Date: 09/19/09 10:59 pm Title: New School - Rain So Close
oh Bill =[
Date: 09/19/09 10:55 pm Title: New School - Rain So Close
You know, I think Bill might have a better time if he were to open up a bit and not be such a douche, acting like a spoiled brat. Just a thought.
And on the subject of thoughts, cuz I have them sometimes, lol, it seems like every time I see a message from you on Skype, you're gone by the time I see it. I've been working crazy hours and all, so maybe that has something to do with it, you being in school and all.
And that is all, lol.
Date: 09/19/09 08:05 pm Title: New School - Rain So Close
HELLO ACELY-BELLY!
Now that I got that off my chest... Here's with the review.
I loved the last line, I really did. It was precious and serious at the same time. I went "aww!"
Bill's internal development is going along well, you're putting his emotions mostly in charge of him, but not forgetting about their Kaulitz vanity.
So far the details are going good, though there are a few chapters that could use some work. There aren't as many errors as usual, you probably used Spell-Check.
But, all in all, so far so good. I like it, and you know how hard that is for me to do.
Good luck and try not to break your fingers while typing.
Date: 09/19/09 07:37 pm Title: New School - Rain So Close
Whooooo! Poor Bill, he's sad...hug Tomi damn you, hug him! lol
Date: 09/19/09 07:31 pm Title: New School - Rain So Close
Awe poor billa
Date: 08/19/09 04:05 pm Title: Underdressed
plz update soon thx=]
Date: 08/19/09 10:16 am Title: Underdressed
awwww billl!!!!! hes such a fucking brat, i love it!!! (luv u 2!!!)
Date: 08/19/09 10:07 am Title: Underdressed
*snorts* penis head... *snorts again*
Date: 08/19/09 12:29 am Title: Underdressed
"I am sorry that I was a penis head the night before today."
ahahahaha
Bill's terrible english is oddly adorable x]
Date: 08/18/09 10:52 pm Title: Underdressed
Hehe...Coco Puffs are sometimes the highlight of my day too.
Date: 08/18/09 08:26 pm Title: Underdressed
my new favorite line of all time is "I am sorry that I was a penis head..." i literally rolled on the floor laughing...can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 07/26/09 04:42 pm Title: Whales
moreeee pleaseeeeeeeeeee? *begs*
Date: 07/26/09 02:40 pm Title: Whales
ooh plzplzpzllpzl update soooon thx=]==]
Date: 07/26/09 01:19 am Title: Whales
You are such a doll for using me! Woot! I'm married to royalty! I love it.
I gotts say, I like cows. I don't know what it is about them, but they make me laugh.
And sheep. What's with the sheep? You seem to be a bit stuck on them. But that's alright, we'll manage. Will there be any sheep shenanigans in this story?
Author's Response: not at all... there's just a lot of sheep in Wales... You cannot have Wales and not have the sheep and the cows, I'm not stuck on sheep, just had to mention them... rnrnPlus... Uhm... Yea... Geo is cheating on you with Gusti and You're with Roy... lmao, how nice?!
Date: 07/07/09 12:30 am Title: Fake World
Wow, talk about a brat. I understand where he's coming from, but really. Does he have to be so "Woe is me, the world is out to get me" blah, blah, blah about it? He'll live, trust me.
Date: 07/07/09 12:15 am Title: Fake World
aw, man poor bill, i would never have pictured nathalie and Simone together, lol but it sfits! an dliek omg genius!
Date: 07/06/09 03:21 pm Title: Fake World
plzplzplzplz update sooon...thx soso much=]=]
Date: 07/06/09 10:14 am Title: Fake World
Great. Can't wait for more :)