Date: 03/13/08 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 4: Aftermath
whahahaha
“Oh, it’s Bring Your Daughter To Work Day.”
man what an amazing family^^
Date: 03/13/08 06:31 pm Title: Epilogue
That last line was creepy. It would be really cool if you continued this series. By the way, you are amazing, just thought I'd throw that out there.
Date: 03/13/08 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 3: We Are Deadly Serious
“Don’t try me little bitch.” Corrine sat up and stared at the man until he started to squirm. Daddy always said you can judge a man by how he reacts to your stare. This one was a coward. She figured.
“Daddy says you’re not that good of a fighter.” She said, enjoying the way the rage flashed in his eyes.
“Say one more thing about your daddy and I’m going to strangle you.” Corrine smiled.
“Try me and I’ll break your motherfucking arm.” She rolled her eyes and continued to gaze at him. It was the only amusing thing that Corrine could do.
man you cracked me up with that!!^^
hehe I love how bill remembered certain people he will pay back later^^
just wonderfulXD
Date: 03/13/08 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 2: Running Errands
oh mannnn
Bill how could you be unarmed...
was looking forward for a nice massacre:(
hehe who know's what will happenXD
*reads next chapter*
Date: 03/13/08 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 1: A Day In The Life
hmm I hope Corinna will understand Jonathan, why he's working and stuff.
*wonders who the twins are working for*
Date: 03/13/08 03:19 pm Title: Prologue: Like Fathers Like Daughter
hehe I bet they are vey Proud of THEIR daughter eh? heehehe
Date: 03/12/08 05:52 am Title: Epilogue
This was an amazing story. i just love the whole concept of it. and, with all things taken on to consideration, your characterization is all very believable. hears hoping that you'll continue this breathtaking story, going by the end notes it look like you might :D
Date: 03/10/08 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 2: Running Errands
The bedroom scene with Corrine asking if she can date made me laugh soo hard.
I absolutely love your stories :]
Date: 03/06/08 01:52 pm Title: Epilogue
i read the hole series today. it's amazing!
i don't like Gustav anymore :P
i hope you write another one ^^
Date: 03/02/08 10:04 pm Title: Epilogue
haha i loved it and can't wait for the sequel
Date: 02/18/08 12:45 am Title: Epilogue
Hahaha. Awesome ending. Love this series sooooo much. My favourite stories over every other story in the world =D. Are you going to keep writing this series? I hope you do
Date: 02/15/08 07:00 am Title: Epilogue
omg! =0
so fuckin gd XP
i loved it and can't wait til the next story! =D
just one minor thing that anoyed me though... i hope u won't be offended, because there is deffinately no offence intended! =0
the little part u wrote in german wasn't really correctly written =/
unless u wanted them too be really polite, it was basically just the grammar that was a little off...
corinne's line should probably be: "ich liebe dich, so du musst meinen Zwilling sein"
and janathan's should probbaly be: "ich liebe dich auch"...
probably difficult for someone who has english as their native language, but "Sie" is the polight form of "du"... in english everyone is "you" but in most other languages that would be rude...
hope u understand and aren't offended (A)
Date: 02/14/08 06:25 pm Title: Epilogue
OOOO does that mean theres gonna be another one???!!! If so,yay!!! Can't wait!!
Date: 02/13/08 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 2: Running Errands
Oooh, so Corrine has her own guns? Awesome. Even more awesome is that Jonathan didn't even flinch. *claps*
Bill and the maid's head FTW! Seriously, how fucking cool was that?
And Tom was furious that people were shooting at his baby. Wrong move, bad guys.
The bed scene had me rolling. "Can I go on a date?" Tom nearly had a heart attack. LOL! And Bill is all: Turn the fucking lights off now! *giggles* I take it Corrine is wanting a date with Jonathan? How adorable. Is curious as to how Jonathan fits into this whole situation. He obviously is Bill's pet, knows what goes on in their household...is he a killer too? Just wondering.
Oh shit. Those bank robbers picked the wrong time to rob this bank. And Bill is unarmed. *frets*
As usual, I'm on the edge of my seat. Damn you, woman! LOL!
Date: 02/13/08 06:46 pm Title: Epilogue
Brilliant!
I was not expecting that twist at all!
Date: 02/13/08 10:55 am Title: Epilogue
a nother one!? yay!
Date: 02/13/08 06:52 am Title: Prologue: Like Fathers Like Daughter
I just need you to know exactly how much I love this story. I always become so fucking happy when I see that there's a new chapter, like jumping around and screaming 8)
Well, actually I think I said everything in the review to Hell and High water, this was just as good as that one was.
I'll probably read this one over and over again, since I can't get enough of Tom's and Bill's weird life. I love the action-scenes, but the twincest, is just WHOA! LOVE it!
You write like a proffessional author and I think you really can improve and become something. :)
It would be so cool if you could do a sequel, maybe about Corrine and Jonathan.
I could probably tell you a million of more things that i love about your story, but this is probably enough for this time. :D
And I can tell you that I LOOOOVE it and as I said, I will probably read it ten more times and still not be tired of it!
Cookie to yoooou!
Date: 02/13/08 04:36 am Title: Epilogue
I swear to whatever God there is I'm trembling. Why do I always have to read these chapters at school?
My whole stomach is in a knot, and I can't fucking calm down.
Why? Why did it have to end I ask myself... and the only worthy answer I come up with is that "all good things come to an end"
Such a silly clichè -_-
Well... this was an amazing thing, and I'm not letting it come to an end...'Cause in my oppinion things this good aren't handed out like candy on halloween...
I feel so attatced to this story, like it's a little child I want to hold in my arms forever so it won't leave me.
Okay, now I'm just being pathetic.
But seriously... this can't be the end...
This can't end before Bill slits Tom's throat and Tom shoots Bill in the head, and they go to hell, and they kill everyone including the Devil...
And then they make their way up to heaven, and do the same thing... Paint the sky in blood...
*sniffle* Okay now I'm crying... so I'll stop it at this, and let the rest play out in my head..
I'm gonna print this story out on paper and keep it till the day I die...
Seriously!
Date: 02/12/08 08:33 pm Title: Epilogue
OMG. What a rollercoaster ride this series has been. And I enjoyed every freaked out minute of it ^^ *claps*
It scares me though, the image of what Corrine can become *shudders*.
I can't wait for When Hell Freezes Over.