Date: 04/14/13 10:03 pm Title: One Shot
What dirty thing did he whisper softly into her ear? Just Kidding! xD Great one shot! Had me on the edge of my seat! :D
Date: 12/25/10 06:46 am Title: One Shot
Hmmm. I'm not sure. Ok, I think that maybe next time you can focus more on the speech and improing the way that the characters interact whilst it's happening.
But a good enjoyable read. I hope that you take my advice as helpful not hurtful.
Thankyou for entertaining me!
Xxx
Author's Response: I always appreciate advice! Anything to help me become a better writer is helpful. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/05/09 03:46 pm Title: One Shot
haha I figured as much .... *smirk*
Author's Response: ;D
Date: 10/05/09 02:46 pm Title: One Shot
Good job, very hot.
Author's Response: Thank you :) That's what I was going for. :)
Date: 06/14/09 10:28 pm Title: One Shot
Simple but brilliant.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I can't remember anyone ever using the term brilliant on one of my reviews before! :)
Date: 06/13/09 08:43 am Title: One Shot
howdy again! long time no ramble ya know not counting this morning becaus hat would make what im rambling about slightly redundant now wouldt it?anywho
thank god you;ve given up on writing *whispers* het *shivers and shakes* its jus not right! anyway ant wait for dancing in the rin to go up IM me if ya need any help im always there! mwahahaha
Author's Response: I'm glad you're always here! XD I need your help a lot of the time. I'm kinda blocked up right now, but I have to get offline pretty quickly. I'll bug you for help as soon as I have time. :)
Date: 06/13/09 03:12 am Title: One Shot
NOOOO!!! so many levels of wrong!!
actually it was really good but its HET! also wat happened to dacing in the rain?? you never posted it!! um anyway apat from m extremly dislike of het its actually really good but wrong on a diffeent level lol ok my usual rambling are starting again so im gona quit whils im vaguely ahead :S
*hands over skittles* good job!
much love
Ellie
xXx
BOOM CHIKA WAWA!
Author's Response: hi again! Ok, this was originally supposed to be for the flipflop challenge but I didn't think it was good enough, so I didn't post it. Dancing in the rain isn't done yet. :( I'm trying to get the second part done (Bills POV part) before I post it. I'm glad you liked my *whispers* het *shivers and shakes* aberration. First and last time I'm delving into THAT category.
Date: 06/05/09 02:16 am Title: One Shot
aww! this is a very cute story it sounds like it could go on!
Author's Response: thank you :) I'm pretty bad at writing het normally, so I doubt it will continue. Just had a lucky day, I guess!
Date: 06/04/09 07:09 pm Title: One Shot
For posting for a first time, that was really good! Very well written and very, very steamy. I'm still blushing from it. :) Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I'm glad I made you blush, that was the intent ^_^