Date: 02/24/10 01:24 am Title: Chapter 24
sporks is all Ive got to say to you!
whose standing behind him? we know its not Bill...his mom maybe?
damnit..sporks, nice shiny silver sporks.
Date: 02/24/10 01:02 am Title: Chapter 24
;___; I know. *hugs you* It really hurts. I know why Bill did it, and yet all I want is for Bill to come back, so they can face it together. And yet somehow...I have a feeling that it's Simone behind him, and not Bill.
I'm so sad.
Date: 02/16/10 07:04 am Title: Chapter 23
I think I'm going to be sad soon...
Date: 02/01/10 03:25 am Title: Chapter 23
Was mermaid magis the barbie thing? Cause i'm sure i had it when i was little. Lol. Great chapter. I'm worried about bill though. Hopefully he gets better.
Author's Response: You know, it might have been. When I was thinking of the toy for her to play with, the thing about the tail changing colors just sorta popped into my head and I may have gotten it from a television commercial. Thank you for reading and for telling me what you think. :D
Date: 01/31/10 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 23
ok i get it...Bill feelslike it is ALLhis fault and so he is about to leave...if he told tom why was the real reason he wanted to leave tom wouldnt let him...so hell act like he is too young for janni and that he wants to be a model...but in reality he is leaving so tom could win the custidity....but still there is something missing....and i cant wait until i read the next chapter and find out what is going to exactly happend...oh i cant wait.
lovley chapter...the way the love each other...*drools* ....and i like the fact that Bill likes janni so much...zat iz kool!! :FDD
Author's Response: I don't think Bill is quite that deceptive to lie to Tom. It's not really in Bill's nature, you know? But I will definitely get the next chapter done as soon as I can. Thank you so much for reading and for giving me your thoughts. I do appreciate it. :D
Date: 01/31/10 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 23
...Bill's leaving, isn't he?
This is so beautifully written! You left tears in my eyes...what a talented writer you are. Heartbreakingly awesome.
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry. I didn't mean to bring you tears, but I do appreciate that the chapter made you feel so much. Thank you so much for reading and for giving me your thoughts. :)
Date: 01/31/10 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh lordy... PLEASE dont make bill leave tom... my heart would be broken. I love love LOOOOOVE your series! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D
Date: 01/31/10 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 23
awww i dont think sex has ever been so beautiful.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. :D
Date: 01/30/10 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 23
God, god god! You're making Bill leave Tom, aren't you? OMG I'll cry I promise you I will. Is Bill maybe thinking than by disappearing himself of the picture everuthing will be fine? Isn't he thinking of he pain he'll cause on, both, Tom and Janni?
Ok, I'm panicking and maybe you're not doing such a horrible thing...
I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
Hugs!
Author's Response: *hugs* I will get the next chapter done as soon as I can. Thank you for reading! <3
Date: 01/30/10 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 23
im terrified bills gonna try to leave! he cant! silly billaaaa! tomi and janni are just too cuteee, gahh luff
Author's Response: lol Bill is definitely sometimes a Silly Billy. But he loves his family. Thank you for reading!
Date: 01/30/10 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 23
DDD:
I seriously had to wipe my eyes because I got so teary. I think I know where this is going, and I want to smack the shit out of Bill because he'll only make things worse. I have to know what happens next!!!!
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry. Really, this was incredibly hard to write. I would get sick to my stomach whenever I would work on it. But you know Bill; he has to do what he thinks will be best for his family. I will update as soon as I can, though I warn you, it's likely to get worse before it gets better. Thank you for your thoughts on this! <3
Date: 01/30/10 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hello ^^
First I'm German so I'm not really the best in writing reviews in english xD But try the best! :D
I just read the 23 chapters of this story and I've fallen in love! I totally love love love your Tom, your Bill and most of all JANNY! I love the thought of Tom having such a lovely daughter, of him being such a lovely dad. My heart melted away the last hours!
Can't wait to read more :]
Author's Response: Hello there! Your English was just fine, by the way. xD I'm so thrilled to have a new reader and I'm even happier you enjoyed the story and wanted to tell me what you though. It's great to hear that! Thank you so very much, and I hope you will enjoy the rest. :D
Date: 01/30/10 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 23
I think Bill is going to try to do something silly and I only hope Tom can talk him out of it before he gets to far with the idea. thanks for another great update!! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: And thank you for reading! I do appreciate hearing what you think and thank you for telling me. :D
Date: 01/30/10 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 23
love it! update!
Date: 01/30/10 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 23
so sadd!! Dx but i loved it!
Author's Response: I'm sorry, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you! :D
Date: 01/30/10 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 23
bill can't leave dont let him do that plz...im crying now look what u did plz more :)
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry. *wipes tears* Thank you for reading. :)
Date: 01/30/10 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 23
This chapter was painful, yet beautiful to read. I feel so sorry for them but will you please, please tell Bill that leaving Tom and Janni isn't the answer because that's what he's planning to do, isn't it? Silly, silly boy. *shakes head* I absolutely adore those two sweathearts. *squishes you*
Author's Response: You know Bill, though; he will do whatever he feels needs to be done in order for his family to stay happy. Even if it breaks his heart. I'm so glad you are enjoying the characters, darling. Thank you! <3
Date: 01/30/10 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 23
whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat!? I've been trying to write something in here but my fingers are just stuck on top of my key board not knowing what to write!
what's going on with Bill!? O.O pelase don't make him leave Tom and Janni!
=S Thiss will make me restless tonight!
Author's Response: LOL I've had that stuck fingers problem before. xD And aw, don't worry too much. Bill is just doing what he thinks he must, you know? Thank you for reading. :D
Date: 01/30/10 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
S'okay. I'll just wait for your next post :]
Date: 01/30/10 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
nein! Now you got me freaking out!
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry :)