Date: 01/30/10 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 23
Guhhhh! LOVEEEE.
Author's Response: Thank you! xD
Date: 01/30/10 09:55 am Title: Chapter 23
*sharpening a knife* I am ready to use this you know...on that horrible woman, the man Tom's talking to about a job, a judge...you...
*coughs* I mean, finally! A new chapter :D Yaaaay!!
Author's Response: O.o Well, the man who would be Tom's boss is a nice guy, so no worries. Thank you for reading! :D
Date: 01/30/10 03:47 am Title: Chapter 23
Oh Bill :(
I'm so happy to see Bill cared so much for Janni and Tom, and the thought of losing Janni makes his heart break. And the love making is just fantastic and full of LOVE, I love it!
PS. I SQUELED when I saw this was updated :D thank you!
Author's Response: Oh goodness girl! *blushes* You really make me smile, I hope you know. I know I've talked about it on my journal, having trouble with this chapter, and now you know why. It was really hard to write this. I'm so happy that you enjoyed it and it worked for you. Getting it right totally made the struggle worth it. Thank YOU. <3
Date: 01/30/10 01:07 am Title: Chapter 23
Bill's going to be stupid and leave, thinking it's for the best, isn't he?! =(
That would be so sad!
But as long as he comes back in the end! =)
This was a great update, even though I have a bad feeling about what will happen, lol
I can't wait for more! =)
Author's Response: It would be completely in his character, don't you think? Look how self-sacrificing he was with his father. I know it's not a popular decision, but I'm glad you're still reading. Thank you! :D
Date: 01/30/10 01:05 am Title: Chapter 23
DDD: Why is Bill so sad?? *cries* I don't think I understand.
And my heart swells with the love that Bill has for Janni *-* I actually read that part three times, it was so sweet xD
Author's Response: He's made a decision, one he's been debating for the last couple chapters. There are just little clues around. Aw, and thank you for your words about Bill and Janni. I appreciate hearing that. <3
Date: 01/30/10 12:27 am Title: Chapter 23
oh noes..you had better not make me get the sporks out again.
bill is not leaving is he?
what was that phone call about, that i just know he lied about saying it was david
o_O
Author's Response: *hides from the sporks!*
I'm not telling you when you're holding sporks, woman!
No, it was David. Promise.
>_>
Date: 01/30/10 12:19 am Title: Chapter 23
Oh goodness you updated! So glad. :)
Now I will admit, I feel a bit rusty reading this cause its been awhile, but it was a very good chapter, and beautifully written. Really.
I'm curious to know what Bill has going on. Can't remeber if anything was mentioned in the previous chapter to hint to it, so I may just have to go back and check. But none-the-less, curious.
Makes me sad tho, Bill all torn up on Janni and Tom and what not. Tom too. I think that its unbelievable the way you have Bill act and care for Janni. Its so real and pure, and truly great. :P
Hope you can update again real soon. I always love reading this story.
Brings a smile. :)
Hugs,
Author's Response: Oh yes ma'am, Bill's been thinking about things for a few chapters. There are little clues here and there. He's making some decisions and this day, he came to the biggest decision, one that will change their lives.
It means so much to me when readers tell me exactly what they enjoyed about the chapter or about the story. You did that in telling me about the interaction between Bill and Janni. Thank you! I appreciate hearing it and I'm so glad you're reading my story. *hugs*
Date: 01/29/10 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 23
i'm scared Bill will try to run away....PLEASE don't let Bill run away. It's too sad.
Author's Response: You know, I've spent a lot of time trying to control Bill in this story, and often what happens is Bill does what Bill's gonna do. He's a force to be reckoned with and I just have to try to keep up. Thank you for reading! :D
Date: 01/29/10 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 23
Omg, this chapter. Bill's pain at the beginning was so strong--I was worried he was going to leave them.
And then the sex...girl, that was some of the best sex ever. This line killed me:
He moved subtly at first, using more muscle than motion to caress Tom's cock with moist, satin flesh, and Tom squirmed.
