Date: 04/17/10 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 25
*cries happy tears* This was everything I couldn't let myself hope it would be. ♥ Thank you so much. I'm so sorry that Tom had to feel that pain and doubt...but so, SO happy that Bill is making a stand.
Author's Response: Oh thank goodness! I'm very relieved that this lived up to your hopes and that you enjoyed it. That means so much to me, Tay. ♥
I really didn't want to put Tom through all that, either, believe me. What an awful end that would be to his first real relationship since his wife died. Thank goodness Bill couldn't leave, and Janni never even had to know about the whole thing. :)
Date: 04/17/10 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 25
Oh my god Mel, I thought I was going to have to smack you over the head with a bat. D: I was so scared Bill was actually going to leave!!!! Don't ever do that to me again!!!
I loved this chapter so much and I am so glad they are going to be fighting for Janni. I couldn't stop awing and wibbling at the end. *squishes you and this fic super tight*
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry, honey. Originally, he was going to be gone for a while but truthfully, I sat down to write it and Bill just wasn't happy with that idea. So things changed a little and cut out some of the angst. I really just couldn't torture them so much!
I'm so pleased you enjoyed the chapter, and thank you so much for letting me know. It does mean so much to me. <333
Date: 04/17/10 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 25
Ooooh *flails* I wanna just cuddle them all. I really do. I think I've melted from the cute.
Author's Response: Haha awesome! I thought it was awful sweet but I figured y'all could handle it. :D
Date: 04/14/10 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 24
Who the hell is THAT? I near about cried reading this. It was heartbreaking.
Date: 04/06/10 10:04 am Title: Chapter 24
NOOO oh gee you sure know how to make a girl sad with your cliff hangers
Date: 03/20/10 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 24
It hurt so much to read. I was waiting for a big boom, and here it is, and it kind of hurts to read, yet I love it so much. I was a little concerned about Bill's behavior "I love you, remember that," are never that happy of parting words, and with Tom making the meal, that made me start to cry. How you worded everything, the lead up to it all, it just, well, it was easily told that Bill wouldn't come. And oh, so so sad. :'( But I love it, you know? *hug* It was beautiful to read. :)
Date: 03/11/10 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 24
update... soon? Pwease?? *gets on knees* PWEASE??
Date: 03/02/10 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 24
omg tears came to my eyes
that was so perfect the
way you wrote it out i was
at the edge of my seat lolz
i hope things turn out all right
good job on writing this up
cant wait for the next chapter
Date: 02/28/10 03:55 am Title: Chapter 24
MOARMOARMOARMOARMOAR!!!!
Date: 02/27/10 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 24
That was so sad, and little Janni clearly knew something was up. I think they'll work it out though. They're going to have to move away where Anjelica can't get to them. I look forward to the next part, even though that'll probably be really sad too. :(
Date: 02/26/10 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 24
Oh my gosh. I hate this. I am crying.
I mean you're still a very spectacular writer and your work is amazing but this chapter sent a pang through my heart.
I really hope the voice behind him was bill. But it probably isn't. It's probably his mom.
Date: 02/26/10 08:48 am Title: Chapter 24
Ho my Gosh, that's so painful! I juste want to cry... I hope Bill will come back, that's just too sad! They were happy, despite of the problems with Anjelica. I can't wait to read the next chapter, I love this fiction so much!
Date: 02/25/10 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 24
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! why did you stop!!! OH GOD!!! you drive me crazy *sniffles* i luff this story so much... please please PLEASE update soooooooon :)
Date: 02/25/10 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 24
NO! You so can't leave us hanging like that! And yup, you made me cry...again :) I'm just saying, you have a way with words. Ah, beautiful!
Date: 02/25/10 11:15 am Title: Chapter 24
omg omg omg. No way. You can't just stop there! That's not faaaaiiirrr!!!!
:(
But i love it nonetheless
Date: 02/25/10 10:08 am Title: Chapter 24
God, I don't even know what to say. Other than I totally get where Bill is coming from, but it's not necessary. Tom can win. THEY can win. That is Bill there at the end, right? You wouldn't be THAT cruel. haha But seriously...I'm torn. I can't wait for the next update.
Date: 02/25/10 09:50 am Title: Chapter 23
Okay, I finally got a chance to read this one a few nights ago (the night before you posted the NEXT update lol) and I wanted to comment on it before I read the next one saying that it felt a lot like goodbye sex. But...you wouldn't do that to them, right? I'd love to be wrong in this case. I know he's thinking of Tom and Janni rather than himself, but, really. I'd hate to see Tom have to kick his butt for even thinking that. Now, I guess I'll go read the next and hope, hope, hope that I'm so completely wrong. =D
Date: 02/25/10 08:27 am Title: Chapter 24
Aw, what an emotional chapter! My heart broke for Bill and Tom both. I hope they can work through it. I loved this, though. :)
Date: 02/25/10 02:01 am Title: Chapter 24
wow, i think that was really well written! I'm just hoping its Bill behind Tom!!!
Date: 02/25/10 12:50 am Title: Chapter 24
it's bill that said tom right? it has to be!!! ugh billa you're waaay to nice for your own good. -_-*