Date: 11/06/09 12:22 am Title: Chapter 19
Eee, we get to see more of David! I almost forgot about him with all the sexy, adorable Bill/Tom action, but not quite, and I was hoping he'd enter the picture again! For some reason I'm picturing the show as similar to Adam Lambert's Zodiac Show; I think it was the mention of the feathered hat that got me. :P
Anyway, I have to say, I'm not complaining about the perfection. But I am waiting with trepidation for the moment when the shit hits the fan, because of course it has to sometime. I'll be trying hard not to keep refreshing the recent fics page from now until you update again! ^_~ Gorgeous chapter, as always, particularly Tom feeling Bill up while Bill's on the phone. Hee.
Author's Response: I honestly didn't have any show in particular in mind, but yes, that was pretty much the type of show I was going for. And yay, more David! I couldn't not write him a bit more; I really enjoy his character.
I'm very glad you liked the chapter! Thank you :D
Date: 11/05/09 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 19
aww!!! how cute, the matching but not.
Author's Response: lol Thank you! :)
Date: 11/05/09 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 19
I'm scared, something bad is coming... *bites nails*
Author's Response: You know, you may be on to something. xD
Date: 11/05/09 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 19
I love it! update!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 11/05/09 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 19
Loooove, this is sheer love! ...And, yes, it's so much love, I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop.
WOO WOO for celebratory post-EMA nookie, I mean, chapters! Great timing. :D
Author's Response: LOL I love your reviews. I'm so pleased you're reading this. I hope you know it means a lot to me. <3
Date: 10/27/09 12:36 am Title: Chapter 18
OMG this one was hot!! I'd like you to know that reading this chapter put a wide smile on my face!! It was a chap full of thousands of emotions, but maybe the best part was the display of trust you wrote.
I'll be waiting to read the next chapter.
Kisses
Velia
Author's Response: I love that this chapter left you smiling. I really wanted it to. I wanted you to feel everything and see everything and I think it worked just a little bit. Thank you so much for reading and giving me some feedback! <3
Date: 10/22/09 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 18
I love it!!!! good job!
plz more!!!
Author's Response: Wonderful! Thank you! :D
Date: 10/18/09 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 18
WOW!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 10/18/09 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 18
WOW!!! amazing amazing amazing... and really really really hot. lol
Author's Response: haha! Awesome, thank you!
Date: 10/17/09 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 18
awe.:).
Author's Response: <333
Date: 10/17/09 10:03 am Title: Chapter 18
Exactly what I thought it'd be, and so glad you did it. Big thumbs up!
Author's Response: I think most other people didn't figure it out! Some people really don't much like Top!Bill but I'm glad he works for you. ;) Thank you!
Date: 10/17/09 01:29 am Title: Chapter 18
HOT.
I accidentally typed "HOR." D;
Author's Response: LOL Thanks <3
Date: 10/16/09 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 18
How is that so, so hot and sweet at the same time?
Author's Response: lol I'm really not sure but I'm so happy it felt that way for you. Thank you! :D
Date: 10/16/09 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 18
um....um....wow, that was H.O.T.. top!Bill FTW, I like it when Bill is dominating *melts*. The cuddling at the end is adorable ;))
This is hot as hell. LOVE IT! aaaand of course you!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it! Bill is just spicy when he's topping, isn't he? NOM! <333
Date: 10/16/09 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 18
now that is quality!!
lol
Author's Response: You know, I really hoped so. Thanks! :)
Date: 10/16/09 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 18
I think they did. They loved it ^^.
Author's Response: Just a little. ;) <3
Date: 10/16/09 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 18
Like you need to ask ;)Bill said he wanted to try something new. How could I not see that coming? lol. Of course it was his turn to top ;)Loved this so much, Mel. *kisses*
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, honey! I know you have a small enjoyment of Top!Bill, so I thought you might. ;) Thank you, love! <333
Date: 10/16/09 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 18
o.O It was akward to see Tomi be the on bottom at first but then it got good but I still like Bill on bottom. XD I'm just weird.
Author's Response: Naw, you're not weird at all. I think more people feel more comfortable with Bill on bottom because he's slighter and more feminine, even if slightly taller. But I realized when I hung out in the local gay community a lot that, while many gay men have a preference for either top or bottom, they are sometimes flexible, depending on mood and other factors. This story is about realism, so I really wanted to illustrate that. I'm glad you ended up liking it, though. Thank you for being honest! :)
Date: 10/16/09 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 18
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOL...XDXD
Still not used to Tom BotTOMing, but this is GOOD!!XD Really GOOD! ROFL..XD Aish... Blame my dirty mind and always feeling horny ROFL!!XD
Maybe we can see Janni in the next chapters? That grandmother of hers is a.. Errmm.. Prick.. Ass. Whatever..XD LOLZ..XDXD
Author's Response: I'm thrilled you enjoyed bottom!Tom. Thank you for the kinds words! And hopefully we'll get to see Janni soon. :)
Date: 10/16/09 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 18
Um. Yes. This was far superior to every game of Twister ever. At the moment, in fact, I'm thinking it may be far superior to *anything* ever. How do you always manage to make these two the hottest and also sweetest things in the world?
Author's Response: LOL I don't know, really, but I'm glad they feel that way to you! Thank you! <3