Date: 10/02/09 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 16
okay, let's try this review again, because i was rpeviously too excited to give you a decent review xD
god, I love how realistic Tom is 3when it comes to being with Bill and thinking about/wanting what's best for his daughter. I love that I got butterlies in my stomach and felt my throat getting dry, much like Bill.
GAH GAH GAH. you make me wanna marry Tom and have his kid so i can just watch them interact....and i don't even LIKE Tom in RL xD
all i can ask for now is more sex, more interaction, more sex and i guess some 'drama' now that they're officially living together.
OH WHAT A SCANDAL
Author's Response: LOL You're so cute when you're all excited. :p
I'm really, really thrilled that you like Tom with Janni, being such a sweet daddy. Thank you, darlin'! <3
Date: 10/02/09 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 16
it wasn't what i thought, but for them it really makes sense. i hope it goes well. lucky janni!
Author's Response: I thought it made sense, too. Thanks! :D
Date: 09/30/09 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 15
I'll have to watch the video because my internet has been fucking with me the entire week and it keeps freezing :( I had a feeling this Shasky guy would cause problem. I feel so sorry for Tom. Turning down jobs to focus on this one and then get let down. I hope everything works out for them. I have a hunch what will happen though ;)
Author's Response: I hope you got to see the video, honey! It's so lovely. Tom sure didn't plan very well, but Bill is there for him and that means a lot. Thanks, honey! <3
Date: 09/29/09 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 15
And again, you leave me hanging. We knew that was coming though, didn't we?
Author's Response: LOL That one wasn't quite so terrible, though. <3
Date: 09/29/09 06:13 am Title: Chapter 15
Oh mi gawd. What is Bill thinking?! haha I am very slow and therefore cannot even come up with any ideas. And it is 6:00 am. >.< So phsyced for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: LOL Thanks! :)
Date: 09/29/09 12:24 am Title: Chapter 15
Love it! update!
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 09/28/09 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 15
I wanna know Bill's idea!
lol
I had a feeling something like this would happen, i really didn't want Tom to lose his job but I guess thats the price some people pay.
Janni melts my heart and when she kissed Bill i got this huge smile on my face.
Thank you for posting the video. I'm really glad you liked it.
Author's Response: Unfortunately, it does happen, but at least he has Bill. :)
You are SO very welcome. I adore it and so many readers do, too. <333
Date: 09/28/09 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 15
"You're the best fixer ever."
Damn, little girl, that would cheer ANY daddy up! <3333
And aww Tom, that really really sucks. His morning couldn't have gone more perfect and it all went to shit fast. Damn, I hope Bill's plan is solid, because Tom is starting to freak and that won't be good.
AND OMG, THAT VIDEO IS SO FANTASTIC! <3333
Author's Response: How could Tom not smile when she's such a darling? I'm glad you liked the chapter, honey! <3
Date: 09/28/09 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 15
I loved this chapter. I wonder what Bill has in mind. And the video rocked and made me cry too! Thankies so much!
Author's Response: No, thank you! :D
Date: 09/28/09 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 15
I love this story so much. Janni is amazing. So perceptive and adorable. And you've got the single parent thing down pat -- the relationship between the parent and the child. And Bill's interations with her...so adorable and just...love. Love, love, love. I wish I'd started reading this sooner, but better late than never. I'm so upset about Tom losing that job, but I'm pretty sure it's because of that trip to the grocery store, right? Grrrr @ people. I'm also curious to see what Bill's plan is. I have a couple ideas, but... ^.^
Author's Response: Ah yes, I used to be a single parent, so I really have a lot of experience in that area. I'm glad that shows through, really. But I am glad you're reading it now! Thank you! <3
Date: 09/28/09 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for the dedication. ;)
Getting that on my favorite story of all times is awesome. ;) This was a great chapter but it made me wana cry. :/ I feel bad for Tom but I hope that Bill's idea fixes things. But then again, I have no idea what's going on in his head. LOL. My thought is something really mindblowingly original. xD I don't know why but I think that's what's coming. And you ALWAYS keep me on the edge of my seat and have something different than expected coming for us. :) I thought Tom was going to be positive at first!
