Date: 10/16/09 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 18
Awww! I loved it so so so much! Awww, Tom is just so sweet and Bill... *fan girl* OMG!!!!! ARGH!
Author's Response: You are too sweet! Thank you! :D
Date: 10/16/09 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 18
Well! I wasn't expecting that o_O
You certainly surprised me. In a very lovely way, however.
But, what I don't get, is... how the HELL do you write such dirty stuff, yet still have it come off as cute and loving and somewhat innocent? It's completely mindboggling.
Loved. this. so. much! *hearts*
Author's Response: You know, I've heard that before, about my dirty stuff still coming off as cute and loving and honestly, Idek. I blame it on having a pretty happy marriage. We'll just go with that. ;p But I'm thrilled you liked it and I thank you for the kind words. <3
Date: 10/16/09 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 18
WOO! BotTom!
I pretty much love you right now.
^^
Author's Response: Thank you! lol I guess you liked it. ;p
Date: 10/16/09 11:21 am Title: Chapter 18
=] yay bill top!
Author's Response: lol He likes to switch it up a little :)
Date: 10/16/09 10:38 am Title: Chapter 18
it was very graphic and really erotic....liked it...keep going and update soon.
Author's Response: I'm very glad you liked it. Thank you! :)
Date: 10/16/09 10:16 am Title: Chapter 18
I just loved that.
Bill was so careful and loving. I can definitely tell that they outdid Twister.
Great chapter.
Keep writing, please!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
Date: 10/16/09 10:01 am Title: Chapter 18
Eeep! So not what I was expecting, but so hot!!! I love that Tom was willing to do it that way and I loved the sweet way Bill coaxed him into it. It really felt natural the way it was written, and oh, so sexy. *happy sigh*
Author's Response: I can't believe I got so far behind in answering and I apologize for that. I'm thrilled that it felt natural because I really wanted it to be very real. I planned this chapter from the beginning, wanting to write a story that depicted a gay relationship as most are; at least partially flexible. So I needed to have Bill top and I think he performed like a champ. ;p Thank you so much, Jen. <333
Date: 10/16/09 09:46 am Title: Chapter 18
omfg this is so cute! update more soon please!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 10/16/09 07:28 am Title: Chapter 18
I think Twister would be a huge disappointment after this.
Hmm, this chapter was so good, I'm excited for more ;D
Author's Response: Aw, thank you, honey! :D
Date: 10/16/09 06:31 am Title: Chapter 18
Erase twince this time... So:
That was so magical! *_*
I love Tom bottom!
This was so sweet, so romantic, so... I can't describe it in any words.
You just make a great work, it's such a pleasure to read you every week!
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much. I appreciate the kind words, believe me. :D
Date: 10/16/09 06:29 am Title: Chapter 18
Yeeeesss!! Love that. I always love when Tom is bottom heh ^^
Author's Response: Oh good! I'm glad to hear it. Thank you!
Date: 10/16/09 05:48 am Title: Chapter 18
Well, that was certainly a surprise...a good surprise.
Author's Response: Wonderful! Thank you :D
Date: 10/16/09 04:47 am Title: Chapter 18
that was very very hot and yet sweet and loving at the same time. wonderful chapter, i loved it!!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. I'm really happy to hear that. :D
Date: 10/16/09 04:46 am Title: Chapter 18
um. *can't leave a proper reiew because its 4am i should be in bed AND this smut blew me away*
i heart bottom Tom. Mel, you kinda made my morning.
i'll leave a proper review later on today lol.
Author's Response: I'm so very glad you liked it so much! Thank you! <3
Date: 10/16/09 04:39 am Title: Chapter 18
omg
you gave me bottom!Tom.
imma gonna cry now, it was so perfect and beautiful.
hot DAMN! O_O
Author's Response: Aw, you're too sweet to me, darlin'. Thank you! <3
Date: 10/16/09 03:15 am Title: Chapter 18
OMFG Top!Bill is always hot O_O
Very great job :P~
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 10/16/09 02:38 am Title: Chapter 18
one big pile of messy goo...thats what I am.
its a good thing its bedtime, for I am now useless.
thank you!
Author's Response: You know, I kinda like making you a big pile of messy goo. Means I'm doin' it right. You're welcome! And thank you for reading, love! <3
Date: 10/16/09 02:35 am Title: Chapter 18
I enjoyed the hell out of that. thank you very much.
Author's Response: You're so very welcome. Thank you for reading. :D
Date: 10/16/09 02:31 am Title: Chapter 18
OH MY GODDDDDDD
Thank you SO SO SO much for updating before I left! I am SOOO glad I stayed up that extra little bit to answer a post and heard an e-mail notification come through for this. *happy sigh*
This chapter was amazing, simply AMAZING, and I love it through and through. Oh, man, the dynamic between them is so vibrant and loving and beautiful and HOT DAMN, the lovemaking. You want to talk intense? That was so intense it was borderline painful! Okay, NOW I can happily go off on my cruise. And thank you again for this. ♥
Author's Response: I can't believe how far behind I am on answering, but I was thrilled to be able to post before you left, and that you enjoyed it so much. You know it just means tons to me. Thank you, darlin'! <3
Date: 10/16/09 02:30 am Title: Chapter 18
*cough* wow.. yah, for sure better than Twister..
Author's Response: lol Thank you :)