~Iz ded nao~
And the end was so hurty that I'm once again worried Bill is going to try to leave to save Tom from dealing with a battle for Janni. You're killing me!!!
Author's Response: I was so worried about the sex! I was scared it came off as corny and I literally bounced when I read your review! It's just validating to hear words like the ones you've given me, and I thank you. And then end. Wow, that was really hard to write, but it's worth it when you enjoy the story. Thank you again, Jen. <333
Date: 01/29/10 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 23
dude what the hell is wrong with bill T-T. Make me sad to see him sad!
Author's Response: Bill has made a decision that's going to change their lives. He's kind of been working up to it over the last few chapters. It made me sad to write him hurting like that, too. :(
Date: 01/29/10 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 23
Omg I'm so glad that this was updated ! It was beautiful but very sad at the same time... Cant wait to read more :D
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 01/29/10 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 23
Bill, NO. No no no no no, this is NOT the way. ;___; I want them to do this together! If you do it, you'll rip apart your family, and that's exactly what Tom wants to avoid, you stupid! ;___;
Okay, Mel. Name your price. What incentive can I offer to get us the next, uh, THREE chapters soonest? ;_____;
Biiiiiiill, you think you're doing the right thing, but the right thing is you being there, staying with them! *whimper*
Author's Response: Aww *pets* My price is peace. I needs it. And it's elusive cousin, quiet. Barring that, I have to keep writing at work. ;) But I'll do my level best, bb <3
Date: 01/29/10 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 23
I'm so glad you updated. This story is amazing! The amount of selfless love that Bill possessed for Tom and Janni is astounding. It's heartbreaking to read, though. I want Bill to stay but I want Tom to be able to keep Janni. There's got to be a compromise somewhere in there! Haha. Thank you for updating :)
Author's Response: Bill really did find himself the family he never really had. Writing this breaks my heart. I love that the story touches you. Thank you. :)
Date: 01/29/10 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
That's good, I'll definitely have to re-read it. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the second chance. I hope you liked it :)
Date: 01/29/10 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 23
Oh no... Waaahh.. I got a bad feeling about this but please I hope I'm wrong.. Bill's not leaving, is he???O__O His desperation is killing me..T^T
They're like a perfect family already but with the custody thinging it makes things a bit sad - especially Bill's thoughts. Waaaaaaahhh please don't leave them Bill.T^T
So glad you updated!!XD Ayeeeeeee*mwahhuggZz*
Author's Response: I'm really glad to be able to update, too! This chapter was really hard to write and I was stuck on it for a couple weeks. Thank you so much for reading! :D
Date: 01/29/10 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 23
awww....janni's grandma is a bitch
Author's Response: It does seem like it, doesn't it? But I think Anjelica is doing what she thinks is right. We just don't happen to agree with her. ;)
Date: 01/29/10 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 23
Oh dear... you have some formatting problems with your quotation marks. D:
Author's Response: Ah, yes I did. I was having some trouble fixing it but it's fine now. Thanks for letting me know. :)
Date: 01/29/10 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 23
I can tell right off the bat that something isn't right with Bill but I don't know what it is and it's scaring me. :/ I can't place what exactly is making him so sad. I thought, possibly, just the thought of Tom having a job again, maybe Bill thought Tom wouldn't need him around anymore. That was my first idea but I'm probably wrong.
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry for scaring you. Your guess is part of it, but not all. I'm glad you're still reading, honey. <3
Date: 01/29/10 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 23
(Oops, just saw your chapter note, sorry!)
Author's Response: It's okay. I'd rather have someone say than take the chance it would stay that way and I might not know. So thank you <3
Date: 01/29/10 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 23
It could just be me, but all the quotations and the like are appearing as r1, and r0 and etc... It's hard to read D: I hope it's not just me.
Author's Response: Oh no, it wasn't you at all. I'm not even sure what happened except nothing I was doing was fixing it! lol I was going a little nuts. But it's better now. :)