Well, I know that whatever you end up writing, whenever it gets posted, it'll be amazing. ;) This story never seems to make me bored! I love that everything is always so fresh and it isn't rushed at all! I wish I had the kind of patients you do. Lol.
Anyways, I love this and I'm getting a little long with my review. Lol. :P
Can't wait for more. ♥
Author's Response: You're so welcome, darling! You said some really kind and lovely things about this story and I really have to thank you. You're just wonderful. <3
Date: 09/28/09 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 15
uh oh, things aren't going well for tom outside of his relationship with bill. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 09/28/09 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 15
I hope he's not about to suggest they move in together...:/ So soon.
Author's Response: All I can say is that sometimes in life, things don't go according to plan. Maybe it would have been for them to wait for later but...they needed to do it then. :)
Date: 09/28/09 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 15
First off, that video made me cry. Seriously, it was too sweet, and brought up thoughts I didn't want in my head, but I totally agree with how fitting it was. Before I'd even seen the video (because I read this on my phone, as I was too impatient to wait until I got home), as I was reading the chapter, the relationship between Tom and Janni really hit me. The little talk in the middle brought everything together for me; made me squeal in the middle of a very busy bus station. *cough*
I reckon I already know why Tom lost the job (awkward supermarket conversation?), and I'm curious as to how Bill's gonna fix it/whether Tom will accept it.
This is my favourite chapter so far, even after the lovin' from the previous one... (at least I think so). Brilliant, brilliant job, love!
Author's Response: LOL You seriously squealed reading this chapter? That's really cool, actually. Your review just tickled me. Thank you so much, honey! <3
Date: 09/28/09 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 15
Why I didn't read this story before, I do not know. But I have to say, your story is very good.
You write as good as ever, I love to read your writing. Story is not going to fast or to slow and after every chapter I just wanna know what will happen next.
I also like the fact that it was Bill who asked Tom out and some where in this story put his hand to Tom's back. The details which I like.
I'm really bad with this, I mean giving reviews. Just wanna let you know that I love your story and can't wait for more.
xx
Author's Response: I think your review is just lovely, and I'm very glad you decided to leave it. I'm happy you like the story. Thank you so much! :D
Date: 09/28/09 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 15
oh my gosh!! you have no idea how long i have been waiting for this chapter!!! and now you finish it in such a cliff hanger!!! what is Bill's idea? does it have something to do with Janni?! o.O
I'm totally IN LOVE with this!! *-*
P.S.: love the video and.. DAKOTA FANNING IS EVRYWHERE NOW!
Author's Response: LOL Aw, I'm so happy you liked it, then! Thank you so much :D
Date: 09/28/09 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 15
loved everything of this chapter and i just love this story
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 09/28/09 09:51 am Title: Chapter 15
God I love this story! I'm always able to get into your chapters, and this was no exception. I could literally feel Tom's anxiety about losing the position. And once again, a killer cliff-hanger!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I'm really glad you like it! <3
Date: 09/28/09 08:52 am Title: Chapter 15
bah, I hate that people do that all over the world, cut people out of deals and slap them down, just because they like the same sex. *growls* I'm thinking of finding a way to chop off Shasky's head...But on a happy note, beautiful video, it made me smile n_n Also, despite how much I hate people discriminating, I have to say, I loved how you put that in there, showing how real the problem can be. It also adds a nice problem that needs to be over come. lol, if that makes any sense n_n lovely chapter :) the bandana part was too cute, all of Janni in general is too cute n_n
Author's Response: Sometimes life suck and life is not fair. The video made me smile a lot, too, and then made me cry because it was so lovely. Thank you so much, honey! <3
Date: 09/28/09 08:02 am Title: Chapter 15
that was so amazing. and that video is making me tear up. gosh that was was amazing. great work to all involved
Author's Response: Thank you! :D