Date: 11/09/10 04:52 am Title: Chapter 27
I really liked this scene! :) And so glad they won!
Man I absolutely adored da bible part. *.*
People love to judge, pretend they're so holy and such,when even they break rules, but in eyes it's "minor" and God will forgive them, ne? But when it's about something you're against. kill them all.
Brilliant Scene really :)
Author's Response: I just couldn't let them lose. I think some people would have hunted me down! lol
I'm glad you enjoyed the discussion of religion and what's a sin in the eyes of God, so they say. I think I offended a few people with that chapter but truth is truth. Thank you again! :)
Date: 11/06/10 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 24
Damn. :(
Author's Response: Most definitely. Thanks for reading. :)
Date: 10/25/10 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Epilogue
i love this story so much!! it was moving and loving and everything i love in a story and thank you so Much!!
Author's Response: Aw, thank YOU for such a wonderful response. I'm so very happy you enjoyed it! :)
Date: 10/18/10 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Epilogue
Awwwwwww perfect! For some reason, now I see the drawing Janni made at school of her family hung in the wall at the end of this scene! Omg how sweet, the characters were amazing, not like any others Ive read before. You did an amazing job! This story is definitely in my top5. Thank you for writting such incredible story and share it with us! And thank you for answering all your reviews! Youre so nice! :D
Author's Response: Aw, it could totally be on the wall. Or on the fridge. That's where I always put my kids' pictures. ;p
You are just awfully kind and I very much appreciate your reviews. I love that the story really touched you! Thank you so much for reading and being so sweet. ♥
Date: 10/18/10 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 27
I noticed that in this sentence "When Mr. Washington, Anjelica and Francis’ lawyer, was done, Ms. Benson stood at the defense table [...]"It should be Ms. Robertson, not Ms. Benson, since he's the docor, haha. Just saying ;)
Author's Response: Oh goodness, you know, I think I noticed that when I posted it to my fic journal on LJ but then I never changed it here. Thank you for reminding me! :)
Date: 10/18/10 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 24
Bill what did you doooo?!. Im like Tom, i didnt see any signals until this and the chapter before this.
I reviw this much cause i really like the story! Its amazing!
Author's Response: I tried to leave some clues, but I think some of them were a little vague. I'm really glad you enjoyed the story so much and I really appreciate that you so often told me. Thank you! :)
Date: 10/17/10 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 20
Anjelica you bitch! Just like my aunt Anjelica LOL.
Author's Response: Oh no! I'm very sorry about your aunt! Well, sorry she's like this Anjelica. :(
Date: 10/17/10 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 11
Haha oh i love Janni, the things she says lol.
Author's Response: She's a sweetheart, but kids can sure make you facepalm. xD Glad you're enjoying the characters! :D
Date: 10/17/10 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 10
How sweeet!
For i moment i thought Tom was going to be bottom LOL, since Bill is more experienced and all.
Omg, Tom is SO shy it almost makes me blush at his low confidence.
What is he afraid of? But anyw)! Im loving this!
Author's Response: Tom's only had women, up to this point, so it seemed natural for him to take that 'top' role with Bill, only because that's what he's familiar with. But, that may not be what he does all the time. ;)
I think that first, Tom's afraid of getting into a new relationship, of everything that it entails, because he doesn't want to be hurt again. But also, he's never done this before. He wants to do it right and make it good for Bill, so he's just very tentative and careful. I really loved writing Tom like this.
I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Thank you for letting me know! :)
Date: 10/17/10 03:02 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh lordy, i think i had never read such a shy tom before. Its kinda cute lol. Im anxious to go check the chp 10.
Author's Response: I love writing Tom as shy. I think he's much less confident one-on-one than we'd think, but it's just my opinion. Thanks for the feedback! :)
Date: 10/17/10 01:54 am Title: Chapter 7
Ohmigoood!
Author's Response: lol I had to go back and see what was in chapter 7! :D I'm glad you're liking the story. :)
Date: 09/30/10 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Epilogue
It may have ben forever sinces you posted this but IT WAS FUCKING AH-MAY-ZING ......can I print it ?
Author's Response: Thank you! And sure, you can print it. :)
Date: 09/22/10 11:26 am Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful story, I love every chapter of it!
Is there any chance that you would continue it someday maybe? It's so hard to part with this lovely family completely.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. I have done a couple oneshot cookies from the main story, and the can be found in the series, "Our Janni". Hope you like them! :)
Date: 09/14/10 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 14
Damn that's so sexy *.*
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 09/13/10 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 11
xD gosh, can't believe Janni "your fiend that sleeps with you" xD she's so cute!
Author's Response: Kids just sometimes have no idea what they're really saying. I think she's the sweetest thing. :) Thank you for reading!
Date: 09/12/10 12:31 am Title: Chapter 12
Yes I was expecting Tom to declare his love to Bill but I really wasn't expecting Bill to say it back. I know they are both in love but I'm starting to think it's just lust. I don't think either of them know what love truly is. I don't know, maybe but it does feel a bit rushed to be talking like that. They do make a cute couple though. :)
Author's Response: I believe that at that point in the story, they've been seeing each other for a few months. I don't think we can say whether what someone else feels for each other is love or lust; I have a friend who proposed to his wife three days after they met and they've been married for fifteen years now.
Are you sure this story is for you? I mean, you seem to be disappointed by something in every chapter. Isn't it kind of a waste of time to keep reading something that doesn't sit right with you? I'm just curious.
Date: 09/11/10 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
it's fun to read! :D
Author's Response: So glad to hear this! :D
Date: 09/11/10 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
This chapter made me so hungry! xD
love the reaction they both have on each other!:)
Author's Response: I'm hungry, thinking of it now, too! lol I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :)
Date: 09/11/10 08:59 am Title: Chapter 28 - Epilogue
*cries*
Holy cow this was a great story!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 09/02/10 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
I completely loved this story.
Everything about it was so beautiful... Tom and Janni *-*
Tom as a dad is one of the cutest things I can imagine :')
The love scene in chapter 23 almost made me burst into tears because it was just so well written and emotional.
Not many stories on the site have such an effect on me, and when one does, I feel the need to write a long review.
So to wrap things up, thank you so much for writing this story. I'm sure I'll read it again in the near future :)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. I love hearing that you got such a visceral reaction from the story, and from that scene, in particular. It was a really tough one to write and I'm very pleased with how it turned out.
Thank you again; I really appreciate your kindness. :)