Date: 09/11/09 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very much better! Guh. Exactly the kind of smut I like: sexy and loving at the same time. Definitely worth waiting for, even after the evil cliffhanger in the last chapter!
Author's Response: Wonderful! I'm glad to hear it. Thank you! :D
Date: 09/11/09 10:37 am Title: Chapter 14
*_*
Ahhh, yes. MUCH better ♥ That was so freakin' good...
-melts-
Author's Response: Hee! I'm glad you liked it, honey. <3
Date: 09/11/09 10:06 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh dear lord you KNOW it was!
Author's Response: *grins* Well, I'd hoped so, but know so? Okay, I kinda did. <3
Date: 09/11/09 08:44 am Title: Chapter 14
I really think you are the master of smut. *____*
This was down right amazing.
And thanks for my snippet. That definitely helped with the waiting. :D
I can't wait to see what happens next. ;)
Author's Response: LOL Well, thank you! YOU are a wonderful cheerleader, you know. Thank you!
Date: 09/11/09 08:11 am Title: Chapter 14
yes dear, much better :] *grins widely*
Author's Response: Wonderful! I'm so glad. <3
Date: 09/11/09 03:46 am Title: Chapter 14
Tom raised an eyebrow and pulled the band out of his hair, letting his dreads fall around his shoulders as he sat on the bed - this is something I really miss with his new hair :( Don't know if I ever will forgive him for cutting his dreads off.
There's a big difference between having sex and making love and you made it very clear how much they love each other. So romantic, darling. I loved it. *hugs*
Author's Response: Bless you, sweetheart. That's exactly what I wanted it to be; making love. Thank you. <3
Date: 09/11/09 03:20 am Title: Chapter 14
Slick his dick rhymes. Just felt like saying... XD
Author's Response: LOL You know, it does. And I never thought about it until you said it. xD
Date: 09/11/09 03:04 am Title: Chapter 14
Hi :)
I'm a new reader, I've never rewiewed this story. I found "Janni" a couple of weeks ago, and I started reading suspiciously, I don't know why. But this story is beautiful, and all the chapters are like pieces of a puzzle. I can't wait to see the final result, believe me. This chapter was simply amazing; the most romantic sex ever. Tom blows Bill in the most caring way possible,and all of this is simply perfect.
I like the character of Janni, too, she's a very beautiful girl, and she's like me when I was a child :P
I'm not good as a rewiewer, I'm sorry, but I just wanted to tell you that I love this story, and when this morning (I live in Italy) I saw the update I was like this: "Oh my God, the new chapter, the new chapterrrrrr! *squeals*"
I really how to read the next chapter soon, because it seems that I can't get enough of this O.O
Thank you for posting darling =)
Giulia
Author's Response: No worries, Giulia, I think you are a wonderful reviewer. I appreciate everything you said about the characters, the chapter and the story, and I'm really happy that you like it so much that you wanted to tell me about it. It really means a lot to me. Thank you! <3
Date: 09/11/09 02:29 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh god! So much better. My heart was pounding with nerves so much with the letter. You made me so scared Mel. .____. But that totally made up for it. Eee! *squishes*
Author's Response: Aw! *loves* I think it will be a while before I scare anyone again. I got threatened with sporks! O.O lol I'm glad this made up for the scare! <3
Date: 09/11/09 02:14 am Title: Chapter 14
!!!! I was so afraid that Tom was going to be positive !!!! omg *whew*
So yes...it IS better
Author's Response: Oh goodness, no. I swear, I couldn't do that! lol Thanks! xD
Date: 09/11/09 02:00 am Title: Chapter 14
*throws hands up* Finally!
;)
Author's Response: LOL Shush, you! *loves*
Date: 09/11/09 01:52 am Title: Chapter 14
so much better
Author's Response: Sweet! Thanks :D
Date: 09/11/09 01:50 am Title: Chapter 14
LOL..XD Of course it has to be NEGATIVE!! There has to be smut smut SMUT..XD Nyahahaha..XD Goodness.. I'm such a perv...O___O
More of JanniXBillXTom next time please!!XD Can't get enough of kids.. Heeeee...
Author's Response: LOL Of course it did. This isn't about HIV. I just wanted to make y'all sweat a little. :p
I'll see what I can do! Thanks for reading! :D
Date: 09/11/09 01:39 am Title: Chapter 14
fuck..I think you just killed me.
** They moved together as their breath mingled, until they didn’t know who was breathing in and who was breathing out and it really didn’t matter anymore **
Author's Response: Aw, thanks, honey! <3
Date: 09/08/09 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 13
I'm holding my breath for the next chapter and the sexy times. *pokes you* Something tells me they're going to have to wait until Janni's at the in-laws.
Author's Response: LOL girl, I loved how you were just poking me for the sex. No talk about whether Tom is positive or not, you're just like, LET'S GET TO THE SEX! lol I giggled. <3
Date: 09/08/09 09:44 am Title: Chapter 13
Don't let Tom be positive... Cuz then I'll hurt you... But if it's negative, I won't hurt you;D Lol, just kidding;D But please, Don't let Tom be positive!
Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad you didn't have to hurt me! <3
Date: 09/07/09 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 13
omg late review is late. >< I have already read this but that time I didn't have the chance to review. XD so here it goes..
why I always find Janni so adorable in every chapter? :P aaand OH you tease and I love you! I am so dying to see the next chapter now. and if Janni is gonna be with Anjelica....that means moar alone time for B/T? eeeeeeeep *_*
Author's Response: That's okay; late author's response is late! LOL Your review was so cute. I'm really happy that Janni comes off the way I am hoping she does. Thank you, honey! <3
Date: 09/07/09 02:46 am Title: Chapter 13
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH WHAT THE HELL lol post more soon!! i love this story
Author's Response: LOL! Sorry about that! <3
Date: 09/06/09 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 13
MEL!!!! WHAT A HORRIBLE CLIFFY.
>:{
But really, how the hell would he be positive for anything, unless he already had something from before that his wife or him were aware of?
DON'T MAKE GUESS THIS STUFF!!! *frets until next update*
Author's Response: I'm so glad you still love me, even if I'm really mean and have awful cliffhangers! And where ARE you, girl? You're not around much lately. :(
Date: 09/06/09 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 13
Nooooooo ! You cant stop there, thats so mean ! loll update soon and i'll forgive u, *hopes for a negative result*
Author's Response: I know, I'm really awful to do that to you! <3