Date: 04/20/10 11:31 am Title: Chapter 6
i love how Janni is, and Tom too! They're all such wonderful characters, and of course Janni still makes messes, she's only a teeny child! And so cute ^^ i like Simone, i think you've characterised her so well, everything just fits together and makes wonderful sense :)
Author's Response: I'm really pleased you liked the characterizations and realism in the chapter. That was very much what I was going for! :D
Date: 04/20/10 10:34 am Title: Chapter 25
This was one hell of a roller coaster chapter when it comes to feelings. First you had me crying my eyes out, then it got all hot and steamy and then you had me back in tears again. lol. I'm so glad Bill came back and I know they are going to win this fight and be a happy family forever :) *loves*
Author's Response: Good! lol I wanted you to feel all those things, though I didn't really mean to make you cry. But I'm so glad you enjoyed it, honey! I hope everything is good with you and the kids are doing well. <333
Date: 04/20/10 05:48 am Title: Chapter 5
oh it was just perfect! So much fun to read and so well written and not overly picturesque, just perfect! Xx
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 04/20/10 04:41 am Title: Chapter 4
ah i definitely didn't mind meeting Janni a bit more! She's so sweet! But i sure can't wait for the date ^^ i loved Bill's interactions with Janni, seems he's managed to get his head around things a little more :)
Author's Response: Janni is so much fun to write. She's a little bit based on my own daughter, who is just the sweetest girl. Thank you for reading! <3
Date: 04/20/10 04:28 am Title: Chapter 3
i like Tom as a father, it's sweet and nice to read, and all the little fatherly idiosyncrasies were lovely :) i love this very much, it's so sweet and enjoyable to read!
Date: 04/19/10 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awww that was such a sweet chapter! And yes, they are definitely very fun to read, I love both their characters and I can't wait to find out more about both of them :) I really love your writing, it's absolutely amazing and so nice to read. This is beautiful so far and I'm sure will remain so throughout :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the wonderful compliments! I'm thrilled you're enjoying that characters. Thank you for the feedback! :D
Date: 04/19/10 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
I've seen this around THF for ages now and why I didn't start reading until now is beyond me. I adore this, it's absolutely fabulous already and I can't wait to see where this goes ^___^
Author's Response: It's always great to get new readers and I'm glad you're reading now. I'm glad you liked the first chapter, thank you! :D
Date: 04/19/10 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 25
*re-reading* Janni has blue eyes in this chapter, but she has Tom's brown eyes three chapters ago... *slyly pokes*
Author's Response: You won't believe how I headdesked when I got this notification. Of course, you're absolutely right and I can't even believe I missed that! I don't know what I was thinking but thank you for poking me about it! <333
Date: 04/19/10 09:24 am Title: Chapter 25
i'm so glad he couldn't leave, thanks for updating
Author's Response: You're very welcome! Thank you for reading. :D
Date: 04/19/10 12:12 am Title: Chapter 25
LOVE IT! UPDATE!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, thank you! :D
Date: 04/18/10 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 25
I'm glad Bill came back I was so worried he totally left
Date: 04/18/10 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 25
I'm glad Bill came back I was so worried he totally left
Author's Response: I'm glad he came back, too. Originally, he was going to run off to New York! O.o
Date: 04/18/10 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 25
Oh, the magical power of children.
Author's Response: Most definitely. :D
Date: 04/18/10 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 25
Oh I love you!!! Now, oficially, you're my heroine! Bill's back!
I have to agree with Tom, it takes far more courage to stay and fight than to just leave.
staying was the right desition, specially considering the love Janni feels for Bill. He has now receive a tangible evidence of it.
Thank you so much for the chapter.
Hugs!!
PS: Btw, I will add you on twitter, is that ok?
Bye!
Author's Response: Oh yeah, I think it takes more courage to fight, but you know Bill; he's always just given up what he wanted for others. This time, I think there was too much at stake, not just Tom's and Janni's happiness, but his own. It was too much and he had to stay.
You're very welcome, and thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me! And sure, you can add me on twitter. I don't use it terribly often, but some. :D
Date: 04/18/10 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 25
Awwwww :D I'm soo happy Bill came back, if he hadn't, oh dear... ^^"
“I drawed our family. Do you like it?”
Love that line, it's so adorable, and it makes me smile whenever I reread it, because just imagining Janni saying it to Bill, I go, "Awwww. :D" Another beautiful chapter. :)
Author's Response: Well, you know, she was being so naughty in the morning, maybe she wanted to do something nice. That's what I'm thinking anyway. ;) I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you! :D
Date: 04/18/10 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 25
I read this very late last night, when I was too tired to leave a coherent review, so I had to come back today to tell you how much I loved this chapter Mel. When Tom said "our daughter" my heart just melted.
I was glad that the situation resolved itself the way it did--with Bill coming back on his own without having to be chased, and with Tom able to look beyond his hurt and anger to see why Bill did it and not drag it out into a long fight.
And I loved that they came together physically at the end--the sex was hot, of course, but it had a real intensity to it and raw emotion at how close they'd come to losing each other. I enjoyed this a lot :)
Author's Response: I can't even tell you what it means to me that you enjoyed this so much, Jen. You're like my writing barometer, you know? ♥
Originally, Bill was supposed to run off to NY and Tom had to chase him, but no matter how I tried to write it, they just wouldn't let me do that. I've learned not to argue with the twins. ;) And I'm so glad that the love-making felt like that for you. I was worried that some people wouldn't understand that why was there, like maybe their relationship was all about sex, so I'm thrilled it felt so right to you.
Thank you so, so much for reading this and for your feedback. It makes me incredibly happy. ♥
Date: 04/18/10 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 25
This is so sweet! Bill and Tom are so in love. It will be a tough road but the truth will always win one way or the other.
Author's Response: At least in fanfic world, the truth usually wins. They really need each other, all three of them. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts! :D
Date: 04/18/10 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 25
Bill came back! Such a sweet chapter! It was for sure worth the wait!
Date: 04/18/10 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 25
Bill came back! Such a sweet chapter! It was for sure worth the wait!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so! Thank you. :D