Date: 01/13/08 05:31 am Title: Chapter 1
please say that bill is just in the bathroom.....and that he comes out and confronts tom and isn't asleep otherwise he's going to unconsiously do something bad to tom......can't tom just cure him by getting him to snap out of it?
(the story is really good by the way..... more soon please)
Date: 01/13/08 04:16 am Title: Chapter 8
oh nooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!! where the fuck did he go?!?! BIIIILL!!!! where in hell are you?!
(bites my nails) this is not good..this is soooo not good!
by the way..I just LOVED the "DUH" sign lol I laughed so hard!!! xD
and WHY the fucking living hell is bill being so bitchy?! he just needs a good slp in the face! he needs his pills! arghh!!! ( I hope he's not gonna rape Saki xD )
omg...I'm so sleepless reading your story! (ironic..isnt it? lol) i just cant close my eyes!!! this is amazing and fuuuuuck! you got me so curious now!! xD I cant wait for another chapter! I'm so addicted!!! >=)
good work! really good work!
Date: 01/13/08 02:14 am Title: Chapter 8
nooooooooooo oh my god oh my god oh my god this is not happening
please let Tom save him before he does anything stupid please please please or else the next chapter is going to be so hard to read
*falls to knees and wipes tear in eye before folding hands* PLEASE
Date: 01/13/08 01:11 am Title: Chapter 8
OMG ! I love it !! *_*
Date: 01/13/08 12:19 am Title: Chapter 8
...holy hell...
OH SHIT!
*mega!flail!*
Date: 01/13/08 12:16 am Title: Chapter 8
CLIFFHANGER. Whyyyyyy???!!? I sense some nice sexomnia 'cesting coming up... Haha
Date: 01/12/08 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 8
scary...Bill's "hunting" for some girl....
Date: 01/09/08 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
oh wow. intense. i love it. billlllllll go back to tomiiii. this is so good, i can't wait for the next chapter. great job!
Date: 01/09/08 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 7
aw, im sad now... i need to know what happens... update soon please?
^_^[Sagey]
Date: 01/09/08 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 7
OMG!!! update pleeeeeeaase!!!!
xoxoxox
Date: 01/09/08 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 7
Nooo, poor Tom... poor Bill! My heart is physically aching, like.. it hurts xD
Awh, it's so sweet, and now I have a feeling in my gut, and the feeling is telling me to tell you to write more [A]. 'Cause I seriously, seriously love this story.
Date: 01/09/08 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 7
aww, this is so sad!!! i really feel sorry for both tom and bill!!!
please update soon!
Date: 01/09/08 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
*gasp* omg!! update soon!!
Date: 01/09/08 10:48 am Title: Chapter 7
Wow.
I never guessed that Bill was the one with sexomnia o__O
Date: 01/09/08 09:40 am Title: Chapter 7
oh
wow
that was more shocking than ever
wt will happen ??
update soon ...
Date: 01/09/08 09:26 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh gosh! I almost started crying ): The end of this chapter was so sad.
...And what a great twist in the plot.
But yeah, continue! (Happily, please? :))
Date: 01/09/08 09:00 am Title: Chapter 7
Aaahhhmm ahhm ahhhhhmm! (cries, head in hands) WHY, GOD?! WHY?! WHY DID THIS GIRL HAVE TO END IT HERE?!?! (cries even more)
why god..wh. (grabs a random old man who was walking in the street) WHY?!! TELL ME WHY!!! (shakes the old man like crazy) - I KNOW YOU KNOW IT!!! TELL ME WHY?! IT WAS SO PERFECT..AND I WAS LIKING IT SO MUCH!! (cries) ..I hate my life!
old man: (scared like hell) - I DONT KNOW ANYTHING!!! GET AWAY FROM ME! FREAK!!
me: (sobs) ... please upload fast.. I'll give you my cat! x'( ...my ps2! my..everything!! please do it.. I..!
old man voice: GUARDS!!! she's here!!!
guard: there you are! (grabbing me)
me: but!! I was just..!
guard: (looking at me) ... oh no..you again?! get the hell out of here! what did I told you last time?!
me: =_= ... "dont read fanfics outdoors" I know..
guard: then..?
me: I know.. me needs to go home. me needs to read in HOME. if not, big bad guard is gonna spank me. =_=
old man: WTF? o.O
Author's Response: lol your comments never cease to amse me....rnrnand let's talk more about the playstation... *big grin*
Date: 01/09/08 08:50 am Title: Chapter 7
Such a twist. I am so shocked about all of this. It's so great.
Date: 01/09/08 06:08 am Title: Chapter 7
HOLY SHIT. This is turning into a horrible mess.
Great job!
I'm liking that you're not leaving any easy avenues for them to take, and bringing the police in on it... wow. I am loving this story so much. Can't wait for the next installment!