Date: 06/18/10 07:05 am Title: Chapter 27
Oh god! Yay! I'm so happy for Tom, Bill and Janni. :D this was so sweet. yay
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D
Date: 06/18/10 06:27 am Title: Chapter 27
Ughh, I'm crying. lol This had to have been my favorite chapter by far, out of all of them. I'm guessing you're not planning a sequel? That's okay, too, I suppose- not to ruin a good thing. You must be a mother. I hope I'm correct, because the way you write about Tom loving Janni is something that I can't write about. I've tried and I've tried, but I just because I am no where NEAR being able to have kids. (I'm only 17) I can't get it right. I guess you'd need a real mother's touch in order to write something this fabulous and I totally commend you for that. This story opened me up to slash and now I'm a slash reading fiend! I loved this story from day one and I thank you for writing it and publishing it on this site. I can't wait for the epilogue and any other story that comes from you!
Author's Response: Aww, while I didn't intend to make anyone cry, I'm kinda not sorry. Just because it means that the chapter really moved you and that's extremely flattering! And no, I'm not planning a sequel, but as you may have seen, I do have a few Janni cookies in mind. ;)
Yes, I am a mother; I have two children of my own and three stepchildren, all teenagers (my oldest is older than you. O.o). So yes, I've been through Janni's age with five kids, so I had lots of experience to draw from. :)
This story opened you up to slash? Wow, that's amazing and also very flattering. Thank you so, so much. I really appreciate your kindness. :D
Date: 06/18/10 04:43 am Title: Chapter 27
Awh awh awh awh awh awh awh.
This story is so touching!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 06/18/10 03:33 am Title: Chapter 27
I had a pretty good feeling that this was how it was going to turn out, but I am still so relieved! lol.
This has been one of my favorite stories since I first discovered this site, and although I am sad to see it ending, I am also very happy with how it turned out. This was such an amazing story, you did such an amazing job, and it was absolutly my pleasure to read it. I am looking forward to the epilogue, and to read more from you in the future :)
Author's Response: I threw enough angst at you, for sure, but I couldn't end the story with Janni being taken away. It just wouldn't be right!
Oh wow, thank you so, so much for the kind words. That means a lot to me to hear. :D
Date: 06/18/10 03:20 am Title: Chapter 27
yay!! the way it should be! awesome judge, very well put.
Author's Response: Definitely the way it should be. Thank you so much! <3
Date: 06/18/10 03:04 am Title: Chapter 27
:D So glad Tom and Bill get to keep Janni!
Such a happy ending! Can't wait for the epilogue! :D
Author's Response: I just couldn't take Janni away from them. :D Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it!
Date: 06/18/10 02:51 am Title: Chapter 27
OMG WOMAN!!!!!1 I LOVE YOU! SFM! ♥
Author's Response: Well, that's a damn good thing, 'cause I love you, sfm, too! lol ♥
Date: 06/18/10 01:39 am Title: Chapter 27
AWWW!!! YYYAAAYYY!!! super duper happy that Tom got to keep his lil lady! But i am not going to lie, alil sad-no, VERY sad- that the next chapter is the epilogue
Author's Response: I just couldn't take Tom's girl away from him, you know? Thank you for reading! :D
Date: 06/18/10 01:32 am Title: Chapter 27
Ohh that was brilliant darling *smooshes* I am grinning from ear to ear but my eyes are swimming with tears. So so happy for Tom, Bill and Janni, they belong together. You wrote the courtroom scene so amazingly realistic, the witness testimonies and the lawyer, just awesome. Loved it Mel *kisses*
Author's Response: Thank you, honey! I'm just so pleased it read right to you. <333
Date: 06/18/10 01:02 am Title: Chapter 27
God I love you XD I need to write down that little testimony about religion, because I am so sick of people in my school being all prejudiced. You're a fantabulistic writer and I'm so enamored with this story.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much, darling girl. <333
Date: 06/18/10 12:43 am Title: Chapter 27
For starters, I'm always pleased to see when you have updated. brings a little cheer up in me lol.
I had no doubt that Tom would get to keep his Janni, but I still had some fear in how things would go about. And the little nagging thought that you can do anything kept bothering me. But I pushed it aside.
I love how you slip it in there like its totally normal, that Janni is Tom and Bill's, because really it is normal, they are a family now. :)
I'm pleasantly happy with this chapter lol. I always am.
I'm looking forward to the epilogue already, and I know it'll be good. :D
Hugs,
Author's Response: I so could have done anything there but, in the end, I really couldn't. There was only one outcome that would have been okay for me, and that was for those men to keep their daughter. The only way it should be. :D But it was fun to torture y'all. >.>
I wondered how many readers would notice that, but that was exactly why I put it in there; they are a family and Janni belongs with both of them. :) I'm really glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you so much for the great review!
Date: 06/18/10 12:34 am Title: Chapter 27
Oh dear Lady, I can breathe now!!!
*finally relaxes and sheds happy tears*
Sorry, Angelica. I know you tried, but you can't take his daughter away from him without killing them both!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you, sweetheart, for making me smile. <3
Date: 06/18/10 12:03 am Title: Chapter 27
suck this one anjelica!! xD
Author's Response: LOL! Perfect, thank you! <3
Date: 06/17/10 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 27
aww yay!! the judge didnt even have to go back to his chambers to think about it...really there was nothing to think about.
great job!!
Author's Response: Yep, no deliberations necessary. Thank you, bb! <3
Date: 06/17/10 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 27
Did you come up with the Bibles laws argument or did you read this somewhere because I have never heard it before? I think your story has been great. Very well written.
Author's Response: No, ma'am, I didn't make that up. The only thing I made up were the character names and Prince George University. I looked up all the testimony referring to Bible chapters, along with the interpretations, so everything there is real. Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 06/17/10 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 27
ksjlhgadf I swear I was as nervous as Tom, going into the court proceedings! Proceedings that you wrote amazingly well, by the way. I felt like I was sitting there watching the whole time, and my fingers were literally crossed right before the judge made his decision. And, yeah, I totally did a fistpump and said "YES!" at the verdict.
Thank you so much for posting this today. You always have fantastic timing; these chapters so often come when I need a pick-me-up. ♥
Author's Response: I was so nervous writing the court proceedings that I rewrote them three times! lol I'm so relieved they turned out well. And you seriously crossed your fingers? Haha YES! See, now that's just awesome. I'm glad to know I often post when you need it...most. >.> Thank you for the kind words! ♥
Date: 06/17/10 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 27
Awww ! They deserve to be happy, I'm so glad it ended well for them!
As a Law student, it was a very interesting chapter to read :) Really good job with that, can't wait for the epilogue !
Author's Response: This actually really tickled me to hear. I'm so glad that you thought I did a good job with it. Thank you so much! :D
Date: 06/16/10 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 26
I'm actually scared of the next chapter. Since you didn't give any indication of the social workers' last thoughts it made me nervous lol
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry. I expect to update by the end of the week or so, if that helps. :D
Date: 06/12/10 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 26
ARGH! Cliffhanger! DNW!
Secondly, I love the story. I like the way you write Bill, A LOT. And tbh I can't explain why, which sucks, but jsyk you know :D
Author's Response: lol aw, sorry about the cliffhanger. I'm so glad you like the story, though, especially that you like how Bill is written. I feel much more comfortable writing from Tom's POV, so hearing that is very reassuring. Thank you! ♥
Date: 06/10/10 09:41 am Title: Chapter 26
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRR!!!!!! is all i have to say.
Author's Response: lol thank you. I'll do my best. :)