Date: 02/15/11 01:31 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh no :,( poor Tom and Bella :,(
I like your stories, I noticed that there is a pattern. You seem like you like writing hurt/comfort stories with sometimes unhappy endings. I like it because sometimes in reality it never really is a fairytale ;-)
Author's Response: Exactly :)
Date: 02/15/11 01:13 am Title: Chapter 1
I feel bad for Tom, :( though I'm kinda confused.
Date: 04/24/10 11:02 am Title: Chapter 2
Hahaha, i didn't even realise there was a second chapter : whoops! my bad, LOL.... But this chapter was as good as the first :D
“If you knew, if you just really, really knew, Bella.” You tell me. “You would never let things like that get you mad. If you just knew how much I think about you and love you and how I want to marry you and have kids with you someday, you’d never flinch when girls come and talk to me.” <--Fave line in this chap xD
I think everybody gets their doubts about the others' feelings towards them.... It would definately be SOO much easier if we knew :
AGAIN! BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!! i adore the scene in Mexico, and the love-making part.... so sad but really passionate.... YOU ARE SERIOUSLY AN AMAZING WRITER!!
I friggen' love this story! xD hehe
Author's Response: Glad you liked it :) Thank you for reading!
Date: 04/24/10 10:33 am Title: Chapter 1
That was beautiful. xD
I love the way you write, so much emotion in your words and such well-structured sentences through out the whole story. I love the plot! Amazing and so different from the usual twincest stories on this site... Enjoyed it heaps; definately favouring it. =)
My favourite line, "But I don’t understand. I really don’t. I can’t understand anything because Bella is too busy eating my heart up with its four arms and wings." <-- LOVE IT! It's so deep and meaningful.... Really cute too; nice touch with the four arms and wings... I also like the part where she swears, it's like she doesn't do it often and Tom seems really surprised that she did... i like it :]
It was really well written and i actually became teary right at the end- Quite sad, but so enthralling; i honestly couldn't pull my eyes away from the sreen :D
Great job. <3 it :]
Date: 02/26/10 02:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh god this was so sad.
It broke my heart and I was almost crying by the end. ;-;
Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 02/01/10 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
chillingly beautiful and really sad - you are truly an amazing author :) im just slightly confused - does Tom kill himself or just want to at the end? or is it neither?
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. He doesn't kill himself, he's just broken hearted
Date: 10/03/09 04:22 am Title: Chapter 2
more stories pleaseeeeeeeee
Date: 10/03/09 04:22 am Title: Chapter 2
more stories pleaseeeeeeeee
Date: 10/03/09 04:06 am Title: Chapter 1
your skills amaze me
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 07/21/09 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
:|:|.God.That was mindblowing.I wasn't expecting this , no waaaay.So they were together.Clarified problem,perfect.It's obviously they live everything very intensely , they beat each other , and then they made each other cry and then they ...made... love to each other, and then they teared each other apart once again.And I don't like this Seth guy , because Tom should be in his place , yeah , I'll always keep Tom's part.By the way , what happened with him?
As usual , the fic was great,I'm sorry I haven't read it earlier , I should have know it would be an extraordinary one.
Author's Response: I must admit I felt kind of weird writing this, not because of the incest - I have nothing against it, everyone is free to do or feel whatever they want, but for assuming that Tom would love his brother in that way doesn't feel right for me (because they are real not some characters in a book), so I understand your reticence in reading this. Still that idea came to me and I couldn't let it go. :) Well you shouldn't hate Seth, he gives Bella a normal (in the eyes of our society) relationship which she never could've had with Tom. I didn't really think what would happen with Tom after this so I can't answer that. Anyway, thanks for giving it a chance, glad you liked it.
Date: 07/21/09 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, to tell you the truth ,I haven't read this story because the beginning reminds me too much of Bill , and well , it's still about that incest relation that I'm not such a big fan of.But as I love your writing , I decided to give it a try , it's a good fic , at least the first part ;)),because I haven't read the second one yet.
I haven't understand something totally ,she said she was tired of kissing and wanting all that , she felt something more for him , too ? Or it was just him ? And did they ever acted more than siblings? I mean did they acknowledged their relationship as it is , as they want it to be ?
I hope Tom won't kill himself , it would be such a tragic end.
By the way , I love this type of writing , all this actions that happened with them at some point or another , it's like surprising the most important parts of their relationship.
Date: 07/21/09 10:25 am Title: Chapter 1
this is so ridiculously good, that I dont know if I want to kill you or hug you.
This made me cry so much and its such a good story!
:)
Author's Response: Thank you :) I would prefer the hug though
Date: 06/08/09 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
Fuck! This is... Really. I'll try to agree with this, but I now I can't, naybe cause I'm crying like softie.. but... really... I can't think about this normally after this scene with Bella and Tom. When he's crying, and beg her to call him Tom and.. stop playing games. She stops. But... well, maybe, I don't totally understand the end and I need a little explanation from you, because... No. it's not like I'm totally ignoring drama-ending, but... only in the way, when I understand that. This way, I understand something, but not totally. Is she going to stay with Seth? Then, why? Because she understands that her relationship with Tom isn't normal? Or what? Or she get sick of this games with him?
Anyway, I really like it, because it's well written as always and... this makes me feel.
Thank you for this story and I'm looking forward to another =) *if it will be =)*
Always yours,
Milana
Author's Response: Because her relationship with Tom is considered abnormal and she can't handle that. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for reading.
Date: 06/07/09 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
awww this was beautifully sad
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 06/07/09 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
sooo beautiful...I think I've never read something so till now..great
Author's Response: Thank you :) I was kind of nervous because I never wrote something like that before...
Date: 06/07/09 08:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Well, I'm here! =) Yeah, you know, I can't miss this. You know, it's a little strange for me to read paring like this in het. But it's fine. Your style and how you describe it, just... just let me forget about pairing Tom/Bill and... and I wanna say that this is really good thing. Just beginning, so I hope I can say more. But will it be long or short?
Oh, by the way, I wanna ask something, can I? This pairing... yeah, it's quite weird and I'm just curious, why don't you write slash stories? The slash is more popular, you know, and many people go to the slash world, but you're really talented and you're in het fiction? Quite weird *but I'm the same xD*
So... I'm looking forward for the next chapter =)
Always yours,
Milana =)
Author's Response: This is a short story. Actually 2 chapters.
I must admit I felt kind of weird writing this, not because of the incest but because Tom and Bill are real not some characters I invented. Still the idea was bugging me and I couldn't let go.
I made Bill a girl because I simply cannot write slash, I'm not good at it.One more thing I want to thank you for all your support. It means so much to me :)