chapter 1
*dramatic gasp* i forgot to rate!! we can't have that now, can we?? XDD this is the 10th time i've reviewed this fic lol =P
Author's Response: Well, thanks for the rate! That's amazing, I haven't reviewed ten things in general. Ha ha. Thank you for reading/rating!
Date: 01/30/08 11:38 am Title: Chapter 1
oOo i love your style of writing, you're amazing ^_^ update soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really don't even know if the 12th chapter loaded onto the recent category yet, my computer was malfunctioning. Oh well, I hope it did. I shall be updating soon. Thank you for reading!
Date: 01/29/08 11:07 am Title: Chapter 4
haha! "Love Tom God." classic!
lol. i swear Bill's cynicism here is SOOO addictive! XD
love this fic!!! ^^
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that you liked it! Tom has always seemed like a really over confident yet hilarious person to me so that's how I'm trying to portray him in this fic. As for Bill, he's probably not very cynical at all, but cynicism is way more interesting to read. Ha ha! Thank you for reading!
Date: 01/27/08 01:48 am Title: Chapter 11
and yet again: i loved it =D
if i were bill, i'd pic up all the napkins that missed and dump them in andi's room! =0
u were wondering why my psychologist told my i should care less...
well... if u read my fic "actions and reactions" u might understand...
or atleast i hope u will =P
please write more soon, because i absolutely LOVE this fic! XP
Author's Response: Ah yes, but Bill isn't THAT smart. Or at least he's preoccupied. I shall definately check out your fic and review it! It sounds good! Thank you for reading!
Date: 01/26/08 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 11
im completely confused, are bill and Andreas together or not?
Author's Response: Well, Bill and Andreas were together. Past tense. Bill broke up with Andreas because he thought that their relationship was too one-sided. It was just asumed that Andreas felt the same way but was more hurt than Bill was. During the paper plane scene, Bill was trying to tell Andreas that he couldn't love anyone in a relationship way because he was too caught up with himself. Andreas realized that Bill couldn't be in a relationship but not for that reason. Andreas knew it was because Bill was in love with Tom. He got really mad at Bill for stringing him along while Bill knew that he'd never love him. Bill denied his love for Tom because he hadn't admitted it to himself yet. Upon seeing Andreas do hurt, he saw what his ignorance had done to others. He then knew that Andreas was right and that he did love Tom. So, in short, no they're not together. Thank you for reading!
Date: 01/26/08 05:01 am Title: Chapter 1
awwww sweetness ^_^ i wish my relationships were as good as that T_T
Author's Response: Don't we all? Thank you for reading!
Date: 01/25/08 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
OMFGZ, I love this story.
Tom God, lol.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you're enjoying it! And yes, Tom is really God. Isn't it obvious? Thank you for reading!
Date: 01/23/08 07:54 am Title: Chapter 10
hehe =P
that last scentence is like exactly how my psycologist told me to live =0
too bad i caan't seem to shake my habbit of caring =S
that whole caring busines is SO overrated don't u think? =0
all it brings is depression... ^o)
but i loved ur new chap, and i totally did that whole silence thingy for heath, poor guy =(
Author's Response: Ha ha. Yes, damn emotions, nothing good ever comes of them. Just look at how Romeo and Juliet turned out. I'm actually surprised that a psychologist would say that though. They always tell me to let my feelings out and that I'm in denial of some sort. Figures. Thank you for reading!
Date: 01/18/08 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 9
loved it! loved it! loved it! XP
it was great and i can't wait for more =D
yes, it was a little short, but i LOVED the end thingy that Bill wrote on the napkin! where did u get that from? =0
Author's Response: Thank you! I just made the napkin thing up. Sometimes I do that so I thought it would be interesting in a story. Thank you for reading!
Date: 01/14/08 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 8
you're crazy, and i love you.
Author's Response: Thank you, that pretty much sums me up right there. Thank you for reading!
Date: 01/14/08 09:34 am Title: Chapter 8
still loving ur fic hun XD
u better write more sson or i'm gonna have hunt u down and make u write it by holding a gun to the back of ur head =@
nah =P just kidding u =P i'd never use a gun =0 but maybe i'd still hunt u down *thoughtfull expression*
really well written XP
Author's Response: Ha ha! *Files for a restraining order* I'm glad that you like it! I'm sorry for being so slow but finals are next week at my school so I have tons of homework. I'll try to write as much as possible though. Thank you for reading!
Date: 01/11/08 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 7
ahahaha XP
i loved it =P
never stop writing like this (A)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll keep up the writing! Thank you for reading!
Date: 01/10/08 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 7
oOoOoOo draaaama!! XDD
Author's Response: Oh snap! More to come, my friend! Thank you for reading!rn