Date: 07/03/09 04:01 pm Title: Initial Settings
whoo, this is good! update soon, :D
Date: 06/29/09 07:22 pm Title: Initial Settings
hey good job you did so far.i like where this is going:)
keep up the good work!
Date: 06/29/09 07:20 pm Title: Initial Settings
hey good job you did so far.i like where this is going:)
keep up the good work!
Date: 06/06/09 09:39 pm Title: Initial Settings
Okay, this is the second time I've written out this review. The first time it logged me out. -.-; Not funny.
All in all, I didn't find any mistakes... But I might have missed one, so don't rely too strongly on that. xD
And the flow was lovely. Kinda choppy in some parts, yes, but it's getting so much better!
You know... In the past couple years, you've grown so much. :) I'm so proud of you, Liebeling, so very proud. Can you believe that only three years ago, we began our first story together? Where has the time gone?
Awesome job! Keep up your astounding work!!
Author's Response: YAY! That made my day! I'm so proud of myself... I've been watching my flow A LOT lately after Mina and Heather helped me with something (which I still need to finish and let you read.... hmmmmm..... I wonder where I put that - no joke, I can't find it). And, no, I can't believe it's been three years since I've started writing. It doesn't seem like that long but I still remember our first story that you begged me to do: that one from Mr. Oakes biology class, 5th hour. Good times, good times. Danke! So much! Ich liebe dich, mein Schwester! Ich liebe dich viel. Und ich werde immer.
Date: 06/06/09 04:33 am Title: Initial Settings
Super cute. :3 But i'm also super tired... I'll come back and review this tomorrow, 'kay?
Date: 06/04/09 05:30 pm Title: Initial Settings
Sounds like an interesting story.
Date: 06/04/09 04:37 pm Title: Initial Settings
hihi more please!! love it so far!
Author's Response: Thank you so much.... I will have more up soon.