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Reviewer: meganpaige03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/11 11:07 pm Title: a roof can change alot

amazing. i loved that you portrayed Tom as the hurt one. I do not see that very often.

Author's Response: thank you :Drnidk why but i always have seen tom's big brother act as a kind of show. i think they both take care of each other the same. they are both just as strong as the other.

Reviewer: jase Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/09 05:14 am Title: a roof can change alot

i liked it a lot, but i think if it had been a little more detailed...a little longer...it could have been even better.

just my opinion though. good work :]

Author's Response: thank you alot for reading. and it would have been longer but when i started writing it last year i had a bit of a writer's blocks and when i started agaqin i had no clue where it was going and it was jsut a mess. so i fixed it up and was like........ "good enough"rnbut thank you so so so much for taking the time to read/ review. it means so much : D

Reviewer: sadangel10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/09 09:51 pm Title: a roof can change alot

awwwe taht was really sad but at least you din't kill them off=Dthat makes me happy=D

i think you did a good job!
i liked it=D

Author's Response: Thank you so so so much. Your review means the world to me. It made my day

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