Date: 11/13/09 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 20
...I saw this coming. =__= ARGH, that homophobic old woman! And now Tom and Bill have a custody battle to go through. But I adored this chapter for the sheer affirmation of love between the two of them. Bill had to spell it out for Tom, but it's all true - he did what he did because of who he is, and it brought him and Tom together. They're so lucky to have each other. And now that "worse" part of for better or worse is coming, and I know Bill will rise to the occasion.
Author's Response: I think I don't do subtle well so a lot of people saw it coming. Only Tom didn't, unfortunately. You told me once that you've read Janni three times and I can't even tell you how much that means to me. Thank you. <3
Date: 11/13/09 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 20
AHHHHH HOW CAN YOU LEAVE IT THERE? I was lulled into a false sense of security by all the talk about love and family! I'll admit, I thought- but- AHHH. Basically I'm flailing right now, and will continue doing so until you post the next chapter.
Author's Response: I am evil, perhaps? Your reviews tickle me, you know. Thank you so, so much for reading this. It means a lot to me. <3
Date: 11/13/09 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 20
THIS CHAPTER WAS SAD BUT FLUFFY IN A WEIRD WAY & YAY I NEW THE DRAMA WAS COMING YAYYYYYYY. DRAMA. GOD I'M WEIRDLY ADDICTED....and ew caps. i'm not rewriting that. i swear I'm not Mel. See, I'm not. LOL. anyways i loved it ALL.
Author's Response: LOL I so giggled when I got this. I love the caps, believe me. And you, of course. <3
Date: 11/09/09 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 19
dude that was so cute! David cracked me up though xD
Author's Response: Haha Thanks! :D
Date: 11/09/09 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 19
dude that was so cute! David cracked me up though xD
Author's Response: LOL Awesome! I was hoping he would. xD Thank you!
Date: 11/09/09 01:49 am Title: Chapter 19
;__; I KNOW it can't be this perfect, which is why I'm crying already! D"X I know something really bad is gonna happen, and Fishie doesn't like it!!! I already saw the hurt/comfort ;__; and I really don't wanna know exactly what that means, but I know it has to come up soon!!! Just don't kill poor little Fishie's heart ;__; I'll be very upset...
Author's Response: Aw *pets Fishie* I'll try to be gentle. <3
Date: 11/08/09 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 19
totally the later darlin' XD you're doing a good job, but everything is happening and becoming way to perfect for my taste, lol. I'm sorry, I'm waiting eagerly for that shit to hit the fan and go flying every which way. Davidd seems so great XD lol he's just this huge ball of energy to me. And I'm wondering if you brought him in for another reason besides Bill getting to say hi to him. lol... David seems to have just this mind reading power with Bill, it's great XD
Author's Response: Mhm, David and Bill have been friends since Bill moved to New York and were very close. I can't say anything else about his role right now. :x I'm glad you're still liking the story, though. Thank you! :D
Date: 11/08/09 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 19
That was rather sweet!
I love that domestic thing in the story, it's perfect.
Keep on going and going and going this way ^^.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Unfortunately, bad things happen to even good people. :x Thanks for reading :)
Date: 11/07/09 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 8
*0* Janni is SO freaking adorable! I love her! And I would say more, but I'm about to pass out xD I just kept reading because this story's so good lol.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like her! I think she's pretty sweet, too. :D
Date: 11/07/09 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
I knew this was all too good to be true. Haha. Well, I definitely trust you and your amazing writing to take this story where it needs to go, fan-hitting shit and all! :)
Author's Response: Oh wow, now I hope I can live up to your expecatations! I'm thrilled you're liking it so far, though. Thank you!
Date: 11/07/09 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 19
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
I'v waited forever!! *hehehe*
I'm soo glad you continued. really.
love the story. great job!
pliz more!
:)
Author's Response: LOL Thank you! :D
Date: 11/07/09 04:35 am Title: Chapter 19
I think that sometimes it's nice to just wallow in things going well for a while; I'm kind of dreading the shit hitting the fan >.>
Author's Response: I'll agree with that. I really wanted to give them more time being happy. Maybe I'm a sucker for my characters and hate to see them hurt! lol xD
Date: 11/07/09 02:21 am Title: Chapter 5
Such a small kiss *-* So romantic for Fishie... lol
Author's Response: Aw, lol It was very sweet, I think. Thank you!
Date: 11/07/09 01:15 am Title: Chapter 1
*0* I don't know what to say, but you inspire me to write! xDDD This story may be what I need to get back on track with Cheyenne! lol
Author's Response: Aw, you are too sweet, you know that? I'm flattered to hear that and wish you best of luck with Cheyenne! Thank you <3
Date: 11/06/09 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 19
My dear, sweet Mel, I don't think you can bore us to tears even if you try. The love between them are so perfect and I'm worried something is going to mess that up. Can't wait for the next chapter as always. *hugs*
I hope you get the entire review this time. My last one, for your other story, was cut :( I probably used something I shouldn't have.
Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad I'm not boring you. There were reasons for all this love, though I obviously couldn't say! lol Thank you for reading, love, and for the review. You always make me smile so much. <333
Date: 11/06/09 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 19
Well, as nice as this all is, with playing happy families and having lots of nice sexy times~ I am waiting for the shit to hit the fan. It's inevitable, right? I mean, there's the whole Mr... um, Mr whatshisname from Tom's job (I cannot remember his name for the LIFE in me), Janni's grandma because I have a feeling she'll have something to say when she finds out about Tom and Bill, and surely Janni will have her own questions, eventually. At least, these are my guesses.
Specifically about this chapter, holy shit, woman, that phone scene! That was so... subtle(maybe?) that it made me blush. And I'm so glad that Tom gets on with David (even though it was obvious he would xD) because it means such a lot to Bill.
And good luck with your NaNo! Lord knows we all need it XD
Author's Response: Oh, of course it's inevitable but the timing had to be right. All this playing happy families and having lots of nice sexy times had a purpose. I'm glad you liked the phone scene and David. Those were fun to write. :)
I gave up on NaNo. *blush* I got too far behind and just couldn't. I'm still writing, but it won't be 50,000 words total, unfortunately. But thanks for the wishes and thank you so much for your thoughts on the chapter. I do appreciate it! :D
Date: 11/06/09 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 19
Noooo! No shit hitting fans! ;)
Anywho, I loved David's character in this. He seemed really awesome and it seems like a natural step in Tom and Bill's relationship for them to be introduced. Lovely chapter!
Author's Response: Sorry, sorry...had to happen, unfortunately. I'm really happy you liked David's character, though. I'd been quite nervous about him, to be honest. Thank you so much for your kind words. :D
Date: 11/06/09 09:38 am Title: Chapter 19
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: lol Thank you :)
Date: 11/06/09 04:36 am Title: Chapter 19
Too cute. I wanna see life when Janni gets back, just to see what happens when Tom remembers things like responsibility again. Not that it's ever far from his mind, but he does need to start making money again.
Author's Response: Aw, it's not that Tom hasn't wanted to have a job, but he turned down all his other jobs in favor of the one he lost. And realize, it's only been less than a week since that happened. And now, he has other things to think of. :/
Date: 11/06/09 03:43 am Title: Chapter 19
OH EM GEE NEW CHAPTER *flails*.....ahem ahem..Aw this is just too sweet, Tom is finally realizing Bill and Janni is his life! and Tom mets David heeeh Im looking forward for the next one eeeep
Author's Response: Haha! Thank you! <3