Date: 09/25/09 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 10
That was sweeeet!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 09/24/09 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 9
I went completely week.
Author's Response: Aw, you're just sweet. :D
Date: 09/24/09 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 8
Haha, that David type is really funny. And Bill saying he still wanted to know about the two gay guys in the subway, that was funny too ^^. Just a smart but also lazy enyoing talk. Very good.
Author's Response: I'm glad the humor worked well. Thank you!
Date: 09/24/09 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 7
AAAAAAAAAH
Hahha, hi Janni!
Author's Response: :D <3
Date: 09/24/09 11:52 am Title: Chapter 6
It's just one big happy happy family. It looks perfect, even the little mess and of course the ups and downs, but that's all part of it. It just all seem to fit. They have little worries.
Author's Response: That's what I was going for, that domestic feeling. I'm glad you felt that. Thank you!
Date: 09/24/09 11:32 am Title: Chapter 5
Was it alright? It like fucking magic! I'm just very very excited, because I totally understand all the flattery and nervousness at the same time. I love it.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you :)
Date: 09/24/09 11:02 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh I surely didn't mind. What a nice little girl, I can totally picture it. Now let me see the date!
Author's Response: LOL thank you! :D
Date: 09/24/09 10:38 am Title: Chapter 3
This is actually too sweet for words! Oh this stuff get me melting everytime, haha. The happy daddy figure with a little girl is zo amazing.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :D
Date: 09/24/09 09:46 am Title: Chapter 1
This got me already so exciting! I'm very curious for the rest, it would be soooo cute, Tom and his little girl ^^.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 09/23/09 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 14
mmm...nice chapter. And congratulations on being featured!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 09/22/09 02:16 am Title: Chapter 14
Ughhh I Want More! I Hate When I get to the last of updates...I started reading this fic earlier today, and just finished.. I Love It! and Will definitely Be Looking forward to updates!
Author's Response: I totally understand. I hate when I get to the last one, too. I'm so glad you started reading this, and I'm even more happy that you like it. Thank you!
Date: 09/21/09 02:30 am Title: Chapter 1
You ruined the rest of all fanfiction with this. I don't think I'll find another story as amazing and well-written as this one. I really couldn't stop reading, the descriptions are so vivid I could see it all perfectly in my head. The way their relationship develops is not too fast, yet not too slow. Janni is adorable, I fell in love with her from the first moment she appeared in the story. Her character is so real, so easy to imagine I can almost say she really exists.
Incredible story. OOC, but completely believable and not at all odd. Some authors tend to write OCC and make the story and characters awkward and not at all believable. But this right here... wow. You became one of my favorite authors, if not my favorite all together.
Can't wait to read more of this. It's absolutely addicting!
Author's Response: Oh wow. You seriously left me speechless with your kind words. I'm really thrilled that the things I'm really concentrating on are working for you. It's great to know when I'm doing something right. I can't even begin to tell you what hearing this means to me. Thank you!
Date: 09/20/09 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 14
Hi!
I didn't even realize I've got my breath caught, until I sigh of relieve when I read the bold 'Negative'. I was sort of having a little drama playing on my head by then.
I'm really glad they both are clean! And I'm even happier for what cleanness brought to them.
Can't wait to read what's next!
Bed-talking I think. That would be nice!
Great work so far!
Author's Response: Aw, I'm pretty thrilled you were that much into the story! Thank you so much. :D
Date: 09/20/09 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 9
I Love This Story it Is So Realistic !
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 09/20/09 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 12
This chapter was sweet :) I love that it was Air Supply..
Author's Response: That was the sappiest music I could think of. And I say that, admitting that I love Air Supply! lol Thank you :D
Date: 09/20/09 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 10
O.O wow. just wow... ;)
Author's Response: *grins* Thanks!
Date: 09/20/09 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 14
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I said that Janni was so great, if kids were like that, I would like to have thousands! XD
You write so well, I can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Oh goodness, even as sweet as Janni, kids are so much work. I should know, I have several. :D Thank you so much!
Date: 09/20/09 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 14
I end up reading your story!
This is really good, you had to be featured! (Congrats for that, indeed!)
Their relationship is so sweet, cute and awwww!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! <3
Date: 09/20/09 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 4
Janni asking Bill if he was a boy or a girl was perfect!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! :D
Date: 09/20/09 07:08 am Title: Chapter 14
You don’t know how happy I was that the word “negative” was printed in thick, black letters in the middle of the page. I don’t know if I could have survived more suspension -.- and yay to you for not giving Tom herpes or something ^^
Tom grazing his teeth down Bill’s neck…yum!
Okay, Tom is officially my hero. Wow.
I knew there was a reason for why my fingers trembled when I clicked the link for this chapter ^^ amazing work, darling, as always!
Author's Response: LOL Aw, Lucy. You know I wouldn't make Tom sick. But that you could actually think I would means I must be writing it right, and I love that. Thank you so much, sweetheart! <3