Date: 07/26/11 09:06 am Title: Which bet?
SHE IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO STOOPID !!!
I would have taken all my things away and out of his life
Author's Response: So would I :P
Date: 07/26/11 07:51 am Title: I’d like to know you better
she gave of herself the image of a fast lay with no respect for herself
he only chases his own needs and pleasure from the start: in love or not she should have seen how he is manipulative and destructive
I mean a platic doll would have get the same effect on him
PLus he seems to be a bad fucker and violent: so bad in bed
Author's Response: True :)
Date: 10/24/10 09:51 am Title: Meeting you
bill !!!love it !!! =)
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 08/09/10 07:25 pm Title: I hate you!
Fantastic story! To read how he is treating her & knowing that she loves him too much to just leave him makes me sick to my stomach.
Author's Response: I'm really glad you like the story! And thanks for reviewing! :D
Date: 08/09/10 07:17 pm Title: I even bought a freaking ring
That was fucked up! I feel like crying for her. My heart is breaking here ;(
Date: 08/09/10 07:10 pm Title: Which bet?
OMFG! Seriously! WTF! What a prick! My heart is breaking for her ;[ I can't believe he could be so cruel. I'm glad that she has Tom she can turn to tho. I'm curious about this bet now.
Date: 08/09/10 07:01 pm Title: Home sweet home
Another great chapter!
Date: 08/09/10 06:50 pm Title: I love you too
Great chapter!
Date: 08/09/10 06:45 pm Title: Treat her like a lady
O shit! Bill needs to grow up & stop manipulating her. Tom's a sweetheart.
Date: 08/09/10 06:38 pm Title: Leave you fucking alone
I know what she's going thru. I've actually drove an hour before in the middle of the night to see my ex (yes my ex) who had me on the phone begging me to come see him. He was good at the guilt trips and then pulling the "I wish I was dead" thing knowing that I still cared about him. I hated it & I hated myself for giving in.
Date: 08/09/10 06:30 pm Title: I’d like to know you better
This is very interesting & I have a feeling things are going to get worse.
Date: 08/09/10 06:22 pm Title: I decide!!
Damn, I feel for her. I have actually been in a relationship with a guy just like ur Bill character. It's horible! Great chapter tho.
Date: 08/09/10 06:16 pm Title: You're so pretty
Great chapter!
Date: 08/09/10 06:04 pm Title: Meeting you
This story was recommended to me & she was right, it's really good.
Date: 08/08/10 10:23 pm Title: Which bet?
good...god that emotionally horrific. if this was any other story i would be too discusted to finish it. But i find it interesting exploring a different facet of childish behavior, the bratty kind, which is the extreame opposite of what Bill usually acts like. He is usually a beakon of happy glowing light. In this story he's a nightmare.
Author's Response: I'm really happy you like the story and that you wanted to finish it. It means a whole lot to me - and thank you for reviewing that much too ;) <3
Date: 08/08/10 10:10 pm Title: Home sweet home
that went well, however i'm still really worried for her
Date: 08/08/10 09:59 pm Title: Treat her like a lady
Tomi is a sweetie for cheering her up. oh god she's in for it. Bill seems to be an emotional vampire.
Date: 08/08/10 09:50 pm Title: Leave you fucking alone
wow i really hate that childish 'you don't really want to see me do you?' attitude. realistically, I couldn't handle a guy like that. but this is still an interesting story
Date: 08/08/10 09:32 pm Title: I decide!!
this is so exciting and very believable.
Date: 08/08/10 08:56 pm Title: You're so pretty
that was delightful and a teeny bit strange. ^_^