Date: 06/23/09 07:36 pm Title: Four - Music
I liked it. *thumbs up*
Date: 06/23/09 05:48 pm Title: Four - Music
Seems like someone is jealous...
Date: 06/23/09 05:47 pm Title: Four - Music
He likes her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! more please
Date: 06/21/09 08:03 pm Title: One - Romeo and Juliet
I really like this. I can't wait for more
Date: 06/19/09 01:45 am Title: Three - Derrick
Someone is jealous...
Date: 06/12/09 06:07 am Title: One - Romeo and Juliet
I really like it so far, hope you update soon, can't wait to read more.
Date: 06/11/09 11:59 am Title: Two - Study Hall
I really like what you got so far. Can't wait to find out why Tom hates them so much.
Date: 06/11/09 02:57 am Title: Two - Study Hall
"And everyone does but us," Georg was the one to verbalize what we were all thinking in the calm silence of our minds. And what's sad was not that we all thought the same thing. What was sad was that we thought it because it was true.
^ This, in my opinion, was a great ending to the chapter. It kind of reminded me of how Alexandre Dumas describes the feeling between the Three Musketeers and when they know there doom is not a lie in 'The man in the iron mask'.
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But really, this was a great chapter, and i can vaguely see how this story is unravelling now. :D
Date: 06/11/09 02:30 am Title: One - Romeo and Juliet
I'm a Het lover at Heart, and i would probably call this cliched-(from stories i have read where bill is the 'best friend')-, but i can't bring myself to do it since i can honestly say i enjoyed this alot. The dialogue and diction captured my attention and i loved this first chapter, Great work :D
Date: 06/08/09 12:18 am Title: One - Romeo and Juliet
oo toms an ass, anyways i can't wait to read chapter 2 when it's written
Date: 06/07/09 04:17 pm Title: One - Romeo and Juliet
yay!!!!! another tom/ofc!!!!!!! you are just so amazing at writing these, and this first chapter doesn't disappoint!!! i love how you depict each of these characters... it's intriguing me, and i can't wait to see what happens next!!!!
Date: 06/07/09 03:42 pm Title: One - Romeo and Juliet
I like it.