Date: 01/08/08 08:33 am Title: Chapter 3: We Are Deadly Serious
“Bill’s still alive, I would have felt it if he died.”
Lol i just had to say that this was my fave line of the chapter XD
aawwww they're just so adorable when they're deadly XD
Author's Response: Aren't they though?
Date: 01/08/08 08:25 am Title: Chapter 3: We Are Deadly Serious
Ok another great chapter as always.
Corinne scares the fucking shit out of me, but i still love her!!
Tom as always is such a bad ass when killing.
Bill as calm as always and feared by many without him even trying.
the fact that he already wanted to kill the people that were being held hostage made me laugh.
as for that guy that Corinne seemed to recognize his walk, i can't help but feel it's someone she knows... Maybe too well?... i'm not going to press on that subject.
as for that huge thing Bushido was talking about, i kinda have a feeling of what it could be and who's behind it. but i won't say anything.
great job as always!!
Author's Response: Thank you Kat, and thank you for your review!
Date: 01/08/08 08:19 am Title: Chapter 3: We Are Deadly Serious
I swear every time I see that you've updated this story I do a happy dance.
I'm sure you can already tell how I feel about this chapter, I'm a little predictable like that.
Author's Response: :D thank you, and thank you for your review!
Date: 01/05/08 05:43 pm Title: Prologue: Like Fathers Like Daughter
I wanted to comment "Like fathers like daughter" and then I realized that was the name of the chapter XD So I'll just say good job instead.
Author's Response: lol Thank you, and thank you for your review!
Date: 01/05/08 02:18 pm Title: Prologue: Like Fathers Like Daughter
You amaze me! Really!
It's like you have the imagination of a
child. In a good way. There are no limits
to what can happen in your stories and
that's what makes them so great. And
yet you write like you've lived a
thousand years, training your gift to
perfection.
You truly are one of the greatest writers
I've ever come across.
And I literally read almost everything I
can get my hands on.
You could even make a knitting-recipe
the most interesting thing in the world!
I love the scenes where the twins do
what they do best. I WANT to be Bill in
this story. And normally I don't like
the idea of cutting someone’s head of. *G*
I completly surrende myself! *Bows*
Oh! Just a quick question. Do Dunja and
Jonathan know what the twins do for a living?
Author's Response: Yes Dunja and Jonathan knows. Thank you and thank you for your review!
Date: 01/05/08 10:14 am Title: Chapter 2: Running Errands
I was practically jumping and screaming of happiness whe i saw there was a new chapter xD
Great chapter, but i hate that cliffhanger, AAARRGH!
Author's Response: lol Sorry, that's the way it had to be. :D Thank you for your review!
Date: 01/05/08 02:50 am Title: Chapter 2: Running Errands
i love this action, lalalaa. seriously good, Corinne is so tough girl i like her.
and i need more.
Author's Response: :D You'll get more annie, trust me. Thank you for your review.
Date: 01/04/08 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 2: Running Errands
Nice AU. Very promising! Hope to see more posted soon!
Author's Response: You will, and thank you for your review!
Date: 01/04/08 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 2: Running Errands
ooooh... exciting
Author's Response: thank you chica!
Date: 01/04/08 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 2: Running Errands
NEEIN !! I can't belive this! You need to write more! OMG !! WHAT WILL HAPPEN !? !!! I'm going crazy o.O I LOVE IT
Author's Response: Please don't go crazy Gisele. lol I don't want that to happen. As to what will happen next, you'll have to tune in. :D
Date: 01/04/08 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 2: Running Errands
OMG!! OK!!
Lol i loved the scene where the twins are in bed and Corinne comes in, it just felt like a typical family scene.
and the dating part, just awesome!!
I also enjoyed the begining where they are killing people, just like the good old days.
and the comment about the heat and them not being able to live there, classic.
oh and the fact that Corinne pulled Tom's gun as she was cleaning it, damn that child is fearless.
and when the robbery starts all she could think of was not being able to shop, Lol this kid rocks!!
i drooled when Tom growled cause they were shooting at Bill, lol i just wanted to scream it was so amazingly arousing!!
fuck!!!
God if Tom was there when that guy pulled a gun to Bill's head, that would so be the last thing he would ever do.
not only is Bill's life in danger but Corinne's as well.
aawwww the family life :D
AMAZING LIKE ALWAYS!!!
*bows* I'm not worthy!
Author's Response: *bows* Thank you Kat, I'm not worthy of such praise.
Date: 01/04/08 05:09 pm Title: Prologue: Like Fathers Like Daughter
Bill.
God, Bill, why don't you have at least one blade with you.
Maybe Corrine will use her HipHop Daddy gun skills to save the day?
Who Knows?
Author's Response: LOL against at least twenty men? I don't think so. She's not Mary Sue.
Date: 01/04/08 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 2: Running Errands
Urgh, stupid Bill... Why doesnt he know kung fu? Lol, i loved the bit where tom is talking to the spanish guy and kills him, it made of laugh so hard XD i Fucking love your stories XD
Author's Response: lol thank you, and thank you for your review!
Date: 01/04/08 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 2: Running Errands
I was thinking to myself that would be...wow.. if Andreas made appeared again
Author's Response: Andreas isn't coming back. He's still in Germany.
Date: 01/02/08 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 1: A Day In The Life
I wasn't sure I'd enjoy attention being taken away from the twins, but I like this Corinne and Jonathan thing. It's kind of refreshing.
And holy shit, the opening scene was so, so good. Very yum, and very sweet.
Author's Response: :D thanks chica
Date: 01/02/08 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 1: A Day In The Life
I really hope this one will be as good as HHW, cause i really loved that one. But I'm sure it will be :)
I can't wait for the next chapter, hurry up, please.
I really like to see what'll happen to Corinne, what's gonna be her specialty, is she gonna be as good as her dad and dad (xD)
I would like to see Corinne at school, how she is with her friends, is she as cold as Bill and Tom, or can she love people. Is people afraid of her, like everyone was for Bill and Tom.
I'm really curious how this will end up like. Is there gonna be a sequel after this, or is this the real end?
Author's Response: *blinks* Well, I have more chapters if that's what you're asking. Stay tuned!
Date: 01/02/08 08:55 am Title: Chapter 1: A Day In The Life
oooh, that's incredible. seriously.
full of everything.
Author's Response: lol thanks annie, and thank you for your review.
Date: 01/02/08 05:29 am Title: Prologue: Like Fathers Like Daughter
*Glances at warnings* I love you and I love it and Corrine is a doll (although if I knew her in real life I'd have to kill her) and you're awesome but I'm watching you. So... just mind your ass. ;)
Author's Response: :P
Date: 01/01/08 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 1: A Day In The Life
*squeal*
Loooove it
Author's Response: *squeal* Soooo glad.
Date: 01/01/08 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1: A Day In The Life
Ok you know exactly how i feel XD
seriously, i'm amazed.
Tom was finally able to show love to someone other than Bill and was still able to keep his love for him.
i love how you have Corinne showing both their trates, it just makes everything click together.
god i wish i could leave a better review, you deserve it!!
Author's Response: Thank you Kat, whatever you feel like saying is awesome. Thank you for the review.