Date: 12/31/09 07:36 am Title: Chapter 22
You and your cliffhangers. D:
Though this chapter was a bit of a filler [which I hope you don't take as an insult, authors seem not to like that word], I adored this chapter. The interactions between Bill and Janni are adorable and I love seeing how he's become attached to her. I noticed that he called Tom and Janni his "family" and I like that he's beginning to apply that term to his relationship with them. My heart aches for them though; I hope something changes so that things will be better for the characters but I would hate for them to have to go through any more hardship. I truly care about your characters, which is rare for me, to tell the truth. There are few stories I can name in which the author made me honestly care and relate to the characters. I hope they have a happy ending. ♥
Date: 12/31/09 05:31 am Title: Chapter 22
Ugh, I can almost feel the angst radiating off this chapter. :(
and even though it was obvious that final blow was coming... gah, nooo~
Date: 12/31/09 03:12 am Title: Chapter 22
Poor Tom, and Bill!
Anjelica should just leave them be! lol
This was a great chapter, I can't wait to find out what happens!
=)
Date: 12/31/09 02:49 am Title: Chapter 22
T_T damn Anjelica! I hope they don't loose the trial or split like Bill thinks they'll need to. But the bill and Janni moments were to cute, you have to do more! :]
Date: 12/31/09 12:46 am Title: Chapter 22
Of course that bitch won't give up easily!! Uuuugghh...-___________-
I love Bill and Janni moments.. I just love those kinds of stuff. HeeeeXDD They're really close now and it's just.. SWEEEEEET..XDD
I don't know up to what extent Bill would do to keep Tom and Janni together. Will he give them up? Will they be able to make it a fair fight or whatever?? I really hate things like those...-____- Ugh..
Date: 12/31/09 12:36 am Title: Chapter 22
no...damn her!!!!!!! poor janni... :'''(
Date: 12/31/09 12:20 am Title: Chapter 22
Fuckin' Anjelica... ugh fuck why? They make such a nice little family. Is Bill going to leave Tom and Janni so Tom could keep Janni? That would be so sad and it would cause so much pain to both Tom and Janni.
I really love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 12/31/09 12:14 am Title: Chapter 22
Bill's interaction with Janni in this chapter is so cute :3 and naaaaaaaw, Anjelica had to ruin the the presh moments, DIAF Anjelica!...:P
OT: I was scrolling down my tracked stories and I came across yours, I hoped that you'll be able to update but then when I refreshed the page and saw yours again, I flailed *-* lol Thank you for updating! I can't wait for the next chapter :))
Date: 12/31/09 12:09 am Title: Chapter 22
OMG I'm gonna kill someone soon! O___O
OOOH THE SUSPENCE!!! God, I think I love you! xD
Janni is the cutest EVER. Period. And you're just so... gah! You write so damn good I can't even put words to it. Well, maybe these four words can help.
YOU ARE MY GOD.
Date: 12/31/09 12:02 am Title: Chapter 22
Oh, that bitch. Argh. Shit. You're going to make it worse for them before it gets better, aren't you? *wibble*
Date: 12/30/09 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 22
can we just spork Anjelica now and get it over with.
Date: 12/30/09 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 22
Eee, I had a great time reading Janni and Bill in this chapter, too! The domestic fluff and the sweet dreams Bill hoped she was having were exactly what I needed to read tonight. ♥ And I know it's got to be a wonderful thing for Tom, too, the fact that the man he loves is so good with the daughter he adores.
Ah, you've got me biting my nails at the ending of this chapter, though. In a fair world there would never be any question whether Tom and Bill would get to keep Janni, but in a realistic world it'll be an uphill battle for them, I'm afraid.
Date: 12/30/09 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 22
God this story always makes me fluttery inside! I love reading about the little family they have, though I'm concerned about Bill's train of thought... ;_;
Date: 12/30/09 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 22
;____; Please tell me Bill's not going to do something stupid and noble like trying to leave for their own good.
Date: 12/25/09 01:14 am Title: Chapter 21
Wow, you let me breath, dear. I was fearing the result of Anjelica's actions, now, I must brace myself for a complicated legal precess, don't I?
Great chap! I did really love the supportive attitude of Bill and the tip of the officer was priceless.
See you soon, Happy Christmas!!
Date: 12/19/09 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 21
lol, I always have problems with predictions, so I'm just going to say I love it n_n (yet again) I hate how I almost find nothing else to say...
soft, cotton tee shirt
So this might be really weird to say, but I love little descriptions like that. I hate when people go into over kill on explaining fashion and all the designers when it doesn't seem needed, and it just doesn't seem to be interesting when someone just says shirt. So I love how you put that in there. Cotton always seems to me like something more comfy, and it makes the atmosphere seem more home-like, if that makes any sense. But then, you go on to say how Janni might learn some not good things, and just the contrast, I love that. XD lol, never thought someone would write so much about a tee shirt... but it just seemed so perfect to me, to not say anything n_n lovely job. :)
Date: 12/18/09 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 21
You know, I love this story more and more each time I read it. I really love it, oh so much! Thank you so much! A chapter for this story is the best x-mas present you could ever get!
Date: 12/16/09 09:01 am Title: Chapter 21
*stabs Anjelica*
Date: 12/15/09 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 21
Oh my god... I can't believe I'm doing this for real. I'm reviewing to someone. My first review ever on this page... o.O GOHS ! And you made me do it. WAY TO GO !
I got this feeling that I have to write something. But now I don't have any idea what I should write. x__x Nice !
This story (fic, what ever... dunno) has something that keeps me reading this on and on all over again and again. I'm not a person who reads like her mind off, so that is something to be proud of. You got me to read !
I just love the way you write everything. You don't rush from subject to another and that is something I like.
Especially the way you write Tom as a father. GOSH ! That's something so perfect. He's a father lots of people would love to have. n__n Just love him !
Not to mention Janni and Bill. Those two are just as cute as Tom.
Janni is the most adorable kid I've ever heard. She's always so happy. Sometimes I have to remind myself that she's just a fiction person because there are times when I just want to hug her and be happu with her. :D She's so damn cute little girl. (And Tom is too perfect dad.)
Oh my God ! You're going to put them to court ? NO WAY ! You can't do that. A COSTUDY BATTLE NONONO ! That is something no one wants to go through. And I can say that because I've been there. IT WAS HORRIBLE ! Don't even want to remember it...
Ah ! This is just perfect and I keep reading this. Maybe I review again, maybe not. Dunno yet. (:
(sorry about the mistakes !)
Date: 12/15/09 02:26 am Title: Chapter 21
OMG yay they got janni back!
I predict, sexy tiems. 8) LOL
I'm looking forward for the next one :D