Date: 01/17/08 09:33 pm Title: Prologue: Like Fathers Like Daughter
I was very skeptical at first to read this story, but thanks to your wonderful fans who have reviewed your story, I became wildy intrigued and clicked on the first chapter faster, immediately beginning the wonderful read.
And what a wonderful first read it was. I only, I'm only just getting to the 2nd chapter, but as a fellow Author myself (I don't have any of my work posted just yet), I know that every comment counts ^-^
btw, Lb29;ve Corrine. Especially b/c she's a redhead *cough* ...like me ^^
'Tis a shame though, that so many people fear Billy T,T ..... oh well *w*
Moving on.....
~Ria b29;
Date: 01/17/08 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 5: Just Dropping By
that was incredible :D cant wait for the next chapter
Date: 01/17/08 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 5: Just Dropping By
damn, that was a great good night story... Tulip, Daisy, Cloudy and Sunny... and the last line... yeah, I'm gonna have nice dreams tonight :3 Thank you ;)
Date: 01/17/08 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 5: Just Dropping By
ahhh! new chapter please
this is like the only story i'm reading and really enjoying at the moment, i seriously love it.
and did you get the name Dunja from the Zimmer 483 dvd? i was watching it and some lady named Dunja was in it haha, and i thought of this story
anyways, great job
Date: 01/17/08 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 5: Just Dropping By
*SCREAMS*
OH MY FUCKING GOD!!
Alright 1: Corrine is so fucking bad ass!! God i hope my kids end up like her.
I mean god not only attitude but skills too!! Lol i'm in love XD
2: And Even though she's so evil she still has the innocnce of a child.
“Ew... No one wants to see their parents make out. That’s gross!”
Lol that line alone was enough to show that Corrine was still a 'Normal' kid.
“I’ll sing for you…” He said lowly, earning him a deep chuckle from Tom. Corrine looked back and forth between the two of them; aghast.
“Daddy!” She yelped, and Bill sighed, turning back towards the warehouse.
“God, having a kid is such a drag.” He pouted. Corrine smirked and pointed.
OH MY GOD that just cracked me up.
Only Bill and Tom could get turned on during a stakeout...
hahaha and the fact that Corrine didn't get hurt by Bill's remark, but instead smirked was another way of showing how sick and and twisted she really is. Just like her parents.
“Hi.” He said. “Our daughter wanted to try out some things on you, hope you don’t mind.”
I read that line and i pictured Tom somewhat crouched down staring at the "Andrew" like he was a five year old, and talking to him in a simple and sweet voice, it gave me chills.
Corrine looked down at the bleeding man unconscious on the ground and wrinkled her nose before looking back up at her fathers. “Don’t get blood on me.”
hahahah She's so Bill's daughter.
“Was that Jost’s kid?” Gustav finally asked, curiosity gnawing at him. Tom shook his head.
“No, she’s ours.”
Gah Tom is so bad ass!!
Gustav showing up made me scream, i remembered all the events from the first fic and wondered if Bill would bring up that he was his'Pet'... I grinned when he mentioned it.
Any way i'm just rambbling.
great job as always hun :D
Date: 01/17/08 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 5: Just Dropping By
r0;Thatr17;s unfortunate. Next time you come to Manhattan, wer17;re going to get together. Be glad you were my favorite pet Gustav, because if you werenr17;t-r1;
r0;-I would kill you myself for just dropping by.r1; Tom interjected as he pushed the man into the hall and slammed the door in his face.
bbbbbrilliantttttttt!
Date: 01/17/08 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 5: Just Dropping By
GUSTAV!!! yay, I'm glad he's finally back...cept he's a "good guy" and all boring now.... lol jk. Besides, it'll be interesting to see how he gets along with Corrine ^^ Dude, I'm sure you're getting tired of hearing how great this story is...so I'll just wait till the last chapter to let my feelings run free :)
Date: 01/16/08 07:06 am Title: Chapter 4: Aftermath
How *do* you come up with these plotlines? Amazing!
I love it! More? Soon?
Date: 01/16/08 06:59 am Title: Chapter 4: Aftermath
Oohoohoo. This story gives me all kinds of good shivers. PLS UPDATE SOOON!!!! :D
Date: 01/15/08 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 4: Aftermath
OMG please upload a new chapter!
it took me a while to realize corrine got the anthonys wallet from the previous chapter haha, amazing its one of my fav stories right now
Date: 01/14/08 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 4: Aftermath
ahahahahah
please write more soon because i can't wait for more of this XP
ur an awsome writer! and i absolutely still can't believe the twins kept corrine =0
but it's just as amazing as the 1st story and i have to say they're some of my fave fics ever XD
Date: 01/14/08 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 4: Aftermath
HHAAHHHH! I LOVE IT!
Date: 01/14/08 08:53 am Title: Prologue: Like Fathers Like Daughter
great love it
Date: 01/14/08 07:32 am Title: Chapter 4: Aftermath
Lol, 'Bring Your Daughter To Work Day'. I assume that's the guy Corrine beat up? Tsk, tsk. Never mess with the Kaulitzes. =P
And did Gustav just realise the twins were alive? I had thought he had known about it at the end of the last story. Ah well. It would be great irony if that Anthony guy was somehow linked to Gustav's superior and they meet again in the middle of a massacre or something. Good chapter, update soon!
Date: 01/13/08 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 4: Aftermath
Sorry but I have to quote invisivlehands:
"Bill gives dirty talk a whole new meaning, doesn't he? I loved the scenes with Tom and Bill in the bed- and bathroom. They were very intense and contained a great deal of love and affection, in the twins own way. Tom and Bill are both very sexually driven, not to mention how they're the only ones who are allowed to harm and eventually kill the other one. "---> it's amazing, remember when I said that the scene of the first chapter of this serie, with them pressed in the wall after Bill killed the orfanate's director was the most hot scene I had ever read? now i love all the scenes between them writed by you-I'm getting spoiled
Date: 01/13/08 05:35 pm Title: Prologue: Like Fathers Like Daughter
You have GOT to be my favorite writer right now. Please keep going. This story has be biting my nails. LOL
Date: 01/13/08 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 4: Aftermath
words cannot describe how excellent this is. PLEASE update soon :D
if only i was as talented as you! :D
Date: 01/13/08 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 4: Aftermath
omg... i love it... i say that a lot in thr reviews but i mean it... and tom and bill are toatlly hot as usuall...... I love the way you do them.... and corrine is scaarey..... keep up the great work!
Date: 01/13/08 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 4: Aftermath
I think Bill and Tom should always make an effort to get nasty in the shower. Because it's hot.
I love the little details you throw in. Anthony's date with Carla, and the lasagna. Something a little extra you do that's impressive.
So, Gustav, what are you doing here? Please don't be mean and get yourself in trouble. Because I'm pretty sure you're going to have to deal with the boys again, and I'm not sure they'll feel the same as before. (You know you want to bring back Ulcer-Boy too.)
Date: 01/13/08 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 4: Aftermath
It continues to amaze and confound me how they can derive such pure pleasure from the though of killing, there insane but totally normal about it. I guess that’s what makes them so wickedly charming. Something they’ve passed on to Corrine I adore her she’s such a sweet little girl, and it’s a sure sign you’ve read too much when a murderous pre-teen can be seen as sweet, I like her relationship with Johnathan as well.
And I love how they all care about Dunja, I wasn’t expecting them to care that much but it seems like they do.
And the last scene
“Oh, it’s Bring Your Daughter To Work Day.”
Pure legend.