Date: 04/18/10 10:27 am Title: Chapter 25
awWW, i'M SO GLAD Bill came back! I hope they have a happy ending.
Author's Response: I'm glad he came back, too. It was iffy there for a while. >.> Thank you for reading and giving me your thoughts! :)
Date: 04/18/10 07:09 am Title: Chapter 25
OMG I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS GAAAAAAAAHHHHHH *glomps*
LOL I knew it!!XDDD I knew Bill came back (from the last chapter)!! YAY YAY YAY... It was so heartbreaking from the last chapter when Tom found Bill gone. I'm so glad he came back and didn't have enough courage to totally leave. And I definitely love this chapteeeeeeeerrrr...XDD It's just so heartmelting.. Aaaawww damn it. And it only proves their relationship is not about this physical attraction and all about sex. They truly care for each other waaaaaahhhh... They're in love and that's just wonderful. And I was teary-eyed with Janni's drawing OMG...T____T It's going to be a difficult battle, with the norms/morals the society have. I wish they would win the case. Heeeeeee...
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH REALLY, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS UPDATE!!! *huggles*
Author's Response: LOL! Omg girl, you made me grin so hard. I'm just tickled that you enjoyed the chapter so much. Thank you so much for letting me know! ♥
Date: 04/18/10 06:06 am Title: Chapter 25
i love janni's picture. its just perfect.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 04/18/10 05:36 am Title: Chapter 25
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa why is it so cuteeee omfg it is so fucking cute and sweet for word I LOVE THIS ONE SO MUCH
sorry for my fangirling moment ;_;
Author's Response: LOL It's okay, I kind of enjoyed your moment there. Thank you so much <3
Date: 04/18/10 05:02 am Title: Chapter 25
I had tears in my eyes when Bill left last chapter and I'm so glad he came back in this one!
Now I've got tears from Bill realizing he wants the three of them to be a family.
Great story! Love it! :]
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Sad tears are best followed up by happy ones, I think. :)
Date: 04/18/10 03:30 am Title: Chapter 25
That's so sweet, I almost cried! Janni is so cute... Bill took the right decision by staying. I really enjoy this chapter, as always. Hope you'll update sooner this time! *winks*
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Really, I couldn't do it any other way. Thank you for reading, and I promise I will try to get the next chapter done sooner. :)
Date: 04/18/10 03:10 am Title: Chapter 25
Awwwww. OMG woman!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT. The wait, it was worth it. ♥
Author's Response: Haha yay! I'm glad you think so, thank you! ♥
Date: 04/18/10 01:56 am Title: Chapter 25
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MY chest tightened at the picture!!! And I really loved it when Tom said "our daughter" *-* I just...
>.> I think I say almost the same thing every time, but... I love your writing and the detail and the plot line and *-* I could go on for a while... You might get sick of the list though lol. Or do you feel flattered? xD Cuz you should.
Author's Response: Aw, you made me blush, your words are so sweet. Thank you so much for that. :D
Date: 04/18/10 01:37 am Title: Chapter 25
Oh, you have no idea what relief this chapter has brought. Thank goodness :)
Author's Response: *grins* I had a little bit of an idea. :) Thank you for reading!
Date: 04/18/10 01:28 am Title: Chapter 25
Thank god Bill didn't leave! That would have been tragic! lol
Very sweet chapter, I can't wait for the next =)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try to get it to you sooner. :)
Date: 04/18/10 01:08 am Title: Chapter 25
yay..Bill came back.
Author's Response: Yeah, he really couldn't stay away. Thanks for reading, darlin'. <3
Date: 04/18/10 01:03 am Title: Chapter 25
This was perfect!I really didn`t think that Bill would come back so soon but that made me extremely happy.I love this story so much,please don`t let us wait so long for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I promise I will do my very best. I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter! Thank you. :)
Date: 04/18/10 12:39 am Title: Chapter 25
T.T i wept. it was so sad and so happy at the same time! i hope you update soon! n.n
Author's Response: Aw, I didn't mean to make you cry, but I really am glad you enjoyed it so much. Thank you! :D
Date: 04/18/10 12:13 am Title: Chapter 25
Awww, I'm glad to see he's fighting. I was actually really worried he'd leave for good, because I understand how he's afraid to cause Tom the pain of losing Janni. He doesn't want Tom to both become a pariah and lose his daughter.
And I like how Tom didn't take him back right away. He gave Bill a little shit, and asked for promises, or at the very least, assurance, and I think that was extremely realistic (at least, that's what I'd do)
Author's Response: Originally, I did have him running off to NY and Tom had to chase him, but in the end, I couldn't do it. And poor Tom. I would be exactly the same; I'd have to ask some questions and make sure that Bill was in it for the long haul. I'm so very glad that felt realistic to you, too! Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me. :D
Date: 04/18/10 12:04 am Title: Chapter 4
Janni is the cutest thing ever! She's so sweet!
Author's Response: I think she's a sweetheart, though not moreso than a real girl. I hope that I'm writing her realistically enough! :D
Date: 04/17/10 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 25
Omg I’m so happy that Bill wasn’t able to leave ! Poor Tom is so scared, I feel very bad for him, but at least Bill is still there to prove him that he’ll never leave again! Awww Janni is so cute, I had tears in my eyes when Bill saw her drawing ! I’m glad that Bill decided to fight for his family!
Author's Response: I think that Bill just couldn't give them up. He thinks he's being selfish by not being able to leave but I don't think he realizes what it would have done to Tom and especially to Janni if he'd have really left. And you know, maybe it's time Bill learned that it's okay to fight for what you want and what you need, rather than just give up like he did with his modeling career. :D I'm very happy you enjoyed the chapter! Thank you for letting me know. :D
Date: 04/17/10 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 25
YAY!!!! you updated!! I love this story so much, its so beautiful!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :D
Date: 04/17/10 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 25
Oh my god, I was so relieved when Bill came back, I literally let out the breath I'd been holding for the first few paragraphs. Sometimes it's like I'm living this story instead of just reading it! And I love how you brought the intensity of Bill's leaving, and his coming back, and their conversation right through to the sex. That was hot, and desperate, and gorgeous, guh. They needed that and I think your readers did, too. Excellently done. ;)
By the way, the last section melted my heart completely. Janni's such a sweetheart, and she knows who her family is. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for a happy ending for Tom and Bill and their little girl!
Author's Response: That was a really wicked cliffhanger, I know, and man, I felt bad about it. (But not enough to change it, of course) I'd hoped that the beginning of this chapter would make readers feel the way you did and that the love-making wouldn't seem incongruous. I'm absolutely thrilled that you enjoyed it! Thank you so much, Kish. ♥
Date: 04/17/10 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 25
I wasn't able to review last time, so I was hoping to make this one extra special. Unfortunately between the HUGE relief, the intense love-making scene, and the last scene with Janni's picture, I'm just speechless. I loved this chapter so much!
Author's Response: Thank you! Seriously, thank you. Because I know that feeling of being so overwhelmed by a chapter that I can't even think of how I'm going to get my words together to tell the author how I felt about it. Just knowing that's how you felt about this chapter is a wonderful feeling and a huge compliment. I'm so very happy you enjoyed it. <333
Date: 04/17/10 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 25
YES! I KNEW IT!
*glares at how long i had to wait for this* ... meany *pout*
... IT WAS WORTH THE WAIT THOUGH!
Author's Response: Haha! That obvious? And aw, I'm sorry about the wait. I'll try to do be quicker with the next one. I'm really happy it was worth the wait, though. Thank you! :D