Date: 06/04/09 06:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh god! I am so deffy going to track this at least! This was amazing! I loved it! No shoot the tracking, this is going to favs!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! <3
Date: 06/04/09 05:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Ah, so this is the AU Bill/Tom you were talking about? Even though it's just started, I know it's going to be great. :) I don't believe in love at first sight, even for these two, but man, when Tom first saw Bill and his reaction... I couldn't breathe. XD Anyway, love the start of this and I am definitely looking forward to more!
Author's Response: It is, yes. I know, it took me forever to post. But...I got preoccupied. :p
I'm really glad you're liking it. Thank you!
Date: 06/04/09 04:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my goodness! I first saw this posted on LJ all over the place but was waiting to read it until a little later in the evening but then just now I was browsing through the recent stories here and saw that you'd posted it here! I have to be honest, I squealed immediately, flailed a little and dove right in.
I can't say why I knew I would love this right away but I definitely do. There's just something about this kind of story that hits all the right buttons for me. And boy have you nailed them right on the head.
I'm so excited for more I can barely stand it. :) Plus, the way you write their characters, so far, is wonderful and very real. Love, love, love it.
Author's Response: Oh, I did kind of spam LJ pretty bad with this, huh? lol oops. Oh well, I figured all at once was better. But THF is pretty much my home, so I had to definitely post here, too. :)
I'm really excited that you liked this! "Closing in on the L Word" is one of my favorite stories and knowing that you like one of mine is really very flattering! Thank you so much for the kind words. Truly, it means a lot to me. <3
Date: 06/04/09 01:21 am Title: Chapter 1
this was about time ^^ can't keep goodness like this away from the public for too long!
I remember when I read this back in October, but reading it know, I discovered so many things I had completely forgotten about ,p like how cute it is of Gustav to back Tom up and say Bill is hot, and Tom and the ketchup, and of course the 'pick up my girl' comment, although when I read it I didn't know it was his daughter he was talking about ,)
still love this, hon, and I know everyone else will, too!
much love
Author's Response: Lucy! *tackles* I thought you'd be off to school already! I'm so glad you came to read this again. I showed it to you before anyone and I don't think you saw it after beta. Still, October...man, it sounds like a long time ago, doesn't it?
You are too sweet to me, babe, and I can't thank you enough. Have the loveliest day at school, okay? Love you so. <333
Date: 06/04/09 12:45 am Title: Chapter 1
I like it a lot :]
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear it, thank you! :D
Date: 06/03/09 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think this is amazing, actually. I saw the summary and instantly got interested. :) I'd love to have move of this. ^_^
Author's Response: Oh awesome! I'm glad you like it. I was really nervous about it, but I think that's just me! I sure hope you'll like the rest, too. Thank you so much. :D
Date: 06/03/09 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh :) it seems a good start :) oh course, this is just the first chapter, the next could make it amazing, or fall through :) but right now, I'm seeing this as being great :) especially since you've been working on this one for so long :) There are so many little hints, and different little things shoved into here, it makes me want to find out what they all mean, and all about Tomi's girl :) I have to say, the little girl on the banner is so cute :) So let's see where you take it yes? :) lol *squeeze* good luck :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far! I actually haven't been working on it all this time, it's just that this chapter was written back in October. Chapter two is much more recent. I just got busy in between. XD
This was a really great review, and I thank you for the kind words. :D
Date: 06/03/09 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
i really like it! this is a very interesting story, and well written too!
Author's Response: Thank you! I so appreciate hearing that. :D
Date: 06/03/09 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm interested in reading what is going to happen next, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it :D
Date: 06/03/09 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this so far :D
Very sweet, and realistic, too. In some fics, Bill would've given Tom his phone number right off the bat, or Tom would've made some type of move...
but I'm glad they didn't. =] This looks as though it's going to be very good.
Author's Response: I'm really glad you're liking it! Thank you so much, girl. :D
Date: 06/03/09 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
What I really like about this story, is that it seems like it's going to be sweet and genuine. I already adore the characters you created, and it's only the first chapter! I really can't wait to see how this develops!
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that you're enjoying these characters! I want to make them and this story as realistic as possible, and your words are very encouraging. Thank you so much, I do appreciate your kindness. :)
Date: 06/03/09 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
aweeee, this was SO adorable. I smiled throughout the whole thing!.
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that, thank you! :D