Date: 02/22/25 05:23 am Title: Pure
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 05/15/10 09:44 pm Title: Pure
I loved this! It was beautifully written
Date: 12/20/09 12:29 pm Title: Pure
That is so so wonderful! I love reading little moments like this between the twins, it's so sweet
Author's Response: :) Thank you. :)
Date: 08/11/09 01:59 pm Title: Pure
awww completly adorible, I can not fathom writing something as sweet and heartfelt as this. You had me from the first sentence and it was completly breath taking and beautiful. I loved it XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOX
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 08/11/09 12:08 pm Title: Pure
Love it just the way it is---simply beautiful.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 07/28/09 02:57 pm Title: Pure
awww you should definitely write more about this :P sooo sweet and cute, loved it !!
Author's Response: Thanks. ;)
Date: 06/20/09 01:53 am Title: Pure
This was perfect. I listened to "Rain" by Breaking Benjamin while I read it and that song was perfect for this. I love this and it's one of your best.
Author's Response: Awww, thanks so much!
Date: 06/18/09 04:06 pm Title: Pure
Oh, so cute! I just happened to reade this by accident, when I was searching for some fluff to read ( Yep, I'm on a fluff-mood right now). This was absolutely perfect for this feeling right now, so thank you!
I loved the innocence here. There's always so much passion and sex going on usually on fics, so this was a fresh exception. I do love rough and passionate sex between them, complex relationship and agst, but sweets fics like this are definitely needed too to keep the balance.
You wrote this one well. It was extremely romantic and I felt like time just stopped there. Like twins were in their own world, where no-one could hurt them or come to separate them. Just the way I would want it to be. There is still way too much hate, anger and prejudice in the world. Even if (WHEN) there is nothing more then bond between twins, I still hope that there is time and space for them to be without all the pressure, people and things need-to-be-done.
This fic was nice and I hope you write another chapter too. Keep this as innocent and peaceful as it is here. Should I say that this almost gave me some sort of peace of mind for some reason? Oh no, I'm getting too romantic here now :D
Author's Response: You don't even know how happy this made me. :) That was so sweet of you! I'm really, really happy you liked it so much. I was thinking, actually, that I'd continue with ONE more chapter but only one. -sighs- It was so difficult to get the emotion in this right that I ended up standing awake until about three AM trying to get it perfect before I could even sleep. You know what, I am going to do ONE more chapter for you because this review really, really made my day. ♥
Date: 06/18/09 02:27 pm Title: Pure
that was really sweet.. you know, part of me thinks that tom really could be this sweet if he really loved someone.. xx
Author's Response: I think he could do it too. You know, setting your mind to things. :) Tom could do it!
Date: 06/06/09 05:49 am Title: Pure
I think you should <3
that was something magical..... im completely speacheless.
I just gave me butterlies into my stomach and the whole thing just made sence. as if that's how it was meant to be all the time.
my oppinnion is that continue this if you can maintain the way of writing. =)
Author's Response: I don't think I can, to be honest. It took a while to get the emotions right, you know? But thank you so much for reviewing. :)
Date: 06/04/09 05:33 pm Title: Pure
Oh awwness extreme! This was so incredibly cute, sweet, just perfect. An amazing good night story, I'll have the fluffiest dreams now :)
Author's Response: yay! i'm happy to help!
Date: 06/04/09 05:08 pm Title: Pure
Awesome! ^^
Author's Response: thanks. ;)
Date: 06/04/09 03:31 pm Title: Pure
Yes!
Please make this a multichaptered story.
It's just so sweet and it sends a very jittery feeling that sends me feel extremely happy.
I loved it!
:)
Author's Response: I'll see what I can do. ;) Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 06/04/09 10:30 am Title: Pure
Definetly make it into a story, I think... I would love to hear more about this.
Author's Response: Hmmm, we'll see. Thanks for reviewing. :]
Date: 06/04/09 09:17 am Title: Pure
I think it's perfect as a one-shot.
It's so .... pure. I never actually thought about the twins loving do innocently, and you opened my eyes. This was a very heart-warming story.
Author's Response: ;) Well thank you very much. I think I'm going to leave it the way it is.
Date: 06/04/09 06:02 am Title: Pure
No, it's beautiful just like this. I did the same thing with Possesion, Ecstasy and I Love You-- introspective one shots from each twin POV and they stand alone just like they are really.
But this was just beautiful! <333
Author's Response: :) Thanks! I think I'll leave it the way it is.
Date: 06/04/09 01:36 am Title: Pure
Oh my gosh... that's the best kind of twin time (well... in my opinion at least, haha) - when they're all cuddly and sweet to each other. Loved it... as usual.
:D
And on another note... I am a freak and spent like 15 minutes looking for the font used in the banner because I liked it. I'm also very fond of the blue texture, haha. I guess I would notice things like that.
:/
Author's Response: The text is Note This and the blue texture was me going to flickr.com and searching 'blue blurry lights' ;) I'm glad you liked it (the banner xD) and the story! ^_^
Date: 06/04/09 12:40 am Title: Pure
You had me like *_* up until you used the word 'Billa'.
*facepalm*
Everything else was nice and sweet though.
Author's Response: I really think I just died about four times. Thank you from the bottom of my littl heart for reviewing. (:
Date: 06/04/09 12:31 am Title: Pure
aww it was soo cute!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!